Chapter 07 - Designs and church Spoiler: Read Another year had passed, and Allen was now 14 years old. He had become a charming youth, with the appearance of a 16 year old young man. He was now a little above 170cm tall. His work at Ben's smithy, coupled with his martial arts training and regular hunting trips, had forged his body well. He had an athletic ectomorph-mesomorph body type, and his stats were roughly above those of an average adult. One of the biggest change that took place was the disparition of his Apprentice class, replaced by the crafter class. It meant that his overal abilities had greatly improved. His smithing and tailoring were still E rank, but they were probably close to becoming D rank. Though Ben was a smith, because some of the products made required wood, Allen got to improve his woodcrafting skill, even though it was a little. Taking care of damaged wooden furnitures either in the shop or at home also helped a lot. With so many crafting skills reaching a crtical point, it was normal for him to get the crafter class. Concerning magic, he also fully learned basic holy and dark magic, improving them to E rank. He had also improved his omni magic, and it was close to reach D rank. The spells seductive smile and sonic song caugh his interest due to the status effects charm for the former, and confused, shock and rage for the latter. Finally, he learned his first area-of-effect spell, io rune. He wasn't particulary trying to improve his magic power, spell casting or spell library. The main reason he choose to learn magic was for enchanting, crafting magical items. He needed to understand the runes used for each elements, he needed to have a basic understanding of them. He was in a world with magic, he couldn't base everything on his previous world scientific rules... While hunting near Yuidora, Allen encountered a lot of putettos. In the game, there were green, red and black putettos, dropping azure, green and azure fruits respectively. Only green putettos were available in low level areas, and the azure fruits they dropped were used for making small mana potions. But in this world, there were blue putettos. The blue putettos dropped azure fruits, and the green one dropped green fruits, used for small health potions. And both were available in low level areas. Many things are supposed to go bad with time, but health and mana potions were differents. They could be conserved for as long as 2 years for the small one, and longer for the ones of higher quality. Allen had accumulated a small stock of small health potions he had made himself. Even though most of the potions he made were sold or given to his parents, after a year, the number of leftover potion wouldn't be small. And instead of just leaving them in a corner, he decided to finally go to a place where one of his harem target resided. He decided to go to the local church and meet the priestess Hanna. “Welcome to our church, young man. How may I help you?” said Hanna in a business fashion. Seeing her face to face, for real, for the first time, Allen was overwhelmed. He stood there for a few seconds, staring at her. She was really beautiful, around the same height as him, with her long pale blue hairs reaching the middle of her back, golden eyes, small straight nose and pink lips. Despite her priestess clothing hiding her figure, Allen could tell that she had great assets. Seeing her puzzled look, he recovered. “Ah, sorry about that. I didn't know that the priestess of the church would be so pretty. A good day to you, young priestess” Allen answered with an, embarrassed smile. “Thank you for the compliment” she replied, still in a business fashion. But her cheeks had reddened a little. “My name is Allen Torus, and I'm currently training to become an alchemist. As a result, I've made no small amount of health and mana potions, but I have no use for them. After thinking about it, I though that maybe you would be the one most in need for them. This is a donation to the church” he said while bowing and presenting the large bag of potions he was carrying to her. “Oh my! An alchemist in training” she said while accepting the bag and inspecting the content. Allen could tell that she was septical despite the business expression she maintained. “And you've made good quality products as well” she added, clearly satisfied. “And it's a donation you say? You do not wish to sell them?” Allen could tell she had become suspicious of him. He surmised that, maybe, she thought he was a thief trying to get rid of his loot fast. He could see a hint of disaproval in her eyes even though she tried to maintain a neutral face. Also, he knew from the game that despite her appearance, she was worried about money and profits. She did care about helping others, but she was realist. “It's a donation. Actually, I started making them a year ago, and slowly their number grew. Some of them were used by my parents and friends, so I'm giving you the rest. I think that someone like