The Scum Villain's Self-Saving System fan fiction

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  1. Matthew9999

    Matthew9999 Well-Known Member

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    Shen just needs to sell his house making services to everyone, then make the richest clan with his disciples
     
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    Gav [Fairy of the Garden of Evil]

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    ....it is like you are reading my mind. :eek: How did you know he would start selling those services?!
     
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    heartantares One Who Provides Uselessly Detailed Information

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    I did i just interpretted it in a way that amuses me and adds more misunderstandings....
     
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    Its what i would do. Get rich and buy all the protection talismans for his little buns so they wont die.
     
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    Gav [Fairy of the Garden of Evil]

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    Let me try this again.

    Original LBH from the actual novel killed 'his' SQQ.

    He then starts finding himself seeing SQQ in dreams.

    The first SQQ he meets is the one from the canon novel, the SY one.

    The second, who gets killed/tortured to death a lot is G!SQQ.
     
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    Gav [Fairy of the Garden of Evil]

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    to be honest, G intends to take up learning how to make those himself, too. :V
     
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    heartantares One Who Provides Uselessly Detailed Information

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    O.... i wasreferring to the plant when i wrote that.... i dropped the 2 shen thing in my mind already... hmmm... when did i....?
     
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    Gav [Fairy of the Garden of Evil]

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    the punishment section happens soon. I just need to clarify how the whole punishment thing happens in the mtl. :V
     
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    heartantares One Who Provides Uselessly Detailed Information

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    I thought he gets sent a visit to OLuoB in his dreams each day that G does something that derails..... (a.i. every night) it'll be fun and LuoB gets a wierd GshenQ to play with.....(one that wont die and keeps coming back for more)............ (its really frightening to OLuoB)....... (this GShenQ that keeps haunting him like a ghost after torturing and killing OShenQ)
     
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    once shen realizes that the dream is the original plot and the villian is his disciple im interested to see how he will react. Will he try to follow novel mc and go all tsundere or will he just spoil LBH, rather suffer in a dream than reality
     
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    Or will just be a villain that destroy harems? lol
     
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    Gav [Fairy of the Garden of Evil]

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    The first part of this is is actually semi accurate. G earns points by earning good rep but loses points when he goes OOC. Hence, he will end up in punishment zone a lot.

    It's not so much won't die as 'dies, vanishes and reappears whole the next night'.
    I don't really see this as frightening to OTL LBH.
    Let me put it this way. G has no idea who the fucker is who keeps beating him to death. He mentally dubs him 'That Fucker'.
    By the time he realizes his universe's LBH is somehow related to THAT FUCKER, his universe's LBH will be attached to him.
     
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    Hey since shen will go to LBH in his dreams, whose dream will it technically be? Because wouldnt it be interesting if he explains thats hes shen from a different universe which makes LBH attempt to go to a different universe? Either going to him or tying it to your first fanfic
     
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    in canon, SQQ ends up making his disciples run around the mountain to correct their running postures (and I think as a distraction? during an omake) so I'm wondering whether you'll make G's little buns go through exercises and sports
     
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    this shen will probably use candy as the carrot for the little buns and math as the stick for the big buns to foster jealousy and hate xD
     
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    Uuu.... i edited my previous post...... its frightening.... also its a dream to both parties? Or just G.... also if its both parties consider that LuoB supposibly mastered his control over dreams..... and G still pops up from time to time....
     
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    ....G is from VROF:Spacebattles.

    This means after getting the little buns go through training and making them get things right, G throws them into monster hunting. Because the way of the VROF:Spacebattler is the way of the Murderhobo.

    If you read my posts, he basically trained himself in replicating and bootlegging anime attacks. He did that while dragging his poor unfortunate little buns and big buns with him as a thin excuse. Then he made them try to copy what they saw him doing.
     
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    Gav [Fairy of the Garden of Evil]

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    Ahahahahahaha. You will see.
    Fairly close, but not quite there.
    It's rather hard for big buns to hate little buns when big buns are told regularly that their crazy shifu is doing this on purpose.
     
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    But shen still thinks its working since they are teenagers. It would be really funny to have a chap of the mc doing this while laughing manically in his head while rveyone else just looks at him awkwardly
     
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    Gav [Fairy of the Garden of Evil]

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    XD I'm going with it being both parties. which may get LBH interested.