Poem Sunder

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  1. Lazriser

    Lazriser Well-Known Member

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    Upon a touch of darkness, daylight killed another.

    A beguiling light of profound disarray; where O was ye yesterday?

    For second chance a gander as time commits a blunder.

    Where O where – that shadow goes – to stage foul play, tomorrow? Nay!

    So prayer finds another; sorrow, another hand it meets…

    That saints and demons shall never greet nor shake gestures of display.

    O come the mighty and low, for all shall know decay, that even sand must obey!

    I pray we never meet nor discuss the works of Man, because I too know…

    You killed a man.​
     
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  2. GembelELITE

    GembelELITE low-profile member

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    Poem must be like this[​IMG]
     
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  3. Nathan

    Nathan Not-staving graduate

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    Cool beans.
     
  4. thelurker

    thelurker [The Crazy Guy] Death to All BL Novels

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    Go home your drunk
     
  5. Zomula

    Zomula Well-Known Member

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    You seem to be all over the place with your poem. I'm not even sure what it is supposed to be about.
     
  6. Theo Thanasia

    Theo Thanasia Medicine Master

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    *did not read
     
  7. kuroAnsatsu

    kuroAnsatsu Realistically Stoic

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    Best poem
     
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