Spoiler The Scum Villain's Self-Saving System

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  1. scriptor

    scriptor 『Sigilmaster』 『Immortal Sage』

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    OMG YOU WONDERFUL PERSON <3

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    Mind if I share this with readers, btw?
     
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    I've been translating this extra for myself using MTL...b/c my curiosity is killing me lol Note that it won't be 100% accurate b/c MTL tho - it can be whack sometimes but I decided to post it b/c ...sharing is caring :) Also changed some of the wording to have it make sense and flow better in English. A few sentences were almost beyond saving tho lol

    Summary by @yitahutu:

    After lying down and resting, I found myself in a different place when I blinked. This is not the first time, so Shen Qingqiu is not flustered, knowing that he is going into the dream of Luo Binghe. After drifting for a while, he floated to the ground.

    It’s like walking away, it’s like riding the wind. The four sides are splendid, the decoration style is gorgeous and exquisite, and the promenade is very familiar, This is 100% the Magic Flower Palace.

    Passing through this promenade, at the end is the main hall of the Mirage Palace. In the past, Luo Binghe was already waiting for him in the dream, but this time he did not see him, so this was a rare event.

    There is someone in the hall, Shen Qingqiu sees a familiar back, and is even more curious to see it. Shen Qingqiu, “Well, Mu Shidi?” [TN: Mu Shidi: Referring to Mu Qingfang as a junior disciple or classmate]

    This stand-alone ‘Mu Qingfang’ is a phantom in the memory of Luo Binghe, and naturally he can’t hear him. His younger brother has always had a good temper. He is standing in the middle of the hall at the moment, but his face is very bad.

    Shen Qingqiu remembered that soon after the rivers and lakes that were rumoured to be swindled, Luo Binghe had brought Mu Qingfang back to the Magic Flower Palace and forced him to ‘heal the disease’. He knew that this was definitely the same period.

    A heavy black shadow passed silently across his side, and the sound of Luo Binghe voice resonated: “Mu Xiangsheng." [TN: Xiangsheng: (先生) An honorific meaning teacher, doctor, sir or Mr.]

    This ‘Luo Binghe’ eyes did not reflect Shen Qingqiu’s figure, and he was unaware of his existence, not his deity, but his memory.

    Shen Qingqiu wondered, could it be that he drifted into the dream range that even the deity is innocent?

    The title and attitude of Luo Binghe cannot be said to be disrespectful. Mu Qingfang said: “Your excellence refers to me as ‘Mu Xiangsheng’. Do you still acknowledge yourself as part of the Cang Qiong Sect, or do you not?” [T/N: Your Excellence: Géxià (阁下) Also meaning your distinguished self, sire, your majesty etc.]

    Luo Binghe: “Whether I acknowledge it or not acknowledge it, does it matter?”

    Mu Qingfang said: "If you do not associate yourself with Cang Qiong, why do you still call Shen Shixiong ‘Shizun’? If you admit that much, you should call me by Shifu as well, why do you hurt the disciples of Cang Qiong, and hold me here?"

    Luo Binghe: "Mu Xiangsheng, please just come to see Shizun."

    Mu Qingfang said: "Shen Shixiong has squandered and died under the eyes of Huayue City. His spirit is scattered. Now I am afraid that even the body has already been rotted and decayed. There is no way to bring people back to life.” [TN: Shixiong: Fellow senior male student or apprentice (师兄)]

    Listening to this intense conversation, causes Shen Qingqiu to break out in cold sweat.

    Mu Qingfang is not like Qi Qingying or Liu Qingge, he could not tolerate any kind of sand in his eyes, his temper is that of a little bombshell and the answer he gave was not so pleasant. Although he knew that he could not help, he still couldn't help but produce a sweat drop for Mu Qingfang, worried that he would anger Luo Binghe and endure some unnecessary suffering. [T/N: Not 100% sure what the first sentence is trying to say...Sweat drop: Reference to the sweat drop that appears in anime]

    Fortunately, Luo Binghe is unmoved, he says coldly: "Please take a look, Mu Xiangsheng."

    While under watch, Mu Qingfang also had to be sent to the Magic Flower Pavilion under the escort of a group of yellow-shirted disciples.

    In the Magic Flower Pavilion, the cold air seeped out, and the two men stepped through and after the first step the door was closed. Shen Qingqiu rushed in.