you, who is helping the others so much while getting so little in return, should have them.” “... Then I shall accept your gift. My name is Hanna, and as you have said, I am the priestess of this church. You have my gratitude, Allen Torus.” “You're welcome. I'll be taking my leave. It was nice meeting you, miss Hanna. I'll come by again from time to time. If I get something you might need, I won't forget to bring it. And once I become an alchemist when I reach 16, don't hesitate to rely on me. Likewise, if I need to get rid of a curse or other ailment, I'll be relying on you. Though that's unlikely to happen, I'm a cautious person after all.” “... When you reach 16?” she asked, clearly confused. “You're not an adult yet?” she said, clearly shocked. “Yes. I'm 14 right now. I've been preparing to become an alchemist since I was 8 year old. I've been training in crafting and fighting since then, that's why my body look more grown up than I currently am. I've also been studying science and magic” he said, pausing a little to give her the time to digest the information. “I can guarrantee you that in 2 years, I will pass the alchemist exam with flying grades. It's a promise to myself, to my parents who support me, and to you, whom I want to support.” Hanna had seen a lot of people pass by her church. Looking at his eyes, she could tell he wasn't lying. He was serious, and he didn't seem reckless and was quite confident in his abilities. She could make recovery potions herself, and she could tell he had done an excellent job with his own. He didn't look like a naïve youth, but like some who knew what they were doing. Due to all of that, she decided to believe his words. And she appreciated his desire to support her very much. “Then I look forward your future visits, and to the day you become an alchemist. Please go with the grace of god, Allen Torus” she said with a sincere smile. That smile almost made his heart skip a beat. As he left, his desire and determination to capture her had increased... Allen was working in the small workshop of his house while his parents were away for work. They had to escort their employer to the city of Amureshi, at the frontier between Mikelty Union and the dark elven kingdom of Neryil. The trip forth and back would last around a month, so Allen had a lot of time alone for his own projects. He focused his efforts on 3 points. The first point was magic runes. To make an enchanted item, a crafter not only needed special magical ingredients, either monsters parts or magic ores, but also magic runes and magic circles. Allen got aware of that since playing the game. When Willfried restored Yuela's sword back to its prime state, he had used a complex magic circle along with a special stone. 'Guns use gunpowder. It's smelly and noisy. If I want to have an enjoyable life with Servalwi, Melodiana and the other girls, I need an alternative to that. Omni magic can be used to manipulate sound and act as a silencer. Maybe fire and air magic can be used as a substitute for gun powder. If I do things right, I won't even need cartridge.' The second point was of course the gun. He wasn't thinking about handgun, but rifles. Using handguns would be no different than using the basic omni spell magic missile. The effective range and damage would roughly be the same. Rifles were more precise, had a better range, more power, and due to their size they could handle more complex runes, thus better enchants. But they may also be to long. After thinking about it, Allen chose to make a weapon similar to a carabine, shorter and lighter than rifles, thus easier to handle. 'I want a weapon with a good firing rate, the ammos must be stored in the weapon and ready to be fired. Trying to start with magazine would be hasty, let's use simpler mechanisms for now. A revolving mechanism may sound good, but I've never seen a rifle or carabine with one, meaning it isn't suited for them, even though they are widely used for handguns. I could use lever-action or pump-action reloading systems. They are the easiest to reproduce, besides, the more complex the mechanism, the more likely it is to have failures.' The third point was his close combat weapons. The gauntlets and the boots. They had to be light and flexible, yet sturdy and able to deal damage. For his fists, rather than full gauntlets, he though of some kind of forearm guard with retractable knuckles. The boots were more problematic since he wanted to remain silents on his feet, soft material were required for silence, while hard and noisy one were used to deal damage... Until he recalled that he wanted to use runes to suppress the sound of his firearm. He just needed to reinforce the parts most used when kicking opponents, and add sound suppression runes on them. Furthermore, his equipment had to be compatible with his elemental techniques, such as burning punch. It would be troublesome if their use damaged the equipment to much, or if the equipment hindered their effectiveness.
