Spoiler Return to the Peak (BL)

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  1. Jadeite524

    Jadeite524 Well-Known Member

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    重临巅峰
    Same author as Raising your natural enemy.


    Please go to Ashleen wattpad for the introduction

    https://www.wattpad.com/571146314-danmei-bl-recommendations-return-to-the-peak

    MC (Shin Qing Yang) woke up and found out he has been reborn to his 16 yrs body when his parents has just been killed. In the past life, after his parents death, he worked very hard and only concentrate on increasing his strength that he spoil his body even though he reach level 8 (level 9 being the highest the world has known). But in the end he was betrayed by someone he loved (lang lang) and his so-called friend (Fong) sold him to his family lab to experiment to find out whey MC managed to get so strong so fast when his initial testing is only C level. MC decided to let down his pride as this was one of the reason for his downfall and plot to improve his very poor situation. So he targeted on ML (Chen Ran) who in the past life was his classmate but due to the ML being a ‘normal’ person with no powers and yet go into their ‘warrior’ school and he tried to be nice and charitable to MC as they were both outcast but MC rejected him. ML family later collapse when their grandfather who is the level 8 warrior died and ML was found dead outside in the city.

    MC pretend to be knock down by ML car and get to know ML. Then he started to hover around ML area by having a part time job and his plan is to be able to be employed by ML family. It worked as the ML caretaker Guan approached MC to employ him to look after ML. MC do genuinely befriend ML as ML at this point of time suffer from autism and is really very pure and child like. He has been imprisoned at home not allowed to go out due to his ‘illness’. (At bit jumping ahead here - ML actual identity is an experiment subject. His biological father Chen Hong gave his cells and it was combined with a ‘special person’ and ML was born. The experiment was conducted by the Fong family with the objective of creating super warrior. When ML was born and show his inability to harness the power and in fact became allergy to it, and they were being checked by the government they gave ML back to Chen Hong and asked him to look after ML. So ML was not liked by his father or stepmom at all and his father even forced medicine down him to see if there any way to awaken his power even when it caused him to be very ill. He was send to MC city - third class city cause Chen Hong forced ML to attend warrior school and his wife want to ensure all his wealth is going to be inherit by her son). Basically the school arc start where we see how MC managed to use his relationship with ML and ML caretaker and grandfather to find out the truth about his parents death and took revenge. MC parents were killed by the Yong cause their farm got a precious herb that another person An who is in charge to 2nd class city want. The Yin family who are Yong in laws controlled the military in MC city and they helped in the plotting of the death. All three Yin, Yong and An are wary of ML grandfather as he is a 8th Level warrior and stronger than them. MC managed to forced the Yong first to get into trouble as when he caused people to suspect Yong, the Yin also tried to arrange for people to kill in outside. But MC had already under the guise of his master (do not want to be hungry) invited ML grandfather to wait at a certain location and MC was saved and this caused a lot of problems for Yin family (and they sacrificed the Yong Family). The Yin Family to save themselves gave a moving fortress to An for his help. The moving fortress is used to do underground deeds and have a club where people do whatever they want, young people got capture and sold there and all kinds of nefarious activity and the lower level is a weapon cache. When MC and ML was on the way to An city for a challenge they got ambush by An and Yin family people and they escape to an Ant hill. There Guan lost his powers after protecting them but ML got his powers awaken. Actually MC is aware of this ant hill as in his past life when Yin tried to kill him they got a teacher who threw him into the ant hill and from there MC ate the eggs and ant queen and change his body and became able to increase his power so fast. They managed to escape from the ant hill after killing all the ants and return to the city. So MC and ML and ML grandfather plotted on how to located the moving fortress and they used the Chen family heir who is a obese person (due to poison in his body by his stepmother) and managed to sneak in. They managed to capture a lot of people and rescue a lot of women and children from the fortress. They also got An right hand man and ML grandfather got a medicine from his daughter in law (who got it from Fong family as her brother is working there) and found out about An as the mastermind. So they set a trap for him but it was ruined by Chen Hong (who got badly injured as a resulted) but in the end they managed to kill An (due to MC scheme by letting An and his men ate the remaining queen meat which is poison to them).
    Next arc (which is i am on) is when they go the capital city which was destroyed by a swarm of insects 10 years down the road and the focus of power for the Fong family. The Fong son (jumping ahead again - who is actually an experiment like ML and also the one who betray MC in the last life. he is a combination of the elder Fong and cells from a man the elder Fong found. the man was lying dying in a circle of insects who are afraid of him but once he died they all rush to eat him. The elder Fong managed to get a bit of meat and from there extra cells and combine them to try to form the best warrior out of which the Yong Fong master and ML was born.) The Young Fong master (YF) was actually trying to woo ML cousin to tried to get ML family wealth but switch his sight to ML once he realized ML is more look after by his grandfather and due to their cells, he feel close to ML. MC at that point is already level 7 but he is hiding it to prevent trouble and appear as Level 5 one level lower then YF. MC and ML tried to avoid YF and YF then tried to get his cousin Lang Lang (in past life betray MC) to seduce MC so he can get ML. A number of things happen and MC reveal YF actions in front of a lot of people causing Fong family to be unhappy. Fong family then retaliate and finally both family have a ‘war’ with MC revealing using his master name on Fong family past life medical receipt, and some of their martial arts. Then MC and ML with ML superior medicine managed to get linked to Wen and Feng who is another 9th Level and ML got adopted as Godson by them and YF challenge MC to battle not knowing MC real level ( i stop here). Elder Yong already suspect ML has got powers and had been testing and trying to get back into Chen family good graces and regret not helping his son/grandson to get ML. ML and MC with the help of Feng finally realized the ML powers is a healing type and is able to soothe the chaotic power in the warrior’s body and it is a dangerous secret as chaotic power is the issue all warriors faced and is affecting all of their growth.