    Luo Binghe sits on the veils hanging from the table. Mu Qingfang bent over and looked at it. Shen Qingqiu also wanted to take a look. Unfortunately, Mu Qingfang almost immediately straightened his waist and put the gauze down, blocking the view of Shen Qingqiu, his face twisted.

    Mu Qingfang said: "What method did you use to save his body?"

    Luo Binghe understates: “Mu Xiangsheng is the leader of the Qian Can Peak, to save him without destroying the flesh, you should know better than me."

    After a long while, Mu Qingfang’s original attitude of refusing to cooperate gently finally came down. He said: “You force the body of Shen Shixiong to infuse spiritual power every day, except to make his body not rot and at the cost of a lot of power, it has no effect. And as long as it stops one day, it will start rotting. I am being blunt, Shen Shixiong he has…"

    Luo Binghe interrupted him: "The Qian Can Peak is the best in the world in terms of medicine, and Mu Xiangsheng is the head of the peak. I believe that you must have a solution."

    Mu Qingfang said: "There is no way."

    So stubborn, Luo Binghe's original patience was finally exhausted. He sneered: "There is no other way to find a solution. Before I think of one, Mu Xiangsheng will not leave!"

    He slammed his sleeves, and the door of the Magic Flower Pavilion suddenly opened to the sides. Mu Qingfang was stunned. The man had already been shaken out, and immediately came up with a group of yellow-clothed disciples waiting for a long time to hold him, and the door immediately closed.

    A gust of wind swayed back and forth, and the candlelight in the pavilion shook, and it was uncertain.

    Suddenly, Luo Binghe yelled at him: "Shizun."

    Shen Qingqiu was shocked.

    He thought that Luo Binghe in this memory saw him. However, he soon discovered that Luo Binghe was crying out. He didn't expect anyone to respond to him at all.

    Luo Binghe stood at the door for a while, then slowly walked to Shen Qingqiu, sat down on the bench, re-twisted the gauze, and then stared at the face of the body.

    He stares for a long time, in a daze. Shen Qingqiu leisurely panics, the legs supporting the body changed one after another, and could not help but also reach the bedside. Luo Binghe stared at the face of his body, and he stared at the face of Luo Binghe. Staring and staring, Luo Binghe stretched out a hand and slowly eased the belt of the corpse.

    The leg Shen Qingqiu was squatting on twitched a bit.

    This scene would be beautiful to look at, but it is not at this moment because sitting on the bed is the corpse of Shen Qingqiu... this is not looking very good.

    Below the neck, like how flowers blossom in reds and greens, corpse spots appear as livor mortis sets in.

    Luo Binghe took off his robe and cuddles up to the body. He slid the body into his arms. If you ask someone to come see this, you inevitably be frightened, or think some ugly words to express disgust, and it will still feel unbearable. But in fact, he is just hugging the body like a big baby not acting out the ordinary otherwise. [T/N: He's referring to how when u see something horrible u decide to share it lol but it still isn't enough]

    The chin of Luo Binghe was pressed against the dark hair of Shen Qingqiu. One hand followed his back curve and laid there, while conveying a lot of spiritual power. The blue-violet purple color of the corpse gradually subsided and the skin became pale and clean again.

    This posture and movement gently pulls Shen Qingqiu's heart string.

    He remembered that he seemed to have done the same thing to Luo Binghe.

    It was a night after Luo Binghe moved into the bamboo house.

    I'll continue this later ;;
     
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    Of course yes you can share it~ :blobsmilehappy:
     
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    Wow this thing is super long so far it's literally 12 pages so (posted 4 pages last time) here are the next 8 pages:

    Flash Back

    It is winter night. The cold wind whizzed around the mountains of Qing Peak, and thousands of bamboo leaves swayed.

    Shen Qingqiu was lying on the bed on his side, he could not fall asleep, closing his eyes he raised his spirits. Raised and raised, he moves to the other side, screen after screen. A slightly cautious voice can be heard. It seems that the people inside are tossing and turning. It is difficult to sleep.

    How long did it take for the sound coming over and over again to come to an abrupt end? Some one gently climbed out of bed, slid the curtain and went out of the bamboo house.

    What do you do when you’re not sleep in the middle of the night?