Chapter 08 - Zenary Spoiler: Read It was at the end of the afternoon. Allen was finishing doing some cleaning in the small workshop when he heard his parents come back. When he went to greet them, he didn't find 2 people, but 3. There were both of his parents, looking the same as usual. The third person was a young girl, seemingly around his age. She had long dark brown hairs reaching the middle of her back. Her skin was tanned, she had a lovely ovale face, with upturned emerald eyes, a nose with a slightly high ridge, and full lips. She had an endomorph body type, pear shaped and athletic, and a small chest. She was around 160cm tall. Looking at her face, he could see similarities with his mother, and guessed they were related. “Welcome back dad, mom. Who is the second beauty?” “We're back Allen!” replied his mother in an energic fashion. “This little girl is my niece, Zenary. She is the daughter of my little brother. And thanks for the praise, by the way” she added with a bright smile. The young girl, Zenary was starring at Allen with a red face. When Allen was cleaning the workshop, he was shirtless. Zenaria was looking at a half-naked young man with a charming face, a healthy body, well defined muscles and 6 pack. And he had called her a beauty right from the start. Her heart was fluttering. Armand observed the scene from the side with a barely concealed smile. “Hey, introduce yourself and thank him too” said Riane in good humour to her niece. “Ha! S-sorry. Nice to meet you, Allen. I'm your cousin, Zenary. And t-thanks for the praise.” “The pleasure is mine Zenary. Welcome in Yuidora.” “Zenary will be living with us from now on, so I'll be counting on you to take care of her okay?” “I don't mind at all. But why didn't you tell me anything? I would have prepared her room. The only place she can use is the one upstair we use as a storage room. It need to be cleaned and we need a new bed and a mattress.” “Her coming here wasn't planned. We stopped by Amurent for a few days on the way back, and I came across my sister-in-law, Liri. Your uncle, Botren, and Liri, are owners of an inn in Amurent, so we stayed there. You see, Zenary here wants to follow the warrior path, and since hubby and I are experienced fighters, it was decided to take her along on our way here, and train her.” “... I understand. Well, Zenary, I'll give you my room for today. Tomorrow, your room will be ready.” “Wait. Where will you be sleeping?” “I'm done cleaning the workshop, I'll sleep there for today using dad's camping gear. Don't complain, you are our guest and you've just come from a trip. Your body must be sore, you need to rest well. Don't worry about me, this is no trouble at all.” “... Thank you Allen.” In the evening, after diner, when Zenary went to bed, Allen motioned his parents to follow him in the workshop. Armand and Riane exchanged anxious look and followed after him. They understood he wanted to talk about the new addition in the house. “So, what really happened?” asked Allen after closing the door. “Even if you agreed to take care of her and train her, there was no need to bring her on such a short notice. It's like you were in a hurry to get her away from Amurent.” “Smart boy. It's as you've said” started Armand. “There has always been some tension between Mikelty Union, Neryl Kingdom and Yusol Kingdom. But lately, it has increased. Conflicts in the Chaotic Warground are spilling outward. There is the possibility of an invasion coming from the south. Amurent is the second closest city to the south after Amureshi. Trouble could reach there fast.” Allen recalled the map of the region. They were in the southern part of the Raulbach Continent. Yuidora wasn't exactly at the center of the region, but a little north-west of the center. However, it was at the crossroad between Mikelty Union, Reyshiamael, Yusol and the asian-like empire called Disna Mojing. In the game, it was called Disnafrody, and based on chinese and japanese culture, however the name used were closer to western names than eastern one. In this world, it was closer to eastern terms. Far south of Yuidora, there were 2 mountains ranges, and beyond were Yusol kingdom directly south of the