Novel The Daughter of Typical Protagonist

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  1. Raebit

    Raebit Well-Known Member

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    Hello! I somehow came up with random ideas hehehe, and I write it down, since posting things make me more motivated so I post it here!

    I'm sorry if there's grammar error or typo, please do kindly correct me.

    I hope this will become a lively thread, and I become better at explaining things. >U<

    Synopsis
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    Have you ever wonder becoming the child of a protagonist?
    Is it a blessing you got his DNA?
    What’s with this clichè scence?!

    “I’m tired with all of this, can I skip this unskipable event?”

    This is a random story about his child.

    Genre : Parody / Comedy

    This story is also posted on ScribbleHub

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    Raebit Well-Known Member

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    Chapter 1
    "I love you Rin-chan!! You're the best!" He smiled like a pervert(?).

    "S-stupid! I dont like you or anything li..like that!" Yet she said it with full blush.


    Sigh.


    They're at it again.


    "Shouta don't be like our parent okay?" I said it to my little brother.


    "Un?" Yea he's still a one-year-old, maybe he probably doesn't get it.


    "I have some leftover so" the blushing twintail woman said so while giving a lunchbox, that she actually made for us this morning


    "Rin-chan!"


    "Don't..don't misunderstand you idiot!"


    Can I skip this scence already?


    I want to yell at them, "YOU'RE ALREADY MARRIED AND HAVE ME WHY ARE YOU STILL ACTING LIKE A TSUNDERE?!", you think its rude to yell at your own parent? Yeah, I know that, but they do it all the time! After seeing it so many times how can you not?


    Pip pip pip


    Uh oh my alarm clock is ringing, I'm going to be late.

    "Mother, Shouta" I give my little brother to the blushing woman.

    "O..okay A-chan" she was kinda startled but held him carefully.


    I tugged my father's shirt "Father let's go, we're already late"

    "A-chan, why are you calling me father not daddy anymore?"


    No I dont want to call you daddy after I recovered my past memory, who wants to call you daddy again?!


    "Next year I will be an elementary student father"


    "But..--"


    "Lets go" I walked away.


    "A-chan is so cold Q A Q, and its not late, still early" he mutter.


    "Mother we will be going now"


    "Take care" she said as she patted my head.


    If we are any later than now, 'they' will be coming, and I...

    "Kya!!" A highschool girl fell into my father


    "Wha--" he tried to grab her by the shoulders so she didn't fall.


    Oh for goodness sake, they're already here.


    "I-i'm so-- kya!" She slapped him because rather than her shoulders, he grabbed her breast.


    "I'm sorry I didn't mean to!" He panicked but I bet he's like 'Oh lucky me! Hehe' look at his face.

    "Uuu...I-It's okay! It's my own fault I'm sorry for slapping you even though you tried to help me" she cast down her head feeling guilty.


    "Are you alright?" He said while checking on her, his face is in 100% ikemen mode, did you just forgot about your own child and wife, father? What's with this pink aura?!


    "I..im alright" she started blushing, oh no, did another victim just fall for father? I need to end this.


    "Father.."


    "Oh- umm" she stared at me awkwardly, yes he already has a child.

    "Yes, I know, Well then, be careful and don't run" he nod and taking care of the girl.


    "Y..yes!"


    Finally!!! She's gone!!, I hope there's no second accide--

    "Kya!!"


    .....Are you kidding me?


    Author note:

    Thank you Ophious and Fuble for correcting the grammar and typos.
     
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    Ophious Pathfinder kinda fun

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    "Yeah, I know that, but they do it all the time! After seeing it so many times how can you not?"
    "Uh oh my alarm clock is ringing, I'm going to be late."
    "she was kinda startled but held him carefully."
    I tugged my father's shirt "Father let's go, we're already late"
    "A-chan, why are you calling me father and not daddy~?"
    "Take care" she said as she patted my head.
    If we are any later than now, 'they' will be coming, and I...
    "Kya!!" A highschool girl crashed into my father (I don't think fell is the right word
    he tried to grab her by the shoulders so she didn't fall.
    Oh for goodness sake, they're already here.
    "I-i'm so-- kya!" She slapped him because rather than her shoulders, he grabbed her breast.
    "I'm sorry I didn't mean to!" He panicked but I bet he's like 'Oh lucky me! Hehe' look at his face.
    "Are you alright?" He said while checking on her, his face is in 100% ikemen mode, did you just forgot about your own child and wife, father? What's with this pink aura?!
    "I..I'm alright" she started blushing, oh no, did another victim just fall for father? I need to end this.
    "Oh- umm" she stared at me awkwardly, yes he already has a child.
    Finally!!! She's gone!!, I hope there's no second accide--
    I think it'd be better to word it as "Have you ever wanted to become the child of a protagonist?"
    he's still a one-year-old, I don't see why you said "maybe he is confused" maybe it would be better to say, "he probably doesn't get it."
    Instead of Tsundere-ing, it should probably be "WHY ARE YOU STILL ACTING LIKE A TSUNDERE?!"
    "Yes, I know, Well then, be careful and don't run" he nod and taking care of the rest. (I have no idea what you mean by he nod and taking care of the rest.)

