Novel Rebirth of the Crown Prince of the Royal Lineage

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  1. RebirthofNovel

    RebirthofNovel Well-Known Member

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    Hello, I'm writing a story called "Rebirth-of-the-crown-prince-of-the-royal-lineage"

    Synopsis :
    Xuanyuan Wentian, the Crown Prince of the Xuanyuan Empire, Ignorant, Narcissist, silk pants, foolishly in love with Xia Wu Xie, threw himself into the role of a schemer.

    After assisting his lover in getting rid of his fiance who is also her sister Xia bingbing, he finally became stepping stone, his fiance is not dead but her temperament is changed as if possessed.

    He was accompanied by his lover Xia bingbing to fight for the country, schemed against his brothers, took risks by calculating her sisters and sisters maternal family. When he looked at all the years later, there was no place for him on this planet.

    The beauty in the arms of his crippled brother smiled brightly, “Older brother in law, the country is in our hands, you should die.”

    Upon rebirth, he returned to the time when he was nineteen, when the engagement was still not broken, his crippled brother was still a cripple and she (his fiancee) was still the pure, amiable, quiet and yielding Di daughter of a Xia family.

    Cripples hiding a black heart, Fiance is the future medical god who with just a plant can bring even the dying back to peak stage, her maternal family who will once again rise to the lion they were, his father the emperor who will in future die a dogs death for calculating her maternal linage.

    Her family must be killed, cripple must be shown what he is, the huge enmity must be avenged, the Imperial seat of the country must also be a part of the trophy. In this lifetime, let’s see who can beat the others!


    Genre : Action, Adventure, Historic, Apocalypse, Fantasy

    Table of Contents:

    1. Disposing the Crown Prince
    2 Rebirth of Crown Prince and his sinister Princess - part 1
    3 Rebirth of Crown Prince and his sinister Princess - part 2
    4. Transmigrated Di Daughter
    5. Memories of Di Daughter
    6 Healing from Injuries
     
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    ladyartemis Well-Known Member

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    Hi! Is this your original novel or is this a translation? Either way thanks for letting me read this. It's interesting.
     
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    ludagad Addicted to escapist novels

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    The tags tho.
     
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    Any summary for the story?
     
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    RebirthofNovel Well-Known Member

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    Yes its original
     
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    1. Disposing the Crown Prince

    During the early summer when evening falls, there will always be sudden torrential rains.

    The skies were overcast and the dark clouds was suppressing over the dignified atmosphere of the Execution Ground. The formally cruel location was shrouded by the dark clouds as if it was a huge cage, trapping the people inside firmly.

    In the large execution platform, the sword seemed blood thirsty as it was covered with a thick layer of blood. It was originally a hot weather but one actually felt a little cold. Tomatoes and eggs were scattered all over the surroundings as if a calamity had just went by.

    The Male and Female were half kneeling on the platform, looking at the emperors chair and the person next to him.

    This Male was only in his thirties but his face was like an old man. There was deep hostility between his brows, his eyes were as dead as stagnant water and they have seemingly unable to tear like a long dried well but filled with a bottomless hatred.

    “Your highness, please.” The eunuch beside had a cruel looking sword in his hands and his tone could not hide his pleasure, “Zajia still needs to report back to his Majesty on the completion.”

    Xuanyuan Wentian's eyes landed on the eunuch and he remained silent for a long time before slowly speaking with a hoarse voice, “Xiao Li-zi, when wang promoted you at that time, you were still a dog beside Gao Gonggong.”

    The eunuch slightly raised his head arrogantly, “Your deposed Highness, the present is different from the past.”

    “The present is different from the past…” Xuanyuan Wentian muttered before suddenly raising his head for a laugh, “What a good ‘the present is different from the past’!”

    Because of a sentence ‘the present is different from the past’, all the servants and courtiers who previously see him would be respectful and let him order them around. Because of ‘the present is different from the past’, he ended up in the execution ground. The past was what kind of past and when did the present became the present? Was it starting from when he broke his engagement with the waste of Xia family Xia bingbing and took her sister Xia Wu Xie as his fiancee and had her enter the Palace, from when the Crown Prince was disposed or when Princess Xia Wu Xie was thrown in prison after being proven to have framed emperor's favorite concubine and was professed to be the on bringer of calamity. Or was it when he schemed to have his disabled brother get assassinated by his most powerful squad?