    Shen Qingqiu can't remember the story during this period. Luo Binghe had something to do in the middle of the night. He was curious and got up.

    He was not in the same realm as Luo Binghe, so his body was light and fast. Therefore, when he circled around Luo Binghe, the other party was still unaware.

    Luo Binghe did not sneak far away, and did not go to any mysterious place where he could find an adventure. The person was sitting behind the yard and sitting on a small bench. His upper garments have been taken off, neatly stacked on the left leg, and the right hand pours something to the left palm, and then wipes it on the body. When the sputum was flushed, a slight inhalation sound was heard from the mouth.

    Under the moonlight, the fifteen-year-old boy is not thin, but not strong. His body is covered with bruises of blue and purple. The night wind sends a touch of medicinal fragrance and wine.

    Shen Qingqiu’s voice breaks the silence: “Luo Binghe.”

    The person being called upon was visibly shocked. As he jumped up from the stool the folded clothes fell to the ground. Luo Binghe, "Shizun! How are you awake?"

    Shen Qingqiu walked in and went forward: “I have not slept yet.”

    Luo Binghe: “Has this disciple awakened Shizun? I apologize! I thought I couldn't bother Shizun’s rest, but I didn't expect this..."

    This child was afraid that he would wake him up all over again, so then he would go wipe the medicinal liquor on in the middle of the night. I am afraid it really hurts.

    Shen Qingqiu, "What kind of injury do you have?"

    Luo Binghe, “Nothing that will get in the way! The other disciples that have been practicing in these recent years, have suffered more injuries."

    Shen Qingqiu carefully looked at the injury on his body: "The people of Bai Zhan Peak picked on you again, didn't they?"

    Luo Binghe said that it was not good, and he did not want to lie to him. Shen Qingqiu looked at him silently. The more he looked, the more angry he was. He said, "What have I taught you?"

    Luo Binghe: “If you can’t win, to run.”

    Shen Qingqiu: "Have you done this?”

    "But..." Luo Binghe, "But this way, this disciple will bring great shame to Qing Peak."

    Shen Qingqiu said: "I don't want to be just pleasing to the eye, what is the difference between their Baizhan Peak under these mountain? If this is not the behaviour of our Qing Peak, is the act of a shameful peak? You are going to find Liu Qingge now. Three hundred and sixty-five days a year, even if he took a day to manage the group of juniors, it would not be so lawless.” [T/N: SQQ is saying that running is not shameful because they are the peaceful Qing Peak and therefore don’t engage in fights just to look good unlike Baizhan Peak who is known for being warriors]

    Luo Binghe was busy pulling him: "Shizun, you can't! If you are dishonoured because of your disciples and Liu Shishu, then I... then I can’t-" The legs slammed and saw Shen Qingqiu stop. He hurried again. "It’s not all the brothers and sisters of the Baizhan Peak. I would have made the situation uglier if I kept practicing there by punching and punching.”

    Seeing his urgency, Shen Qingqiu slowed down his breath and said: "The cultivation of things needs to be gradual and progressive. How can we force it? You are a seedling, if you break the foundation, won’t you have lifelong regrets?"

    One day, he had to think of a way to see how to concoct the violent elements of the Baizhan Peak, and use the hands of Liu Qingge to teach them to feel indigent as to not speak out.

    The seventh person with qualifications is so daring to be so provocative, and there is no distinction between the young and the old.

    Luo Binghe shouldn’t be here. Shen Qingqiu said: "Go in.”

    Luo Binghe waved his hands again and again: "No. I am fine outside. If I go in, I will disrupt Shizun’s rest."

    Shen Qingqiu hooked his fingers and the clothes on the ground flew into his hands. He places his hand on Luo Binghe’s shoulder: "What is the rest? Since this teacher has seen your injury, how can I let you go late at night to freeze in the cold wind alone?"

    The two returned to the bamboo house, and Luo Binghe wanted to go back to his bed. Shen Qingqiu took the medicinal liquor in his hand and signalled him to come to the inner room.

    Luo Binghe was pulled over by him until Shen Qingqiu began to remove the belt that he had only fastened, and his face was flushed, and the collar was stretched back and forth: "Shizun is doing... What!?”

    Shen Qingqiu shook the small bottle in his hand: "Giving you medicine to rub out the bruises."