mountains, and Neryl Kingdom west of Yusol. However, those 2 moutain ranges were separated, and there was a clear path between Neryl Kingdom, the Chaotic Warground, and Yusol Kingdom, and the southern forests of Mikelty Union, with Amurent there, one of the 7 cities at the foundation of the Union. Amureshi may be closer than Amurent, but the city was in the mountains, easy to defend and hard to access from the south. If someone wanted to take the city, they would have to waste a large amount of ressources if striking from the south, or go around and strike from the north. That would mean passing through Amurent forest, and near Amurent city. Amurent city was an easier target than Amureshi. “It's not like the government is expecting trouble to reach Amurent city soon, but the villages and small towns south from the city may be n trouble soon. You see, Zenary is a little like your mom, a little hot-blooded girl that is training in swordmanship. If she hears of attacks in the southern settlements, she may choose to act on her own...” “... I see. Uncle Botren is worried she will sneak away and join the armed forces trying to defend the southern settlements. So, she is a reckless, emotional young girl that prefer to act before thinking... When I first saw her, I noticed the ressemblance with mom in her features, but I didn't think the similarities would go beyond that!” “BUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!” “Allen! What kind of things are you saying about your mother?” said Riane with flushed face and a scary glare. “I'm just saying that you must have had an interesting childhood, and that I love you the way you are” he said with an even face, but cold sweat on the back of his neck. “Son! Zenary choose the warrior path because Botren told her fond stories about your mom” Armand added. His father continued to laugh, while the anger in Riane's eye receeded and she started to pout, her cheeks getting more red. Allen didn't have much occasions to see his mother embarrassed and act cute, so he enjoyed it. Soon after they left to take a deserved rest, and Allen went to sleep on the The next day, after emptying the spare room and making quick measurements, he went to a carpenter with Zenary and bough the necessary materials to make her bed. They carried the materials back home, and she assisted him as he nailed the parts together to make the bed. In the afternoon, they went to get a mattress, a pillow and bed sheets. At the end of the day, Zenary was firmly settled in her new room, and the things that used to stay there were put in unobstructive parts of the workshop. When she had arrived the day before, Allen only ha the opportunity to see from the front. During the day, he got to see her from the back, and he liked what he saw. She had a sexy heart shaped bubble butt. He like Ella's a lot, but Zenary's was even better. He had to concentrate to avoid getting an erection. 'A pretty girl, hot boy, training in swordmanship... Now that I think of it, the only people I have in my team are the elven heroin I plan to recruit, and the earth spirit I plan to summon. Meaning people I won't have until Servalwi shows up, which is supposed to happen 1 year after I pass the alchemist exam. Until then, there is noone in my team. I'm a ranged fighter, Zenary is a close combat fighter with a shield. I will add her to my team. And my harem! I will dive deep into that glorious ass!!' Thus, his life with his cousin started. He didn't forget to introduce her to Ella, she would need some female company once in a while. He wasn't worried about Ella spilling things they did in private. One of the thing she taugh her while molding her was to keep secrets. Ella knew what she could tell to others and what she should keep secret. He didn't introduce her to Hanna. Zenary seemed like the type that could talk too much. He wanted to capture her and mold her to his tastes, and he was worried she would leak some things to Hanna. He had to teach her how to be obedient and keep secrets first, just like Ella. Only then would he entroduce her to Hanna.
Found this through your comment on the other story. Very similar but also very different, yet both are amazing.