    From the ‘past’ to the ‘present’, from an Crown Prince to a criminal, it was all because of Xia Bingbing's one word! This entire court of officials would then change their looks, this country would reverse black and white! What a good ‘the present is different from the past’!

    “Why?” Xuanyuan Wentian asked difficultly to the empress seating next to the emperor, his disabled brother who did not have any disability at all.

    He did not reply.

    “Why the need to seize the entire Xia family?” the girl Xia Wu Xie asked following him
     
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    Added the summary
     
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    "rapist becomes rape victim" is the only creation, remaining tags are almost common in many novels tho
     
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    Where are you releasing this story?
    NU? Wattpad?
     
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    2 Rebirth of Crown Prince and his sinister Princess - part 1

    And the sword falls on their heads and they die dogs death not even having an intact corpse.

    The black and white big courtyard, the floors were slabs of limestone, the pillars were vermilion red and there were complicated Begonia patterns engraved on the railings. After an entire night of rain, the rain drops slipped down the leaves and onto the ground.

    The purple gold incense burner was made exquisitely like small animal and was currently emitting costus root scent which smelt exceptionally fresh in the early autumn.

    In each corners of the bed, small brightly coloured tassel sachets of fragrance were hung. By the side of the couch, two tall maids were carefully fanning the person on the bed.

    “The fever should be serious as one fell into the water in such a cold weather. Young Lady had been sleeping for a day and night and the physician said that she should be awake by now. Why is there still no movement?” The green clad maid face could hardly conceal her anxiety.

    When the words were spoken, the person on the bed who was listening uttered in a weak voice.

    “Young Lady is awake!” The purple clad maid called out in surprised and quickly ran to the bedside to see the young female rubbing her forehead as she slowly sat up.

    “Xiao Zhe…” Xia Bingbing mumbled.

    “This servant is here.” The purple clad maid smiled as she held Xia Bingbing’s hand, “Is Lady feeling better? After sleeping for a day and night, it seemed that the fever had subsided but she is still not awake. This servant was thinking of getting a physician over again.”

    “Does Young Lady want some water?” Lan Yao handed a cup of tea over.

    Xia Bingbing looked somewhat puzzled at the two person in front.

    She had four first rank maids, Xiao Zhe, Lan Yao, Cao Lu and Ren Jiang. They were all very intelligent and quick-witted girls. Unfortunately at the end, not one was left.

    When she was scheming against her sister Xia Wu Xie and failed miserably, she had no option but to sacrifice them one by one to protect herself and her reputation. Soome willingly went down for her while others she had used their family as hostage and forced them to sacrifice.

    As for Xiao Zhe, she was the dumbest of them. In the beginning, in order to help her scheme she put aphrodisiac in the food of Xia Wu Xie but was unluckily caught and the drug was pored into her own mouth, she couldn't control her urges and had found slave servants and satisfied the body. When she (Xia Bingbing) happily brought people to witness her sister's (Xia Wu Xie's) adultery what waited for her was this servent along with few slaves in utterly shameless way. This resulted in her being beaten to death.

    Now seeing Xiao Zhe standing in front of her with her usual beautiful self and Lan Yao smiling at her, the both maids were at a good age of fourteen fifteen years old put Xia Bingbing in a momentary trance.

    After a moment, she then bitterly smiled and closed her eyes, “The illusion one see before death was just so real.”

    “What is Young Lady saying?” Lan Yao put the cup aside and touched Xia Bingbing’s forehead, “Has the fever confused you?”

    Feeling the ice cold hand that touched her forehead that were both comfortable and real, Xia Bingbing suddenly opened her eyes and her eyes sharpen. She slowly lowered her head and looked at her own hands.

    There laid a pair of fair and delicate hands with nails neatly trimmed. One would see that it was a pair of pampered hands as it was smooth and adorable.

    That was not her hands.

    Dealing with her after being found guilty of all crimes was a cruel torture. She was beaten scolded, burned, had shamed in public by eggs and tomatoes, her hands were already getting rough during that situation, her hands were filled with calluses and her joints were swelling. How would they be in such a delicate appearance?

