Misc Romance Idea

Discussion in 'Community Fictions' started by dezzter, Nov 18, 2017.

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  1. dezzter

    dezzter The one who knows

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    So I felt like sharing my idea for a short/medium length romance based in a cultivation world. Now I enjoy reading romance but xianxia/xuanhuan romance always seem to be even when its female mc the male mc basically forces her into relationship and bullies her.

    My idea is that female mc for some reason hates/dislikes male mc but he falls utterly and deeply in love with her. She decides to use him, gaining pills, techniques, resources etc. However his utter devotion to her wears down her negative feelings for him and she slowly falls in love with him too, and after all the time she spent using him doesn't feel like she deserves him and tries to break up with him but he refuses telling her he knew she was using him but just wanted to be near her, to see her and be with her and make her happy. So they stay together in mutual love.

    <3 the end.
     
  2. raltzero

    raltzero Last Year Until BS in IT | Lazy Overlord TL

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    ^ I've read that plot before, not sure where though. Maybe it was one of the Alchemy MCs.
     
  3. Cupcake Ninja

    Cupcake Ninja [Kind Sage][Lord Benevolence][ The Great Paragon]

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    like the idea. Classic, never gets old. Like the drama potential. Would like to see MC be portrayed as kinda an ungrateful bitch at the start. Maybe offer a female rival. A real good one, all prim and proper and nice and cute. The best girl, you'd think. Just to make it more interesting. Have the MC feel like shit for a while, you know? Those are the best stories...
     
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    chencking [Daolord Grammar Nazi]

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    ...Seven Unfortunate Lifetimes?
     
  5. MeoWoe

    MeoWoe [Altair] [Exqúisite]

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    Strongest dan god? Or world defying dan god?
     
  6. Noche

    Noche New Member

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    Great idea, but probably bad execution
     
  7. pirateking36

    pirateking36 [[-Worst King-]]

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    I feel as if I have seen this before
     
  8. Ophis

    Ophis 『God Slayer』 『Dragon God』 『Harem Seeker』

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    You practically just described 90% of the Chinese novels with female MCs. Moreover, too much bullshit drama in that, not nice.
     
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  9. Underload

    Underload <I need someone to scratch my back!>

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    dont forget cheesy lines and embarassing situations.
     
  10. raltzero

    raltzero Last Year Until BS in IT | Lazy Overlord TL

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    Maybe WDDG. :blobdrool:
     
  11. Ophis

    Ophis 『God Slayer』 『Dragon God』 『Harem Seeker』

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    Sorry, but how the hell did you manage to link WDDG with any of the OP's 'idea' of plot? It has none of that...

    Strongest Dan God has none of that as well as far as I remember. I didn't get past 130 chapters though, so who knows.


    It for sure isn't World Defying Dan God. That I can assure you.
     
  12. SilverJoker

    SilverJoker Well-Known Member

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    The concept is good but you need to provide a background story for the female and explain more in depths her motives and reasoning as well as her justification for deceiving said male. The more complex thoughts emotions and feelings you weave into a novel the more rich and flavorful the finished product.