    What I like about their relationship :X3: is how cute ML Is. He is very naive and very child like in the beginning. And it is this nature that draw MC to him and MC feel for him first. ML is so innocent that when he and MC was testing their powers at school and MC protected ML people make a vulgar remark and then ML is like .... ????. MC was surprised as he found out ML is not dumb just a bit autistic and actually have perfect memory and is pure like a child. So he test ML computer and found out that it has been set to 11/12 years setting so no xxx rated item and yet ML also not given what toddler was given on sex education. ML also suffer from skin dependency and is sticky to MC which he enjoy as his childhood was depraved of touch. So when ML was given the first toddler level sex education on how to identify who is a pervert and to stay away from these people, funny situation occur. The course was given by the Guan to ML as he noted MC is getting close to ML who is too innocent, and ML react by avoiding MC. Then when MC confront him ML said he is sorry he is a pervert and MC not to get angry. MC was surprised and reassured ML and ML explained cause he like to touch MC and also at one time he undress MC (when MC over trained) so he is a pervert. Then MC found out ML has been given toddler level info and was confusing himself between protecting himself and identifying himself as a pervert (MC did not let Guan know so he can still enjoy ML stickiness). :ROFLMAO:
    Later ML level got upgraded so he began to understand that he like MC and he even told his grandfather that once he reached 18 he is going to marry MC. His grandfather is like ..... then ok my grandson is the one wooing person so i should support him :LOL:. So we came to a situation where the shou ML in his innocence is so much straightforward then MC and even announce to all about his intentions with MC (and they do get married on ML 18th Birthday). ML even see romance novels and wonder at times why MC does not do this and that with him or not react similar to how the novels say (poor ML did not know MC is already over 30 and can control himself). MC and ML is so close that in the recent chapters MC told ML all about his rebirth and his master.

    On MC Master :confused::sneaky: it is a bit funny. MC master is himself, he pretend to be a Level 8 warrior called i do not want to be hungry on the internet and from there get to know ML grandfather. he was surprised and shocked by how ML grandfather react as he go like ‘Ying Ying Ying (crying) why no want to be hungry master no response to me..” acting very fan like. Later when ML also help MC control the account ML also ..... Using this internet name, MC helped ML grandfather by giving him medicine recipe, martial arts method and a lot of others thereby saving his life and making the Chen family rich. ML grandfather think MC is Don’t want to be hungry student as MC ask him to give the money and goods to MC and ML as their wedding gifts and also acknowledge MC as his student (MC become his own student). ML and MC use this internet name to also spread out Fong family martial secrets to wider audience.
     
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    MC was ‘pressured’ to join the challenge and so he agreed to it since he is level 7 and not many people know about it. The Fang family tried to cause problem for him by making him faced off against Ting another strong level 6 challengers in the first place and then weaker people given to YF as his first challenge. Ting and his father are quite the character, Ting is a fan of MC another alternative identity who appear on the internet and analyze all the competitors and their weak points. That actually helped the various competitors to improve. The competition second stage was changed to the outside where it is dangerous (this is Fong plan) and from there MC was attacked by a level 8 warrior who is Zhang a woman. Ting was around in the area and was captured along with MC. The plan was to capture MC to the Fong family secret medicine lab in the outskirts and used that to forced ML to obey them. While there MC and Ting managed to overcome Zhang whose power went crazy and they were crawling back to the base. (Their legs got broken). Then they encounter a scorpion that has similar nature like the Queen Ant and from there they accidentally saw a person on top of a butterfly insect hovering around. MC have a feeling that the monster swarm that hit the other city is due to these special insects and people so they have an agreement with Zhang. She will bring the remaining of the scorpion meat to the base and MC will help to protect her brother who is in another city. MC guess is right and a monster swarm happen and kill off everyone in the secret lab. MC and Ting got rescued by ML and when MC told them about what they saw to prevent possible same thing happening to the capital they pretend to find MC and Ting in a far away place from the site. Ting at this point already realized MC is level 7 and MC has level up to 8 and also that MC is his idol so he pester MC and become his second student.