    "No, I will do it by myself!" Luo Binghe rushed to grab the medicine bottle, Shen Qingqiu right hand twisted his wrist, and stepped forward, without expression: "You - can you see where you are bruised?”

    Luo Binghe shuddered: “It’s…I just put it on everywhere!”

    He persistently backs away. Luo Binghe usually has a look of reluctance, gentleness and calmness. Shen Qingqiu sees his blushing eyes for the first time. He finds this interesting. Most of his thoughts are that the children are too big to be beaten and put down. Helping to rub the medicine is even more embarrassing, and his heart is snickering, but his face is serious as he is supposed to scold Binghe: "Noisy. How many medicinal liquors are sent by Qian Can Peak every time? There is only certain amount, how can I let it be wasted by you.”

    “I….I…”

    Luo Binghe's face as a ‘disciple’ did not dare speak, his eyes were watery, holding his clothes and protecting his chest, and he was a six-god. Shen Qingqiu holds his shoulders, turned the vial around to give it two or three smacks. Then quickly wipes the liquid from the vial to the marks on Binghe’s back. [T/N: A "6 god" referencing a 6 pack? lmao maybe]

    Unexpectedly, Luo Binghe let out a small whimper: “Ao!”

    Shen Qingqiu immediately lessened the pressure: "I am pressing too hard?"

    Luo Binghe shakes his head like crazy. Shen Qingqiu said: “Then why are you crying? You are a man and as a man, pain this small should be tolerated."

    The sound of Luo Binghe is like a mosquito: "No, it is not pain..."

    Lowering his heart rate for a while, Shen Qingqiu tried to send the spiritual power slowly from the palm of his hand. Luo Binghe again lets out an “ah!” After feeling the pressure.

    Shen Qingqiu wondered: "Why are you fussing? You are not paying attention to manners, how can you be a disciple of my Qing Peak?"

    [​IMG]

    Luo Binghe trembled: "I... I... this disciple, this disciples just finished the medicine, and don't want to waste it."

    Shen Qingqiu's right hand is closely attached to the bare skin of his back, slowly moving, said: "This is comfortable?”

    "..." Luo Binghe did not speak, seemed to bite his lips.

    Shen Qingqiu begins to slowly and gently rub around Binghe’s waist, while secretly thinking, This is strange It is it uncomfortable? Impossible. Am I mistaking these acupuncture points? The spiritual power should be not too big or small, it should be just good, how could he be uncomfortable? Especially under my legendary hands?!

    [​IMG]
    He withdrew his hand and Luo Binghe let out a sigh of relief. Who knew that the next moment, he would be pulled down like a wave, and be put into a full embrace.

    Shen Qingqiu hugged him and fell on the Luohan bed.

    Luo Binghe made a dying sound as if he were gasp for air: "...Shizun, Shizun!”

    Shen Qingqiu did not take off his shirt, but only left a thin layer of clothing so they can feel each other's heartbeat collide. The contact area is large and the spiritual transmission area is also large. He said: "It’s not fast enough to use the palm of your hands. Wait a while, feeling teacher’s pulse will be faster than waiting a few weeks to heal. The injury on your body is almost as good as the medicinal liquor you apply.”

    [T/N: His injuries being as good as the medicine means the medicine will have little to no effect since the medicine is equal to the injury, quick maths]

    Like a little hedgehog, Luo Binghe struggled in his arms: "Shizun! Shizun! I have medicine all over my body!"

    Shen Qingqiu lit a fire - a fiery emotion. He took hold of Luo Binghe’s arm to show disciplinary action. He says sternly: "What are you twisting around for?”

    This is to cure your wounds!

    Saying this while lightly patting him on the back, Luo Binghe became a stick. He is like a stick that is roasted on the fire and suffering from it.

    The ‘stick’ said: "Shizun... This is not good... you, please let go…"

    Shen Qingqiu said: "Luo Binghe, if you were an infant, you would be restless and wiggling around. However you are not an infant. You are also not a girl, but you are afraid that your teacher will eat you?"

    Sofly, Luo Binghe stops wiggling, only partially as his attention was shifted, he said: "The meaning of the teacher is, you, you will not be like this to Ning Shijie?" [T/N: Shijie: Referring to Ning Yingying as an older 'sister' (does not have to be related)]

    If the person injured today was Ning Yingying, even if Shen Qingqi’s courage increases by one hundred, he does not dare use this convenient method to treat her. He only hated that he couldn't point to the sky, and say he was honest and sincere, and he said: “Naturally I would not."

