The Scum Villain's Self-Saving System fan fiction

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  1. Gav

    Gav [Fairy of the Garden of Evil]

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    ATDSVT: The B Side
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    Luo Binghe had brushed his hands over his teacher's shoulders, one after, over the man's lean frame more than a half dozen times and instead of fear or recognition as a response, all he had gotten was confusion and exasperation, and the words, "When I told you to stick close to me until we could find shelter, I didn't mean that close!"

    So far, the man had managed to channel spiritual energy through the two obsidian swords to make cutting beams of light. Very interesting technique which meant he had to destroy those swords and literally disarm him later. He had killed the acid spitting giant beast with it, taken off his outer robes, and used them to wrap up large meat slices he had hacked from the beast, making an improvised sack full of food. He had tossed rocks at the watering holes' red creatures to kill them to acquire water.

    And he had shared these equally with Luo Binghe which was both intriguing and incredibly infuriating at the same time.

    This was how he treated people who weren't Luo Binghe?

    Luo Binghe wanted to strip him naked, break his arms and legs so he couldn't run off or fight back, and get his hands inside him, literally, to see how he ran so hot and cold.

    At the same time, he didn't want to kill him. He just wanted to feel inside him, see the look in his eyes. Claim him in all ways and make sure Shizun could never forget him again.

    If Shen Qingqiu knew what he was thinking, he knew the man would run for his life. He would only have the advantage of surprise once before the man knew to avoid him or flee on sight, so he had best savor it and make certain his Shizun couldn't flee.

    As it was, the man was right. The sandstorm outside their makeshift cave shelter was sharp enough to flay flesh and skin from bones. The screams of creatures outside attested to that.

    The ashen pale look on Shen Qingqiu's face at the sounds of dying beasts only whetted Luo Binghe's hunger. He clearly didn't know that the bigger threat was in the cave with him, Luo Binghe thought with an odd, unreasoning affection, as he gazed at that familiar face.

    Today, those eyes hadn't glared at him, those lips hadn't parted to curse viciously at him. There had been no hot tea thrown at him, and the man was currently cooking meat for him with surprising facility using bone splinters as skewers. The improvised waterskin made out of one of the beasts' insides had been shared between them equally. His injuries, those few of them which he had allowed to happen to test the man, had been tended to, and wrapped in bandages torn from Shen Qingqiu's outer robe.

    Was this how it would have been, had he been anyone else?

    He was not going to deny himself any longer.

    "Shizun," he said as the meal had ended, beckoning him. "Come here."

    Clueless, the man came over to his position with furrowed brows.

    He tugged him down, pushed him one-handed to the ground, pinned him like a startled butterfly who was just starting to struggle.

    Leaning down,he softly said against the now panicking Shen Qingqiu's neck. "Shizun mustn't reject me again."

    Right before he dislocated his shoulders one after the other, savoring Shen Qingqiu's cries of shock and pain as they resounded against his chest, pinned as he was. He let the cries soften to sobbed breaths, gazing at him all throughout.

    Ah, there was the fear, and a pleasing dampness of shed tears. Still no recognition, though, so he would try harder. The left arm was torn off next, causing Shen Qingqiu to spasm in his arms, screaming, the struggling to intensify, right before the left leg then joined it.

    "Shizun mustn't run away from me," Luo Binghe frowned slightly, those eyes disturbingly almost affectionate, hungrily taking in every part of his hapless victim. "I don't like it when you run."

    Next, the other arm and the leg were torn off, despite the screaming and the spasming and thrashing.

    Now, he ripped the clothes off, pressing Shen Qingqiu down between him and the pool of blood under them on the ground.

    Ah... soft skin. He pressed his face against the elegant neck, felt the struggles weaken due to blood loss, sealed those wounds causing Shen Qingqiu to spasm and scream again again.

