Synopsis: A youth and his fire ferret finds an unusual coin. After a life of hardships, he maintains true to his nature while he discovers the mystery of this unusual coin. Unfortunately, life had other plans for him and his involvement in certain affairs leads him to several adventures. Book 1 Chapter 1.1 Chapter 1.2 Each chapter should be at least 3k words
I don't really find anything bad in terms of writing. The only thing is that it's not my Taste and I found it somehow boring but it's probably because I watched too many actions movies and novels.
its a good start. you might wanna alter the title though - either "the coin master" or "master of the coin" "the master of coin" is somehow awkward. you can also get an editor to change the redundant statements - i.e. "young brown haired youth" to simply "brown-haired youth" good luck. hope you continue this. ganbatte