The Scum Villain's Self-Saving System fan fiction

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  1. Gav

    Gav [Fairy of the Garden of Evil]

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    ***
    'Luo Binghe' may have been new to this world, but he was still the best cultivator from his own. Taking to the roofs, running up brick, glass and concrete walls and jumping from building to building?

    It was ludicrously easy.

    Any parkour enthusiast would have been horibly envious of his economy of movement, grace and complete accuracy. He never once made a mistep or tripped.

    Tracking Shen Yuan's dated, dull car through an urban environment was thus more like a jaunt through a rather eyecatching, loud environment rather than any kind of actual obstacle.

    Once again because of his lack of understanding, he was the target of smartphones. This time however, he was moving too rapidly for the phones to catch up, and so all people got were blurred shadows.

    The 'clinic' in question was in a tall glass and stone building, and he simply hid himself in the shadows to eavesdrop as Shen Yuan parked his car, locked it up and then spoke to the doorman to tell him what clinic he had been told to go to.

    In response, the doorman told him what floor it was on and gave him directions. This entire conversation being spoken in soft voices, no normal person would have overheard them... but there was nothing normal about 'Luo Binghe'.

    Since he didn't want Shen Yuan to see him, he took the shortest route up. That is to say, he ran up the actual walls to the floor specified by the man, catching sight of Shen Yuan as he left the elevator and following him along the concrete ledges.

    It was a sight that would have been fit for the best wuxia and xianxia films and 'Luo Binghe' quite put ninjas to shame before Shen Yuan reached his destination.

    The clinic in question was discreet, as could be expected of a clinic that catered to such high flying clientele as Yue Qingyuan. He had made quite a name for himself in high society after all and any hint of impropriety would have drawn papparazzi to him like vultures.

    Once upon a time, this would have been Shen Yuan's sphere of influence, too. But that was a long time ago.

    Here is what is known of the Shen Family. In previous generations they had swung wildly from aristocracy to poverty, back to aristocracy again. They had many acclaimed beauties and many tragic deaths. They were very sought after in their day. And the last direct scion of this line had sold the company to his uncle and gone full recluse.

    The uncle in question had been a media sensation until his own death by overdose on drugs, sleeping pills and alcohol.
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  2. Gav

    Gav [Fairy of the Garden of Evil]

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    Added more content, guys, a large chunk of it. You may want to reload it and read the last part again.

    Next part incoming after breakfast and bath.
     
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    heartantares One Who Provides Uselessly Detailed Information

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    you mean a chunk added to the part on this page or do you mean the previous page.....
     
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    Gav [Fairy of the Garden of Evil]

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    a chunk to the last post because when I finished editing in the bits about Shen family I discovered two people already liked that post so I thought they might have missed the last bit.
     
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    :3 mhmm yes that's the stuff
     
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    Gav [Fairy of the Garden of Evil]

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    'Luo Binghe' had originally intended to seat himself comfortably on the nearest concrete ledge. Alas, the clinic's windows were covered by drapes and he wanted a good view.

    Well, there were ways to solve that problem. He simply pried one of the larger windows open, snuck in, closed it behind him and then hid himself. There were many places to hide, since after all, this clinic had been furnished and laid out to avoid cameras.

    Thus, he had a front row seat at Shen Yuan's arrival and meeting with Yue Qingyuan.

    Yue Qingyuan looked well, as handsome and glowing with health as 'Luo Binghe' had ever seen him in those years when he had still been under Shen Qingqiu's tutelage. He was clearly worried, brow furrowed, lips turned down. His hair was tied back simply, flowing down his back. He wore a crisp western suit, albeit a much less shabby or worn one than Shen Yuan customarily wore to his teaching job. It was sharply fitted and exquisitely tailored, right down to the vest.

    It became him very well.

    Despite this, he didn't hesitate to reach out to embrace Shen Yuan with the fervency of a brother, the darkness in his eyes relieved by seeing him seemingly intact. "I was worried for you." He said, not letting go, tracing those fine features with his gaze. Thinner, more fragile, ah, his brother in all but blood had fallen upon some hard times lately.

    He would have to remedy that. No one seemed to be taking care of Shen Yuan. It was unfair. So unfair.

    "You have not been calling as often as you used to, these past few years. You look as if you have not been sleeping or eating well," he added, anxiously taking in the sight of his friend.

    Or dressing well. Yue Qingyuan knew that suit. It was from years back. That Shen Yuan wasn't buying new suits implied that he had never bothered to get new clothes for himself since he had gone somewhat reclusive.

    "You should not have fallen so far, brother. Why did you not ask for my help?"

    Shen Yuan was indeed much paler than he, a pallor comparable to porcelain, but one clearly caused by ill health. The warm eyes had the beginnings of panda circles, the wrist he was checking for its pulse seeming fragile to the worried CEO.