    Luo Binghe said again: "That... if it is not Ning Shijie, and some other disciples have been injured, would you do this?”

    "..." Shen Qingqiu said, "What are you thinking about? Calm your mind, meditate and breath.”

    The hedgehog in his arms finally settled down. Shen Qingqiu satisfactorily picked the most comfortable position, put his chin on top of his head. Freeing his hand he moves it along the curve of Binghe’s back. After a moment he motions for a soothing stroke.

    Not finding this position uncomfortable, Shen Qingqiu could hold him for a bit.

    Luo Binghe's image was that of someone who came out of a hot steamer. The sweat on his body soaked through thin thin coat of Shen Qingqiu’s clothes.

    Shen Qingqiu was shocked. Did he lose too much spiritual energy and contract a high fever?!

    He just had to pick Binghe’s face to check his temperature. Who knows that the sweat that touches the hand is slippery. The body in his arms suddenly struggled, like a dehydrated white fish, a Thump was heard has he moved his arm and Binghe fell off his bamboo couch.

    This series can not finished here yet. Or else next something horrible will happen! ‘Bang Bang’!

    The stool was kicked over, and his head hit the screen. Luo Binghe was acting like he was crazy, and even rolled over and rushed out of the bamboo house.

    Shen Qingqiu gave him such a shock he couldn’t stay on the couch. The wind was rustling for a while, quickly stopped, he quickly got out of bed and chased after him: "Luo Binghe?!”

    Luo Binghe has already rushed a few feet and ran on the side: "Shizun, sorry!"

    Shen Qingqiu is full of black lines: "What are you sorry for? Come back!" [T/N - Come back: I’m Chinese so I know what this means but can’t really describe it… the closest English equivalent would be “Are you coming back or not?” Which is used more of like a statement despite being a question...?]

    The night wind sent him a crying voice: "No! Shizun, I can't see you now! Don't come over, don't come over!"

    What the hell is this?! Dream Sinking 4 [T/N: Dream Sinking 4: A series]

    It is said that Shen Qingqiu is more than one level higher than him, and the speed is definitely faster than him. Luo Binghe does not know how his adrenaline outbreak is still happening, but he did not want him to catch up.

    The two men ran along the road and rushed around screaming, but after a moment, the entire Qing Peak was alarmed. The lights everywhere are lit up in twos and threes, a few of the disciples came out.

    Disciples holding lamps come rushing out: "Who is yelling in the middle of the night, disturbing the Qing Peak?"

    "I think this is Shizun’s voice!”

    "Nonsense! How can Shizun create such a disturbance…”

    The voices didn’t subside, Shen Qingqiu’s voice carried like the wind, he passed through this group of disciples emotionless. Suddenly, it was so quiet you could hear a pin drop.

    Shen Qingqiu was worried that Luo Binghe would run like this like a chicken without a head, and couldn't see the road rushing down the cliff, he yelled: "Ming Fan! Stop him! Stop Luo Binghe!"

    Mingfan just came over with a coat and a lantern, and fixed his eyes, hehe! Luo Binghe screamed in front of him, and Shizun was murderous in the back - this picture. Finally returned to normal!

    He exclaimed in ecstasy: "Shizun! This disciple has come to help you! I will take this child and teach him well! Fellow Shidi, follow along and help me!" [T/N - Shidi: Younger disciples of the same Master/Teacher]

    The disciples were swept away from all directions, and Shen Qingqiu finally caught up with Luo Binghe like a wild horse. But before he pulled out the collar of this kid, Luo Binghe couldn’t help but fight forward.

    ‘Pumping’, a splash of water. Luo Binghe actually fell into this quiet pool in the quiet peak of Qing Peak.

    After falling, it seems to wake him up. Luo Binghe’s entire body was soaked in the cold water and finally did not move.

    Shen Qingqiu said: “Has he stopped?"

    Luo Binghe buried his head deeply and raised his two hands to cover his face. And Ming Fan has been moved to tears.

    Trembling in the water, Luo Binghe looks as if he ran into an ice berg. Standing opposite to him was Shizun who had his arms crossed with a sneer on his face. Ah, what a fascinating scene; ah, what a nostalgic picture!

