The Scum Villain's Self-Saving System fan fiction

Discussion in 'Community Creations' started by alexfilia, Jun 6, 2017.

  1. Chiiiiiiiii

    Chiiiiiiiii >Daoist Thirteen Bears< >Hero Astral Saber<

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    He forgot to say that he probably is from another world!
    And his student's version at that!
    Though, if he went to their world by accident or because he wanted to kill another Shen Yuan is another thing..........
     
  2. Gav

    Gav [Fairy of the Garden of Evil]

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    ...Shen Yuan doesn't think this Luo Binghe is from another world. He doesn't even know if other worlds exist.

    As has been mentioned, the closest Shen Yuan has gotten to that concept is that original Luo Binghe's from a place with no toilets.
     
  3. DJdragone

    DJdragone Commander of Food/Gav's Right hand Bun/leg lord

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    Ah yes the stockholm syndrom has already set in fall deeper into the abyss shen yuan your almost there fall deeper and deeper until you can fall no more :D
     
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  4. Gav

    Gav [Fairy of the Garden of Evil]

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    dude. You haven't even seen part 3 of this segment yet.
     
  5. Gav

    Gav [Fairy of the Garden of Evil]

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    ***
    In general, no one ever likes to hear negative things being spoken behind their backs.

    'Luo Binghe' certainly didn't.

    The fact that it was someone who he wanted to keep only made it worse. He had thought that Shen Yuan found him attractive, and was paying those pleasant attentions to him because of that, so to hear this account from his very lips?

    That was both painful and infuriating.

    But the facts of the matter were, Shen Yuan didn't know he was here, and as upset as 'Luo Binghe' was, he had to be honest with himself. He had frightened the man on purpose when they had first met, to test his mettle.

    Would it be fair to hold this obvious fear against him, when he had been the one to provoke it in the first place, for his own amusement?

    No. No, it was not. He had reveled in the fear he saw in the man's eyes and now that he desired him, it seemed that he had struck a deeper blow than he knew, or intended to.

    He had sabotaged himself.

    To give him credit, despite the rather harrowing description Shen Yuan had given of their first meeting, he did not seem inclined to betray him, nor abandon him to come to harm.

    Shen Yuan had not called these 'police' because he didn't want 'Luo Binghe' shot, harmed or killed. From these words, 'Luo Binghe' could only assume that these 'police' were archers or projectile shooters of some sort.

    Naturally he marked this 'Yue Qingyuan' as willing to have him killed, and as a possible enemy because of it, but he stayed still as a grave, to hear the rest.

    ***
     
  6. DJdragone

    DJdragone Commander of Food/Gav's Right hand Bun/leg lord

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    I have seen and i must say big luo you have fucked up but dont worry yuan yuan will come around
     
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  7. Gav

    Gav [Fairy of the Garden of Evil]

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    :LOL::ROFLMAO::LOL::ROFLMAO:
     
  8. Luen

    Luen One Who Silences The TMI Onigiri Kitty

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    Errrr, @Gav pls tell me ur not going to kill off Yue. One dead Yue in the origworld was enough, I don't wanna see this poor cinnamon roll get killed by Luo Binghe again :'( Peaceful solutions are still a thing rite?
     
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  9. Gav

    Gav [Fairy of the Garden of Evil]

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    I can assure you that if Luo Binghe were to kill Yue Qingyuan, Shen Yuan would finish filing the papers for adoption for little Binghe, pass over all of his money and then go follow Qingyuan to the underworld.

    That would be bad end time.
     
  10. Luen

    Luen One Who Silences The TMI Onigiri Kitty

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    Huh, maybe it's cause of all the angst novels I've been reading or maybe bc I'm just kinda twisted, but that sounds like a pretty good ending to me :)

    Note: I got REALLY invested in scum villain after the abyss scene so yeah...

    Oh n with Liu Qingge's personality u could try an actual triad boss, police, or other fighting related careers with a backstory of him being more Yue's friend at first. He and Shen meet back when Shen was still participating among the rich and they become friends. If u go with the police route u could say that part of the reason Shen doesn't want the police involved is because liu would get involved n possibly be killed by Luo binghe. Based on how u've depicted Shen yuan as someone who cares about his friends a lot it could add more depth(?) to his forceful refusal to get the police involved :3
     
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    Gav [Fairy of the Garden of Evil]

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    Whut.
     
  12. Matthew9999

    Matthew9999 Well-Known Member

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    Please don't listen to him. don't want a tragedy, I just wanna see yuan fall for LBH :(
     
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    Gav [Fairy of the Garden of Evil]

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    LBH had better get his game on, then.

    Next post for this day is scheduled for 1 hour after lunch. Lunch is an hour from now.
     
  14. heartantares

    heartantares One Who Provides Uselessly Detailed Information

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    My thoughts were LiuQ is secretly from an ancient cultivating family but on surface is a normal person with a very old traditional lineage..... it makes it so he can still fight LuoB to some extent..... but still cant win(he can never win).....
     
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  15. Redo

    Redo 『God Tier Fanon BRO』 『Swordsaint Puppeteer』 \></

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    ....interesting...
     
  16. Gav

    Gav [Fairy of the Garden of Evil]

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    welcome, new lurker!
     
  17. heartantares

    heartantares One Who Provides Uselessly Detailed Information

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    Im still waiting for those phone pics to enter the story.... and that one begonias girl to stalk shen.......
     
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    Gav [Fairy of the Garden of Evil]

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    the phone pics incident is scheduled for a later date. :)
    what begonias?
     
  19. heartantares

    heartantares One Who Provides Uselessly Detailed Information

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    Begonias was her name when i was reading mtl... mmmm the one who made the accusations and got shenQ imprisoned in the water jail the sister or something to the abusive adopting family that took shenQ.
     
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  20. Gav

    Gav [Fairy of the Garden of Evil]

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    I've never read that so it is likely they won't show up in this fic until the chubby unicorn or someone else translates that part for me.