    Gesturing to the doctors to have them see to his friend now, because it seemed he had been under even more stress and ill health than when they had last met, Yue Qingyuan could not help but worry.

    'Luo Binghe' frowned. His ears had practically pricked up at the words Yue Qingyuan had spoken. It seemed that this Yue Qingyuan had known him for years and was warmly welcomed. More importantly, it seemed like the man who he wanted to keep was in ill health.

    Shen Yuan sighed in resignation. Ah, yes, the usual interrogation. His eyes locked on to those much loved features with melancholy and his lips quirked up in a smile. "I am as well as can be expected, elder brother."

    They did not look a thing alike.

    "We shall see what the doctors say." Yue Qingyuan frowned. Shen Yuan was attempting to deflect his attention from his health again. This was not acceptable.

    To his discomfort, 'Luo Binghe' found the obvious affection between them was pinching his heart in a way that irritated him.

    Being shortly swarmed with doctors, Shen Yuan sighed and submitted himself to the indignity. His pulse was taken, he had to have his weight taken, and then he was told to take off the coat, tie and shirt.

    At which point both Yue Qingyuan and the surreptitiously watching 'Luo Binghe' received an unpleasant surprise.

    Shen Yuan's shoulders and waist were covered with a blooming profusion of rapidly purpling bruises.

    Were those finger marks?

    Yes, those were very visible finger marks.

    Fuck. FUUUUCK.

    'Luo Binghe' remembered his and his counterpart's actions earlier, wincing internally. So, Shen Yuan's eyes had been damp because they were injuring him? He should have been more careful. Would have to be more careful, if he was going to ever take the man to his bed.

    Fragile and breakable like fine porcelain? Those bruises were not a good sign.

    Yue Qingyuan made a pathetic noise of pure distress and quickly demanded the nearest nurse bring forth a goddamn rape kit.

    Shen Yuan covered his face with his palm. This was going downhill just as he had predicted.
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  7. Gav

    Gav [Fairy of the Garden of Evil]

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    For reference.
     
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    scriptor 『Sigilmaster』 『Immortal Sage』

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    SY is so done lol.

    ...will LBH 'coincidentally' fall inside this secure building when he hears about SY's health report? XD
     
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    Gav [Fairy of the Garden of Evil]

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    :V WELL.
    I. uh.
    Dunno?
    PM me ideas and suggestions?
     
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    heartantares One Who Provides Uselessly Detailed Information

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    ahhh forget the health report.... think of his reaction to what needs to be done with a rape kit................... ........ ...... . . . . *imagines him busting into the room grabbing the exposed shen yuan and crashing through the window of the 13th floor giving yue qingyuan a heart attack from the double suicide while hundreds of people see their figures flying through the cement jungle.....* I dont think he would ever hear the health report.....
     
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    Yeah then he decides to protect SY himself since he's realized how fragile he is. Then we get to watch Stockholm set in
     
  12. Gav

    Gav [Fairy of the Garden of Evil]

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    Let us just say this afternoon's (or tomorrow's) post will be interesting.

    But no, there will be no jumping out of buildings.
     
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    heartantares One Who Provides Uselessly Detailed Information

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    Boooo..... then then then how about a sleep over at YueQ's house and LuoB coming to visit him in the middle of the night to pick ShenY up(Red: sneaking in and shaking YueQ down for what he knows).....

    *edits* I really did wanna see them flying through the sky together superman style..... imagine how cold and terrifying it would be for ShenY. *Grins*
     
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    Yes, please make this happen. It would be so cute and hilarious
     
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    Gav [Fairy of the Garden of Evil]

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    You'll be disappointed then. No superman antics in the next post.
     
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    I doubt it. This is just me fanficing about a fanfic. Your plot and flow is going really well. I've enjoyed every part so far :D
     
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    heartantares One Who Provides Uselessly Detailed Information

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    boooo thought so, cuz it would completely give away that LuoB is completely out of his world(Wooo, word play). Though it would be funny to see how ShenY feels about the now alien abductor instead of crazed slasher....

    Edit: But there will be superman antics in the future right(just not near)?
     
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    Gav [Fairy of the Garden of Evil]

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    Sore wa himitsu desu.
     
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    Gav [Fairy of the Garden of Evil]

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    Shifuuuuuuu, it looks like I will have at least one disciple now! Your disciple has gone up in the world! \(*-*)/

    :oops: D-does this make you the Grandmaster chubby unicorn of our sect?
     
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    heartantares One Who Provides Uselessly Detailed Information

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    Gav-sama, himitsu janaika? Oshiete kudasai ~

    p.s. brb I should probably eat dinner before it gets rescinded.
     
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