    “Bring me a mirror.” Xia Bingbing said. Her voice was still very weak but her tone was firm.

    Maids looked at one another in dismay and at the end Xiao Zhe brought a mirror out and handed it over to Xia Bingbing.

    In the bronze mirror, the young lady’s face was round with a full forehead, a pair of large almond eyes were slightly red, a rounded nose and a small mouth. It was still a child-like face and was not very beautiful but was lovely and refreshing and had a well behaved and shy appearance.

    This was a young lady’s face that the Royal family praised for being one that could ‘bring fortune to one’s husband’.

    The mirror in Xia Bingbing’s hand suddenly landed on the floor and a clear sharp sound rang out. When the sound of the shards resonated in her heart, it set off a large stormy wave.

    She pinched herself ferociously and two rows of tears fell.

    The Heavens did not turn its back on people. The Heavens did not turn its back on her!

    She had returned back!

    Maids jump up in fright. Lan Yao quickly went to pick up the pieces on the floor and anxiously said, “Young Lady must be careful not to hurt one’s legs.”

    “Why is Young Lady crying?” Xiao Zhe wiped Xia Bingbing with a handkerchief but saw Xia Bingbing looking strangely back as she mumbled, “I have return back…”

    She grabbed Xiao Zhe asking, “What year is it?”

    Xiao Zhe was somewhat afraid but replied honestly, “106 year. What is wrong with Young Lady? Is any part of the body is unwell?”

    “106, 106 year…” Xia Bingbing eyes widen. She was fourteen in 106 year. It was when she came upon Xuanyuan Wentian and fell foolishly in love with him that she started scheming against her miserable sister to no end and almost succeeded in ending her life, but this was the point where hers and her families misery started.

    And now… She heard Lan Yao words by her ear, “Young Lady shouldn’t scare us servants. The fever just subsided a little, it could be that her mind is still unclear. Eldest Young Lady is really too vicious, this is practically calling for Young Lady’s life…”

    In the past lifetime, Xia Bingbing was most of the time by Xuanyuan Wentian’s side seducing him and the days in Xia residence was completely bland. But she could remember this event clearly, she could remember everything related to Xuanyusn Wentian clearly.

    Xia Bingbing told Xia Wu Xie that Xuanyuan Wentian want to come to Xia residence to visit her, so she pull her over to secretly see. Reaching the garden, Xian Bingbing tried to push her down the rock garden, but as she was waiting for it Xia Wu Xie escaped and she Xia bingbing fell severly on her head.

    After being fished out from the pond, there were also other officials around and it saw it as Xia Bingbing’s joke.
     
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    It was precisely that tag that made me snort my drink through the nose. The rest of the tags, while I would avoid reading a novel that has them, I've seen them plenty of times, so my eyes just glided over them. And then I reached that precious tag.
     
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    3 Rebirth of Crown Prince and his sinister Princess - part 2

    At the same time, in the Xuanyuan Imperial Palace
    The gorgeous golden palace, the glazed tiles, the pearl red lacquer, and the carved pillars, the palace was magnificent.

    In one of the most beautiful locations a person opens his eyes, and looks at his surrounding.
    Having experienced many things in life he is relatively calm, he is not someone else, he is Xuanyuan Wentian the crown Prince of Xuanyuan empire.
    Eunuch Li who is standing near the bed, kneels to pay respect.

    "Eunuch Li what year is it"
    Puzzled but still Eunuch Li replies "106 years your royal highness crown prince"

    Xuanyuan Wentian goes into deep thoughts, so its already the 106 year, the year in which he proposed to end his engagement with his crown princess, and his dark days started. His Fiancee was married to his crippled brother and that cripple miraculously recovered but was still hiding his health, even fooling the imperial Doctor.

    Looks like god has given him a chance, its not always the righteous people who are blessed even someone like him can get a chance at revenge.