    A group of disciples whispered around Luo Binghe, which was covered in the pool. Ning Yingying was at the girl's house. She has always been slower to dress and comb. When she come late, and saw this situation she almost lost her voice: "Alo! You... How did you end up sitting in the pool? Who is bullying you? Shizun, what is going on?"

    "..." Shen Qingqiu said coldly, “Shizun also wants to know what exactly is happening.”

    Luo Binghe shook his face and said: “Nothing. Nothing is going on."

    Shen Qingqiu stood on the edge of the pool for a while and suddenly sighed: "Come up. What are you doing, sitting in there?”

    Luo Binghe continued to shake his head: “Shizun, I can’t. I am already here. You can let me stay for a while..."

    It’s winter, although it’s not snowing, if I let him sit down in the cold pool for one night, will he still be alive?

    Shen Qingqiu will pull him out even if he has to drag him by the hem. Luo Binghe speaks quickly: “Shizun don't come down here! The water is cold and dirty, you shouldn’t get wet…”

    Three steps and two steps more, Shen Qingqiu walked through the water under he reached his side. Looking at him sternly.

    Luo Binghe hangs its head lower and does not dare to look at him. If only he could bury himself deeper into the water.

    Shen Qingqiu said: “Do you need Shizun’s help to get out?"

    "..." Luo Binghe, "Shizun I... you should let me stay here alone!"

    Shen Qingqiu had not way to take him out. Once the commotion settled, the Qing Peak disciples on shore said: “We start early in the morning and go to class early too, those who are late must copy the texts a hundred times."

    Now it’s starting to get ugly! Copying the texts, and copying it a hundred times on top of that!

    As soon as this statement came out, the wind starts blowing and the pool was empty.

    Once Shen Qingqiu confirmed that there were no onlookers, he turned around and suddenly bent down to put his arm around the back of Luo Binghe’s knees while the arm other supports his back.

    Seeing what he wants to do, Luo Binghe tries to hide in the water like a big white fish that is thumping around: “Shizun Shizun, don't do this, don't do this!”

    Shen Qingqiu was splashed in the face and used his sleeves to wipe his cheeks. “Haven’t you created enough trouble for one night?"

    Hearing this Luo Binghe did not dare to move again, he took Luo Binghe into his arms and picked him up.

    A little bit heavy. He sighed to himself and walked back to the bamboo house with Luo Binghe.

    Walking halfway, Luo Binghe expressed pain in his arms: "Shizun, I... I will return to the firewood room."

    "Luo Binghe!"

    Shen Qingqiu sternly said, “Why are you acting like this tonight? What is wrong with you? Acting so shy while running away from others. I don’t understand this behaviour but I’m afraid I thought I had done something sinful towards you!”

    End Flashback

    To be continued~
     
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    scriptor 『Sigilmaster』 『Immortal Sage』

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    *cough*

    Actually, Shizun did do something sinful......

    #ignoringayoungmaidensheart
    #bingmei
    #awkwardbonerftw
    #someoneskingofobliviousness
     
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    LMAO IKR a certain ~someone~ needs to take responsibility for Bingmei’s sexual awakening also this ain’t good for his maiden heart :blobsweat::blobpopcorn: save him:blobjoy:

    Side note gonna complie this extra (with fixed grammar and such) Into a word document once I finish the entire thing :blobparty:
     
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    :blobparty::blobpopcorn_cool: LMAO Shizun is way too dense. He's like a black hole!
     
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    WOW that is just wonderful! Thank you for translating this part!
    And there’s the tiny correction: I’ve checked the original chinese text and the 6 god phrase is a 4-word adj referring to totally lost and don’t have a clue of what to do next. Maybe google translate is being an idiot again. I used to do my english homework with the help of google translate and it can’t even get the whole sentence straight, so a lot of hugs and thanks for being able to overcome all the problems and give us this fabulous translation!!!
     
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    Lmao bless I’m gonna fix it b4 compiling it later, thanks for letting me know ~ if u see anything else that can be fixed feel free to point it out :blobxd:

    aww you’re welcome ~ I used to translate Chinese Doujinshi like this, this is my first time doing a novel tho my detective skills r levelling up :blobcheeky:
     
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    Attica Well-Known Member

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    If you don't mind, can I upload your MTL version to Google Docs and then modify it further?
    I noticed quite a few areas that can be improved (ex: "Rivers and lakes" is referring to the Jianghu AKA world, etc.)
     