    I liked the concept of the story, hope you show how the kid also inherited the dad's ability and how he seems to predict what everyone around him will do and how to deal with it
     
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    SquirFail The One Who Forgets, Dreamer, Observer

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    now waiting for more chapters
     
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    SquirFail The One Who Forgets, Dreamer, Observer

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    as much as i like the premise of the story i just hope the daughter doesnt inherent much of her father's skill maybe a degenerated version or something different but has the almost same concept or a combination of the parents foundation of their skill
     
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    Raebit Well-Known Member

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    Thank you very much !! //// I'm glad you like it <3
    Its OK! I will correct all of them, Im grateful for your correction, thank you!

    Yes I will add it on future :blobxd:
    What I mean he taking care the rest is he finished the conversation with the girl and ask her to continue her way to school.
     
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    Chapter 2
    Finally I arrived at kindergarten! Free from those girls!

    "Well then, I will go first father"

    "Have a nice day A-chan, I'm going to work now" he patted my head.

    "Good morning Akari-chan!" one of my classmate greet me.

    "Good morning.." I replied, and went to toilet tidying my hair in front of mirror. It reflected a five-years-old girl, a pair of blue eyes, black hair with red ribbon, my current appereance as Akari Shujinko.

    Even though I look like this I'm actually way more older I think?, I don't remember much about my past life beside I'm an avid reader of manga and light novel with their content and terms, and I have older brother.

    Okay, let’s organize my thought from my past knowledge, every people that was reincarnated to other world were either summoned to become a hero, giving second life by god because he made mistake, reincarnated becoming a villanous lady, they have a grudge so their willpower make them reincarnated, becoming protagonist of a story that has been published, but...I'm not in that typical plotline, Hm.. From what I learn a few days ago,

    1. I think this world isn’t fantasy or RPG like. Peaceful one?
    2. One for sure I'm not the villain and I don't think I'm a protagonist of a story neither, I never read story with this type of reincarnation..
    3. What I consider normal becoming absurd after I recovered my memory past.
    4. There’s no tutorial, introduction, or ‘I’m sorry I killed you by mistake’ plot neither?
    5. I don’t know my role in this world, nor purpose being here.
    6. My family contain: mother who is a tsundere, younger brother, and a father attract lots of female like typical protagonist with ecchi genre.
    Wait..typical protagonist? And I’m his child? Come think of it, I have conversation about it with my big brother!

    "Here it goes another girl! Is Kurumi the next one who fall?"

    "I think the next one is Erika, look at her eyes."

    "But I'm pretty sure it's Kurumi, shall we bet?"

    "Sure, 2 pudding?"

    "OK!"

    "Hey big brother"

    "Hm?"

    "I wonder why those girl fall for that guy, he's kinda remind me of n*bita but worse, he's a coward, good for nothing on top of that a delusional pervert who want to built a harem, how can she fall in love with that disgusting expression? how can that thing loved by beauties? there's plenty of fish in sea why bother insist on that puny fish?"

    "Hmm.. maybe because he's earnest?"

    "Well I think there's another male more earnest and reliable than him?"

    “That’s true, maybe she like oddball ?”

    “They’re all have the same taste??”

    “That’s kinda difficult..”

    “Did he implant some of black magic behind the scence?”

    “Lil sis, The most easiest way to explain all of it is”

    “Love is blind isn’t it?”

    “Hahaha, you got me!”

    “I wonder about their child”

    “Hm?”

    “They’re so unlucky to have him as his parent, look at the way he attract all those female with that ecchi scene, it’s not good for child growth”

    “You’re complaining so much, what if you’re the one becoming his child?”

    “Ew! Don’t jinx me!, this is real life not fantasy!”

    “Hahaha”

    Aaaaaa is it karma for always mocking of protagonist with my brother?? Big bro, your little sister have become his child, it’s your fault!! Curse you for jinxed me!!
     
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