    "Eunuch Li, what is the plan for today?"
    "Crown Prince, yesterday night i heard from Xia clan that their Shu daughter of Xia clan, Xia Bingbing was pushed into pond by Xia Wu Xie, causing her to be in fever"

    Xuanyuan Wentian remembers this day, this was the day when he went to visit Xia Bingbing and also proposed to end his engagement with Xia Wu Xie, reason he gave was that Xia Wu Xie is a waste who can't cultivate Martial arts a black heart person who harms her sisters, and he the Crown Prince will be a joke if he marries her. He was successful in ending the engagement but was shamed by her actions and lost lot of face. Xia Wu Xie also made the imperial doctor visit Xia bingbing who had fever, which resulted in truth of her being pregnant was also found.

    Since I am reborn on this day why not start it fresh and show how to break the engagement correctly to Xia Wu Xie!

    "Eunuch Li, how much gold and precious minerals do we have at out disposal"
    "Your royal highness, we have 10000 gold coins, 4 pounds of Jadeite, 30 bolts of silk and paintings, calligraphy, at you disposal"

    "Great, take 500 gold and hire "League of Assassins" have their best men be sent to my palace, I want them to stay here and safeguard the palace for three days"
    "Bring 6500 gold coins and buy all the farm lands in the Northwestern part of the empire from merchants"
    "Send one best paintings and calligraphy as gift to Royal Father tomorrow"

    "Arrange 2000 gold, 2 pounds of Jadeite, 15 bolts of silk as compensation for breaking engagement with Xia Wu Xie"

    Eunuch Li was shocked
    "Your Royal Highness, everything is fine, but compensation proposed to Xia family miss is too huge, to break engagement with minister's family you just need 100 gold coins, half a pound jadeite, 2 bolts of silk"

    Xuanyuan Wentian narrowed his eyes, "Eunuch Li, DO IT AS I SAID"
    "yes your royal highness"
     
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    Someone will get happy ending
     
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    The main or side pair:blobpeek:
     
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    4. Transmigrated Di Daughter
    One month ago in a forest near the Xuanyuan Kingdon's capital city.
    In an isolated location where wild beast roam, a woman was now lying on some jagged rocks in such a sorry state, if not for Xia Bingbing's soul, she would just be a dead body dumped in the wilderness.

    [Both legs fractured, three broken ribs on the left side, dislocated right wrist…Falling from such a height, this body has miraculously survived.]

    Another voice in the body of Xia Bingbing sounded, it was the unfamiliar voice of an old man.

    "Still alive." Xia Bingbing muttered as she lay on the rocks without any hint of pain on her face, as if the physical pain had nothing to do with her.

    [Congratulations Girl, you've escaped death] Black smoke seeped out from Xia Bingbing's chest and condensed into an ancient soul at her side.

    She survived a calamity however she was still hovering near death's door. She can much less bother with ghosts now.

    She felt her energy slowly seeping away as she shuddered from the torrential downpour which was raining down hard on her body.

    She needed to find a place to shelter from the rain quickly before her body temperature drops further! Luckily, there was a cave under the low cliffs nearby.

    Relying on her two hands and the sole thought of survival, she dragged herself in the direction of the cave.

    Her tattered clothes, soaked in sweat and drenched in the downpour, hung from her battered frame. Crimson blood trailed along the path from the wounds on her legs, washed away from the merciless rain hammering down upon the small crawling figure. The ancient soul gave occasional nudges as encouragement as they made their way towards the cave.

    Having mustered every ounce of strength she had left in her frail body, although the distance wasn't far, it was an enduring feat.

    With such an amount of injuries and over a rough terrain, even those with high endurance would have fainted numerous times.

    When she finally reached the dark cave, her face was deathly pale, void of any colour.

    Huddled against the walls of the cold cave, finally free from the barrage of the rain, she let out a small sigh of relief. Suddenly a ghostly voice came from within that deep dark cave.

    "Wh..Who is it?"

    [Finally you take notice of me, ah. It took me entire day to make you hear my voice, I am a spirit tied to the Jadeite pendent you are wearing, the moment your blood fell on it i was awakened]

    Xia Bingbing looks at the pendent hanging around her neck, isn't this the necklace which she had gained by stealing royal treasure in the modern world and ended up getting trapped and killed in nuclear explosion, how can she posses it in this unknown world. Is it that the necklace helped her to travel to this world.

    [Now that you have formed contract with me, i will help you recover your body. But to do that you need to accept me as your master.]