    Nuzzling the smooth neck, he traced a single line down the gracefully sculpted abdomen which tensed, fluttering under his fingers as his fingers traced the curves under them, before sliding down to peel off the last shreds of his victim's modesty, smiling at the terror in Shen Qingqiu's eyes.

    [THE FOLLOWING SCENE IS TOO GRAPHIC TO BE DISPLAYED ON THIS SYSTEM. DATA EXPUNGED!]

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  2. heartantares

    heartantares One Who Provides Uselessly Detailed Information

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    Thats what the traitor yueQ and the buns are for. They stuck around when thevreal shenQ was evil they'll stick around when GShenQ loses his mind..... (they already think hes crazy)
     
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    misminor Well-Known Member

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    If LBH keeps encountering SQQs that are so different from his own, I wonder if he'd ever come to the conclusion that maybe this was SQQ's original personality and maybe a mission in the past fucked SQQ up or something (like a curse or evil artifact or whatever) to turn him into the hateful SQQ he knew in his timeline.
     
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    Gav [Fairy of the Garden of Evil]

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    /MANIACAL LAUGHTER
     
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    Luen One Who Silences The TMI Onigiri Kitty

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    Wait but won't G learn from that the faster she gets killed the faster the dream ends so maybe she'll just suicide?
     
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    Gav [Fairy of the Garden of Evil]

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    /MORE MANIACAL LAUGHTER!
     
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    heartantares One Who Provides Uselessly Detailed Information

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    Huh..... sooner or later luoB is gonna figure out then shenQ is pre meeting him and guilt himself into believing it was his own fault for screwing up his shenQ's mind into hating his guts beyond reason......
     
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    Gav [Fairy of the Garden of Evil]

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    /Can no longer breath because of MANIACAL LAUGHTER
     
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    heartantares One Who Provides Uselessly Detailed Information

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    *Hands an empty paper bag and a cup of water*
     
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    I can just imagine lbh thinking to himself that he may be the cause of shen's intense hatred for him in some wierd paradoxical way. Then lbh doing everything he can to apologize and remedy their relationship.
     
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    Gav [Fairy of the Garden of Evil]

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    /NO AIR; ONLY CACKLING
     
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    misminor Well-Known Member

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    Huh. Then he'll probably be wondering what sort of cursed artifact would displace SQQ in time and then look into hunting it down so SQQ never meets LBH's future-self which ends up (at least in LBH's opinion) causing SQQ to have so much prejudice against mini!LBH because of SQQ and LBH's interactions in the future.
     
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    Gav [Fairy of the Garden of Evil]

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    /Wheezes pathetically
     
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    Matthew9999 Well-Known Member

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    Im really looking forward to the next couple chapters.
     
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    Gav [Fairy of the Garden of Evil]

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    Were these chapters worth the wait? They took me longer than expected.
     
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    misminor Well-Known Member

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    *whispers*
    If both of your fics ever interact, then at least LBH would have an (incorrect) explanation as to why his alternate self in the Modern!Verse has such a close relationship with Shen Yue - because SQQ's modern self had never had the chance to interact with some strange cursed object...
     
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    heartantares One Who Provides Uselessly Detailed Information

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    In other news Survival week day 2. refridgerated rice(remicrowaved) with airfried block of tofu, drizzled with soysauce and louisiana hotsauce. Day 2: COMPLETED
     
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    Gav [Fairy of the Garden of Evil]

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    Ara, you have such interesting ideas~!
     
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    heartantares One Who Provides Uselessly Detailed Information

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    They were worth waiting. Though I kinda miss the buns..... it makes me nervous not knowing what they've been up to during the time their shizun has been unconcious and screaming out in his sleep while nothing they do would wake up G.... (YueQ should feel the guilt)

    P.s. that cup of frozen matcha soymilk from yesterday was pretty yummy.
     
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    Gav [Fairy of the Garden of Evil]

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    /cackling more
    Because G's system is [fucked up], he'll wake up and the first thing he will do is crawl to the side of the bed, summon up a wooden urn and vomit blood.
     
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