Chapter 09 - Allen vs Zenary Spoiler: Read Allen's days were busy. There were a lot of things he had to do. He needed a decent level of mastery in smithing, woodcrafting, chemistry, tailoring and magic. The first 4 were for the sake of making quality items, the last one was for the sake of making quality enchants. Those 5 skills were needed to be the crafter he dreamed to be, one that would revolutionize the world. He wanted to mix his knowledge from his past life with the magic from this world, merging science with magic. He had to work at Ben smithy. Thanks to his efficiency, Ben had started to pay him. Aside from that, he had also found a woodcrafter willing to teach him a little. Of course, for a fee. So the money he earned at Ben's store was used for his woodcrafting lessons. It was mostly about carving and joining. But there was also furniture crafting. For chemistry and tailoring, he had his parents, but they had run out of things to teach him, so he was improving through trial and error. And next to that, he needed good fighting skills and equipment. However, he had restrictions. He still didn't have the proper equipment. He wanted to be a gunner, but had no gun yet, so he couldn't even practice shooting. For his hand-to-hand combat skills, he also didn't have the proper equipment. And without those, trying to sneak in less easy hunting grounds could prove to be dangerous. Thankfully, the new addition in the house would help with his battle experience. Zenary was a swordwoman, using one handed sword and shield. Sparring with her would be different from fighting weak monsters, mental simulations, or sparring with his mother and father. One afternoon, they decided to sparr against each other. Zenary had round wooden shield of small size, like a buckler. Her wooden sword looked like a roman spatha, longer than a gladius. She was wearing a sleeveless shirt and a skirt reaching her knees. She also wore long lace-up boots reaching below the knees, with the laces on the sides. Allen, on the other hand, was weaponless. However, he had warped his forearms and hands in bandages, then he added a layer of leather strips. He had to protect his fists, wrists and forearms from the wooden sword and shield, as either defending or striking could injure him. “... Allen? Are you sure you don't want to use a weapon?” asked Zenary with a worried face. “I'm sure” he replied while finishing his preparations. “Now, I'm ready. What about you?” “I'm ready.” Zenary took a stance with the shield on her left arm in front of her, and the sword in her right hand in a horizontal position, pointing toward Allen. The tip of the sword was next to the shield. She was ready to attack or defend at any time. Her legs were flexed, ready to move. Allen took a boxing stance, and started to lightly jump on the spot for a few seconds. Then he moved to his right, circling around Zenary. She rotated her body, following him. He stayed just beyond the reach of her sword in case she tried to thrust foreward. He often changed direction while circling, and Zenary continued to follow him, and he slowly started to reduce the distance, entering her range. Zenary attacked. 2 consecutives, fast thrusts. He dodged the first one by leaning to his left, and the second one with a liht side step in the same direction, without leaving her range. They were probing strikes. Allen then decided it was his turn to attack. The shield was troublesome for him as it protected a wide area and was effective against his punches and kicks, so he attacked from Zenary's right side. With 2 quick steps, he was at her side, surprising her. His stats were high for his age, furthermore, Zenary's training didn't have the quality of his own. She barely registered his movements, and when she realised what had happened, Allen's left fist was already moving toward her chin. She leaned backward while slashing horizontally with her sword. Allen's fist grazed her chin, and the leather strips scratched her skin, making her bleed. The horizontal slash was deflected by a sweeping back hand strike to the flat part of the sword. Zenary's balance wasn't destroyed, but she was wide open. Due to the destroyed momentum, she couldn't use her sword hand, and she couldn't spin to put her shield in front of her. The only thing she could do was retreat, but Allen followed her, still on her right side and closed the distance completely. She attempted a pommel strike to his head, but he firmly caugh her wrist in his right hand and pulled her toward him. She couldn't even attempt an elbow strike. She tried to hit him with the side of the shield, but due to their position he could easily get out of the range of the shield without compromising his advantagous position. His right fist landed on her chin, while the left one landed on her liver. Gently. They stopped moving. “I win” he said in a calm voice. “Ah... Haaa. I lost” sh replied in a dejected manner. “I can't believe it. It didn't even last a minute. I couldn't use my shield at all, and you were even able to defend against my sword strikes! And how did you get to my side so fast?” “Calm down, calm down! What? Are you already tired? It was just round 1” said