    While the ancient soul was talking an unknown memory of the original body seeps into her mind
     
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    5. Memories of Di Daughter
    Both the transmigrated girl and the original girl had same name Xia Bingbing.
    Xia Bingbing was an innocent girl, a di daughter of the general's household. She was born to genius parents, her father was war wolf who was cleverer than fox in battle tactics and won many impossible encounters with enemies.

    Her mother was di daughter of Ministry of Finance Lin Zhentian, Lin family was very powerful in the past but has declined significantly in the recent years, though its not difficult for modern world Xia Bingbing to guess that emperor was behind this.

    Her mother was weak and died when Xia Bingbing was small, leading her to be raised by her father's concubines. The main concubine who took charge of Xia family was just a shu daughter of Ministry of Education Yun Cheng. Once she became the head mistress, she took pleasure in torturing Xia Bingbing.

    Xia Bingbing was given poison when she was a kid resulting in her dantian being sealed and she losing any chance of becoming a martial artist in life. Due to this she developed a weak personality and would speak a volume lower than a mosquito.

    Even servants life was better than Xia Bingbing, she only had one maid servant around her, and both of the owner and maid servant were tortured by other servants in the house.

    She was made to clean her own clothes, house And even the yard

    The reason she was able to keep on living was due to her engagement with the Crown Prince Xuanyuan Wentian, she was silently enduring all the pain with hope of marrying into royal family and lead a pleasant life.

    Reason why she has suffered such big injuries was also due to the crown prince, she received a letter from crown price this morning addressing her to reach this forest valley to discuss about love. She was very happy and even forgot to inform her maid servant and rushed to the valley. Her instead of Crown Prince a man clothed in black dress was waiting for her, he broke her bones and threw her into the valley to make her a feast for the beast.

    In the fall the girl realized that Crown Prince never wanted to marry a waste like her and the only hope she had with life got extinguished resulting in her death and the modern world Xia Bingbing transmigrating into the body.
     
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    I can't tell whether you're being serious or doing this as a joke. This is obviously plagiarized from The Rebirth of the Malicious Empress of Military Lineage
    :cookie::cookie::cookie:
     
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    6 Healing from Injuries
    Xia Bingbing felt pity for the girl who suffered immeasurable torture in her life, her status was that of phoenix but was treated as ugly duckling by her family, even her fiancee couldn't wait to get her assassinated.

    Xia bingbing thought in her mind, "Don't worry since i have taken over your body, all you grievance will be reported, i will take revenge for you"
    After thinking this in her mind Xia Bingbing felt as if a huge burden has been lifted from her heart, it must be the remnant spirit of original owner saying goodbye to the world

    But looking at her situation right now she doesn't seem to be well off either. Both legs fractured, three broken ribs on the left side, dislocated right wrist

    Xia Bingbing was from modern world 21st century, she was top assassin of the world. She had a lover and best friend who were no. 3 & 2 in rankings after her. But she never would have thought, letting her guard down will entice both of them to attack her and in the fight all three of them died. She still can't understand why people she trusted the most killed her.

    Though Xia Bingbing was an assassin and knew human body very well, she can't help herself in this situation, her injuries are too severe for treatment.

    Ancient Soul who was observing her for some time now, spoke "Girl, if you worship me as you master I can help you in healing your body"

    Xia Bingbing now remembered this ghost who was following her for quite sometime and spoke "Who are you and what do you want in return for healing me"

    Ancient soul smiled brightly "I am just a remnant from the past, My name used to be Jun Tian, who is present in the jade pendent hanging around your neck, I only wish to pass on my knowledge to you, but for it you must accept me as your master"

    Xia Bingbing felt there is no helping her current situation except for accepting help from this ghost, she was even willing to form a deal with Devil much less ancient soul to survive now.

    Xia Bingbing replied to the ghost "Master Jun Tian, disciple Xia Bingbing is willing to be your disciple"

    Jun Tian laughed, "I will use my soul power to treat your injuries, after it I will have no energy to communicate with you for at least 3 months, in this time try to stay safe disciple"
    And with that he disappeared and the wounds on Xia Bingbing started to heal at a pace visible to naked eye. She slowly fell asleep during the process