    MC and Ting managed to reach the base in time for the final competition whereby Ting proceed to defeat YF after MC have taught him all YF tricks. Elder Yong started to become even more angrier with MC and ML and family as he found out about his base and did not believe they have nothing to do with it. Some things happen with Yong causing a number of problem for their family business but the next main plot is Elder Yong used ML step mother to get ML step sister to pretend his brother is in danger and lured their cousin outside resulting in the two girls being kidnapped. YF then called ML and told him to go outside if he want to rescue them and the stepmom keep on saying as long as ML surrender or marry YF all will ok. She did not realized that YF gave instruction not to be too nice to the two girls since ML rejected him. The two girls are tied in bed and feed only water and treated like invalid person and this drove the stepsister crazy esp when the ropes that tied them tighten when there were being rescued. MC is aware of the location of the lab as that is where he was locked up long ago. So he managed to sneak in with Feng (who found out her miscarriage is due to Elder Yong and want revenge) and Chen Hui the cousin father. They managed to rescue the two girls and blow up the laboratory and reveal all the thing done by the elder Fong. The Elder Fong fought with Feng and with MC help they managed to defeat him and MC make it look like his power go crazy forcing him to become a vegetable. This resulted in the splitting of the Fong family and YF being forced off the home and destitute as they all now know he is the son of elder Fong. MC and group started to developed quietly their powers outside and build an army. MC managed to become level 9 with ML help and they also helped ML grandfather and a few other to become level 9 (Grandpa was so happy he did a dance by himself in the room and accidentally sprain his back. Then when they all rush in due to the alarm the computer reveal to them he was sprained and the reason for the sprain making him feel so embarrassing as he always protray a cool person in front of them). Meanwhile YF found in elder Fong leg a mini disc which show the scene of the special man and that ML and him genetics are considered half from the guy. So YF kill off elder Yong and using his funeral gave the disc to Xia the deputy director of the research lab for the country. He expect Xia to rescue him as a source of research material but he did not expect Xia just kill him and extract bit of his blood and meat as material as YF has been followed too closely by MC people. MC tried to find out who did this but to no avail.

    Years pass by and MC is now 30 years and his students all grown into level 8/9 and so do many of the companions. Then during his birthday party, the internet show Xia with a small child that was grown from YF cells. MC and family rush back to capital and disrupt the meeting with the leaders and let them know about the monster swarm and the danger of what they are doing. (These mysterious people, will destroy any city who show research relating to these special monster and that is why MC and gang has been keeping their research a secret). People dont believe then the monster swarm happen and they started fighting. MC and ML went out to look for the mysterious people and they found him but he only wanted to kill them or take MC away as research material. MC managed to defeat him and went up to level 10. It was then they found out the mysterious person is an alien. So they brought him back and interrogate him very easily they found the whole story.

    These aliens are from a peaceful world and one day one of their scientist found out about the unusual monsters like the ant can be used to produce a chemical that can help them to improve their health and lifespan. This medicine is expensive and difficult to get as the monsters are not numerous. So one noble family one day found earth and found out how the people and animal can survive in such polluted situation. Since Earth is so far away, they figure out to use Earth as an experiment base to create more of these monster and do so by putting this radioactive stones on earth mutating earth and its organisms and prevent communication signals on earth and from outer space. This is illegal as they are not supposed to touch the planet if there is intelligent species on it. Things went well for them until one day an intergalactic officer (?) found earth and what they are doing (ML other father) and kill him to hide that they have done. But the officer family is influential and does not give up looking for their son and so they found out there are only 2 other aliens on earth as the other has move away to prevent suspicion. MC and others managed to find and kill the 2 aliens and tigger by accident an rescue signal. The officer parents came and they agreed to help earth people to be visible to wider galaxy to protect them and earth enter into a trade agreement with the family. The story end with MC learning the language so he can go on a honey moon with ML to the outer space although ML insists it is a learning exchange.

    Funny bits of the story
    The ML here is very cute and open - at one point MC being naughty was hinting to ML it would be nice to do dual cultivation and ML just agreed there and then to try it at night.(although it does not work). MC was once jealous of this students as their respective partners left mark on them (Ting partner and him are strange as Zhang will beat Ting on the face as a mark of affection while Chen is more normal with kiss mark) since ML always take care of any marks he left on MC. So MC go around wearing short sleeve / neck to show off the bite mark in front of family (although he always cover it up later). Then during the first fight with the alien, MC was beaten badly but managed to bring down the plane the alien was on and ML was there to give him medicine, ML ended up as the alien hostage. But ML easily just broke hold from the alien and subside him and everyone was like ML is strong (MC took so hard to defeat the alien but ML just so easily subside him)
     
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    The last pargrapgh about MC master is confusing.
     
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    MC needed to have someone to help deter powerful people from going against him and to get resources. So on the internet he pretend to be a high level master called I do not want to be hungry. And he also pretend to be his own student so he can request for his internet friends to help his student since he is far away and not available.
     
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