Allen as he distanced himself and took a stance again. Zenary was puzzled at first, then a predatory smile spread on her face. She was unsure about Allen's abilities before, and worried because he was unarmed. Now, after her unexpected defeat, her competitive spirit had been ignited. She took a stance again, and this time she didn't dare underestimate him. She went seriously from the start, carefull of the distance between them and any circling attempt on Allen's part. If Allen had to use a world to describe the way she was fighting, it would be “balance”. Balance between offense and defense, between slashs and thrusts, between firmness and flexibility. All her moves were basic, but their execution was decent, the flow from one move to the other wasn't akward. But she sorely lacked experience. At the start, Allen kept to using classic boxing. With each victories, he added the basic kicks from savate, then he switched to taekwendo, and finally, capoeira. When he started to use kicks, it became very easy to disturb Zenary's balance and stances. Taekwendo forced her on the defensive and she had to rely on her shield more often. Capoeira thoroughly confused her. That was when Allen realised that she was very weak to feints and deception. It was her biggest weakness. When he used boxing and taekwendo, his attacks were rather straightforward. Capoeira include a lot of feints in its flow of moves. In the end, Zenary was lying on the ground, her limbs spread, skin flushed and breathing roughly. She had bruises on her right arm, a bruise and a cut on her chin, another large bruise on her forehead. She most likely had many bruises under her clothes on her belly, her back and her legs. Allen showed mercy on the first round, but after, hedidn't hesitate to be rough with her. While she was recovering, he retrieved bandages and a small health potion. Recovery items in this world didn't act like in the game. The effects weren't instantaneous, except for the highest grade ones, the effects appeared over time. To take care of wounds with a small health potion, it was better to drink some, and use the rest on the directly on the wound along with a dressing. Besides, the health potions also numbed pain. “Come on. Sit and let me take care of you.” “Yes, thank you” she replied while blushing and looking down. She strainghtened herself and sat cross-legged on the ground. Allen made her drink half of the potion first, then he carefully applied the rest on her bruises with a cloth pad. Once done with her arms, he had her lift her shirt to expose her belly. If it was before, she would have vehemently refused, and maybe even hit him. But after that sparring session, she was subdued. In Amurent, she was confident in her strenght, yet she had been completely beaten by the young boy in front of her. She had recognised him as superior, therefore, she listened to him. She roled her shirt up to her chest, bearin the embarrassement. Allen suppressed a chuckle, thinking she couldn't get more red than she actually was. He also found her extremely cute. Thankfully, he had enough willpower to focus on the task at hand. He tended the wounds on her belly, sides and back. He had avoid hitting the chest for obvious reasons, so there was no need to look there. After dealing with the belly, he took of her boots and treated her legs. He even pushed her skirt further up to treat her tights. While taking care of her bruises, he also got to touch her skin and caress it while applying the potion. He could feel her firm muscles beyond the thin layer of fat. She was in no way fat or chubby, she was strong. Allen didn't mind that at all. On the contrary, she got more attractive in her eyes, and it made his teenage body burn with desire. His body wasn't the only one to get excited. As Allen applied the potion on her bruises, after the initial slightly stingin sensation, the cool and numbing feeling that followed made her relax. Then, feeling the hands of this strong, handsome and capable youth slowly and gently moving on her skin felt like a burst of electricty in her mind. It was a nice feeling, it made her shiver. She was incredibly embarrassed and wanted to hide, yet when he stopped at the end she found herself disappointed. After thanking her once more, she hastly left and stayed in her room until diner. She didn't talk much, and afterward swiftly regained her room. She kept thinking about what happened, about his strenght, why she had wanted more of his touch, why he made her heart race so much. On this day, Allen had left a deep mark in the young girl's heart. Ever since then, they would spar about 3 times per month. Even though she was making a lot of improvements thanks to Riane, she still was unable to defeat Allen. His stats, skills and experience were above hers. She was getting close to him in battle skills, but couldn't close the gap for the rest. And of course, after each sparring session, he would treat her wounds, and send her off with a little slap on her buttcheeks. Though surprised and embarrassed, she didn't hate it. Ever since their first spar, she had been wholy impressed by him, and became an obedient girl, much more easier to handle than Ella.