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    Here are some things I noticed:
    - It's "Cang Qiong" Mountain, not "Chang Qiong"
    - There's an extra "Jing" after "Qing", since the full name is "Qing Jing Peak"
    - Hmm you put Yue Qingyuan with Qing Jing Peak, even though he's actually the Peak Lord of Qiong Ding Peak and the sect master of the entire mountain
    - Zhu ZhiLang is his name, not "Zu Zhilang"
    - Mu Qingfang is the Peak Lord of "Qian Cao" Peak, not "Qian Can"

    Otherwise, it looks fantastic!!!
     
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    Thankies I’ll reupload it with the changes later tonight or tomorrow
     
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    Yes of course you can! :blob_grin: Thanks your help <3 If you don’t mind could you wait until I finish the whole extra? I feel bad only handing in something half finished >.<;; I’ll post the full extra within 1-2 days for you :aww: (and in a word doc too if possible) :blobsmilehappyeyes:
     
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    Rufi-sidd When the wolves come out to play!

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    What was the rift between original shen qingqiu and liu qingge why did they hate each other? Is it mentioned in the novel
     
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    Alright, sounds good! I'm working on a proper translation of the parts you've already given, right at this link:
    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lAJoG5kO5MxrP8FAKdBpmC5CKEq9qUpIisqJUmMc2cc/edit?usp=sharing
     
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    scriptor 『Sigilmaster』 『Immortal Sage』

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    I think LQG smacked SQQ (SJ). Need confirmation on this though lol.
     
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    I know there's at least these points of contention between them:
    1) They first met at the Cang Qiong Mountain Sect's ascension competition/tournament (something like that). LQG utterly thrashed SQQ in a duel, so you can imagine how pissed the latter was. Not a pleasant first meeting.

    2) LQG mocks SQQ for having started to learn cultivation so late. In return, SQQ is secretly extremely envious of how LQG has had everything going for him (innate talent, early training, good background)

    3) Original!SQQ is a dick in general haha. No one else wants to be friends with him except YQY.
    From what we can see, he's the type of person who insults/disdains other people in public and schemes against them in private. Put that in the same room as LQG's brash temper and straightforward honesty, and you get a veritable recipe for disaster.
    And even if SQQ did do a good deed, he would never admit it. (Like Miss Jiang said at the bottom of page 56: in the Airplane Extra, he saved LQG when they were fighting the monster in the well. LQG misunderstood the action as trying to hurt him, and SQQ refused to clarify he actually was doing something nice)
     
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    [​IMG]

    Updated~ :blob_grin: If there are more mistake pls lemme know I'll fix em as soon as I can ...I'm like hungover... RN SMH :blobdizzy:

    There are 4 more characters from the original character picture reference sheet from who knows what page on this discussion >.< and I didn't include them only b/c I dunno who they are yet since they never appeared where I am so far (Ch 31) :blobpensive: Guess I'll add them when I find out lol :blobtongue:

    BRB later w/ Part 3 of that Extra I was MTL >.<;;
     
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    Rufi-sidd When the wolves come out to play!

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    Oh so liu qingge is kind of a jerk and shen qingqiu was a dick oh boy disaster! :facepalm:
     
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    You're referring to this image with all the characters, correct?
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    I'll go ahead and name them all left to right, just for your future reference.

    Ning Yingying
    Ming Fan
    Yang Yixuan (a character that hasn't appeared yet, will first show up next chapter)
    Mu Qingfang
    Qi Qingqi
    Liu Mingyan
    Liu Qingge
    Yue Qingyuan
    Shen Qingqiu
    Luo Binghe (teenager)
    Luo Binghe (adult)
    Shang Qinghua
    Mo Beijun
    Sha Hualing
    Zhu ZhiLang (technically appeared but name wasn't revealed)
    Tian Langjun (hasn't appeared yet)
    Su Xiyan (never appears in person, name wasn't revealed yet)
    Gongyi Xiao
    Qin Wanyue
    Huan Hua Palace Princess (hasn't appeared yet)
    Qiu Haitang (hasn't appeared yet)
    Huan Hua Palace Old Master (cameo'd at the Immortal Conference)
     
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