Short Story The Remnant

Discussion in 'Community Creations' started by Balthazzar, Dec 21, 2016.

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If I was to continue, how would you want it to go?

  1. 3rd person omnicient for the war over the throne

    6 vote(s)
    40.0%

  2. 3rd person limited for one person that is vying for the throne

    3 vote(s)
    20.0%

  3. 3rd person reincarnation

    6 vote(s)
    40.0%

  4. dont continue because your story is shit

    0 vote(s)
    0.0%
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  1. Negias

    Negias 『Average Smulenians』『Normal Passerby』『Chaos Lover』

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    haha nice story...
     
    Negias, Dec 21, 2016
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  2. Balthazzar

    Balthazzar 『Reformed Member of NuF Society』

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    thx....
     
    Balthazzar, Dec 21, 2016
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  3. Cohran

    Cohran [Androphobic] [Humble Baker™]

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    Are you waiting on the poll results to write more?
     
    Cohran, Dec 21, 2016
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    I always op and vote for first.

    1st is love and life

    #sonotolastoptions
     
    Deleted member 41274, Dec 21, 2016
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  5. Balthazzar

    Balthazzar 『Reformed Member of NuF Society』

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    Screenshot_2016-12-21-08-31-00.png Screenshot_2016-12-21-08-31-50.png
     
    Balthazzar, Dec 21, 2016
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  6. Balthazzar

    Balthazzar 『Reformed Member of NuF Society』

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    Balthazzar, Dec 21, 2016
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  7. Clown333

    Clown333 「Altiora Petamus Volente Deo Lucete Stellae」

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    Balthazzar san, you're pretty harsh to yourself aren't you? Putting the 4th options.

    People who didn't understand will choose the 4th. But my heart told me to choose option 1 till 3. Shortly vote for no. 1. No. 3 is my second best choice.

    You're story is great. Even still with no dialogue, the flowing is magnificent. I'm wavering between 1 or 3 is due to this reason.
     
    Clown333, Dec 21, 2016
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  8. Balthazzar

    Balthazzar 『Reformed Member of NuF Society』

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    rly? That was more of a comedic choice.....

    mmkay

    Yeah.... as far as in-depth fight scenes go, im pretty bad....
    dialogue is average...
    my only strength is thhe story
     
    Balthazzar, Dec 21, 2016
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