HOHOHOHOHO YOU DID NOT DISAPPOINT ME anyway, thanks for the chapters. i binge read the whole thing and if possible, don't add the mom to the harem. i dont like mom-incests
Chapter 10 - The stream Spoiler: Read As Allen and Zenary's parents expected, trouble reached the southern border of the Union. It was a little later than expected, but not by much. And as Zenary's parents expected, she had wanted to go back to Amurent to help the southern settlements. But thanks to Riane and Allen, Zenary quickly calmed down. After seeing the mother's prowess and the son's skills, she understood she was no match for the seasoned fighters and would just be a burden or a casuality. “Allen, Zenary, you should be careful from now on when going outside” said Armand one night during diner. “With the troubles in the south, soldiers have been sent there. With less soldiers here, the thieves and bandits will be more active.” “Furthermore, refugees from the south might turn into criminals out of desperation” Allen added. “Dad, mom, it also means that in the near future it would be more likely for you to encounter trouble. Your boss will probably need more materials to face the increased demand of products. More missions, more chances for ambushes. You are the ones who will spend several days away from home, resting in small villages and sometimes camping in the wilderness. You're the ones who should be more careful.” “Yes, your right. I see that you understand the situation well. Don't worry, your mother and I will be careful.” “Hehehe! Our Allen is going to be a great man in the future!!” During the following weeks, the mood in the city of alchemists darkened a little. The troubles at the border increased, and there were several incursions in the southern lands of the Mikelty Union. Many villages and small towns had suffered from attacks, and refugees started to appear in Amureshi, Amurent and Yuidora. But it didn't stop Allen from doing his trips in the wilderness to gather materials. It had been a little more than 2 months since his last trip, and it had been 6 weeks since Zenary had come to live with them. This time, he went with both Ella and Zenary. With the 2 girls, Allen was able to gather more materials than usual. But the group moved a little slower, as Allen wanted to train Zenary in battle against monsters. It was also to start working on their teamwork, as he already considered her a part of his harem and fighting force. “Ugh, I hate those things” said Zenary with a disgusted face as she glared at the remains of the putteto. Unlike in the game, where they didn't have any particular strenght or weakness, the puttetos of this word had some resistance against physical attacks, especially cutting and piercing damage. Allen didn't notice it at first because he used magic to fight. There had been very few cases where he was forced in close combat, and it wasn't again opponents like puttetos, but the faster greyhounds. “I hate the way their bodies wiggle as they move, it's disgusting...” she added. “Is that so? It make them look stupid and I find it funny” retorted Ella with a grin. “Aren't you scare of their tentacles attacks? What if they grab me? Just thinking about it can give me nightmares” Zenary whinned with apale face. Yes, the puttetos didn't hop and charge to attack, they produced tentacles with slightly inflated tip to whip and smash. They caused blunt damage. When Zenary mentioned being caugh by the tentacles, Allen couldn't help but remember all the animes he had seen with tentacle play. He always avoided those in hentais mangas, but in animes they were quite stimulating. He though that maybe he would let a girl get caugh just for a bit, sometimes in the near future. “Ella, have you heard of anything in the city recently? Has there been any trouble with the newcomers?” “I've heard rumors of some disputes here and there, but nothing serious yet. No words of thievery as well, but people are getting worried. A merchant friend of my parents said that the number of criminals is starting to rise.” “Ella” he said with a strong tone and a serious expression. “For the time being, I want you home before nightfall, and do not leave your house during the night. Understod?” “Yes!” she firmly answered. Ella was already his obedient subordinate. When he gave her tasks or order, she would follow them faithfully. With the command he just gave her, no matter what her parents said, she wouldn't step out of the house during the dangerous hours. Besides, Allen genuinely cared about her. Yes, he molded her to be his convinient woman, but it didn't mean he didn't like her. On the contrary. “Aren't you being overprotective of her?” “Look at her. Ella is a pretty young woman, with an attractive body. She will be a target for desperate people. People desperate for money, or people in need to satisfy their desires no matter what.” “... Aren't you exaggerating?” “No. In normal times, even though there are already criminals, I wouldn't worry about that too much, especially here in Yuidora. But when there is unrest and tension, like now, some people can be very helpful, others will become viscious. It's something you should never forget, because you too, are a beautiful woman. And you know there are people stronger than you, starting