On another note, I am summarising as and when I am reading the chapters. I think my summaries are tooooo long - any comments on this? Any ideas from veteran summarisers on how to shorten further? I am already cutting out the Meng part and bro-con descriptions of ML thinking "Meng MC bro, Meng idiot bro." And descriptions like pale white skin, trembling figure, moist eyes, plump lips blah blah blah by ML. So any ideas?