with me. Imagine what would become of you if you became a victim because you weren't carefull enough.” “Ok. I understand” she said with a pale face. “Since it's almost the middle of the afternoon, let's get refreshed” Allen said. “Sure! Let's go!” followed Ella. “Where are we going?” “To the stream” the blue haired, blue eyed girl replied. Once there, Allen and Ella took of their clothes, under the flaggerbasted eyes of Zenary. At first she didn't mind much as she was taking off her boots, but when they started to take off their underwears, her though process halted. Her eyes were glued on Allen's lower body as his package appeared in view. It was the first time she saw a man's thing. She was captivated by the sight, the swaying motion of the sausage seemingly hypnotising her. It took her a few seconds to recover. “WHA-WHA-WHA-WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING??” she screamed while hastly turning around with her hands on her face. '… Her reaction is just like Ella at that time!' though Allen with amusement. 'I saw it! I saw it! I saw it! I saw it! I saw it! I saw it! I saw it! I saw it! I saw it!...' Zenary's face, neck, and ears got flushed scarlet. Even her shoulders and arms started to turn red. Her sight was swaying, her heart beating violently in her chest. Her legs were shivering, and the only image in her mind at that moment was the manhood of her handsome cousin. “I'm going to wash myself and swim a little. I can't do so properly with my clothes on.” “But you didn't have to get naked in front of a girl!! And you too Ella!! How can you get naked in front of a man?” “I'm handsome, and I'm not ashamed of a single part of my body in front of the girls I like” Allen said while standing confidently. “Well, it would be akward to be the only one still clothed, so I joined him and got used to it" she lied a little. "And likewise, I like him and I'm not ashamed of a single part of my body in front of him” she said with a seductive grin which almost made Allen stand at attention. Zenary was speechless as she stared at the 2 naked people with her eyes wide open. She mostly stared at Allen. Allen, with his dark red hairs, captivating almond cyan eyes, his roman nose adding a mature aura to his handsome chiseled face, his confident smile, his slightly tanned skin, his broad and robust shoulders, his chest with well defined muscles, his 6 pack, his impressive package... It was a miracle that Zenary didn't get a massive nosebleed at that point. He said I was pretty. He said he liked me. Doesn't that mean we can be together? But he also said he liked Ella. And Ella said she liked him. She has the courage to be naked in front of him. Does it mean she is more brave than me? Will I lose him to her? But if I get naked, he will see everything! But he already touched me when he took care of me. The only things he hasn't seen are the important things. But I liked it when he touched me. And he helped me. I like to be with him.Will he lose interest in me if I don't do it? Ella will have him all to herself! I don't want to lose! I want to keep being with him! Those kind of thoughts were randomly passing through Zenary's mind as she stood there without moving. Allen had entered the water, and Ella was close behind him. Seeing the 2 entering the water naked together, and leaving her on her own, fear spiked into her mind. The fear of being abandonned by Allen. Without thinking clearly about what she was doing, she hastly undressed herself and ran toward the other. “W-w-wait!! I'm coming!” she screamed. Allen watched as the brown haired girl jogged toward them. Her pretty face was completely flushed, and her beautiful emerald eyes had traces of panic in them. Her modest breasts, between B and C cup, were shaking with each of her steps, and her pink nipples were visibly erect. He admired her firm and fit body as she came closer, and his gaze landed on her precious place. Her pubic hairs were a natural landing strip while Ella's were a thin bush. She went into the water until it hid her lower body. Allen was slightly disappointed, but let it slide. They washed themselves. Ella naturally went to wash his back, and when Zenary saw this, she got embarrassed and jealous. Allen noticed this and offered to wash her back. She accepted while sutturing, turning around and furiously blushing. He washed her back properlly, not forgetting to tell that that she had a pretty back. Allen didn't tell her that it included her generous buttcheeks that he could still see under the water. Afterward, they went back, Allen holding the hands of the girls, one on each side. Ella was behaving as usual, but Zenary kept her head down, sometimes glancing at Allen, and turning her head the other way with a beet red face. But at no point did she try to release his hand. When they reached their house, she relucantly let go.
Good job! The story is well done. On a related note, will you going to introduce an original race or just stick to Kamidori canon?
NOPE!!! Maybe a non-sexualised little sister kind. The kind that you don't use as potential partner, the kin that is strictly family!!!!!
Can’t believe it’s been 2 years since I started this... Still wondering if I will resume it or rewrite it on another site, along with my other fics...