LCD The Sovereign’s Ascension

Discussion in 'Latest Chapter Discussion' started by SerialBeggar, Dec 12, 2020.

  1. SerialBeggar

    SerialBeggar Well-Known Member

    Joined:
    Dec 29, 2016
    Messages:
    1,928
    Likes Received:
    1,303
    Reading List:
    Link
    https://www.novelupdates.com/series/the-sovereigns-ascension/

    [​IMG]

    Well, as the reviewers say, this is an amateurish work which is especially evident in the writing style of the first few chapters. No long back story detailing how pitiful the life of the person the MC transmigrated into was. A quick handwave for the MC to accept his new circumstances and off he goes. That said, once the story gets rolling, it's OK-ish.

    The translations is very good, however there were a few specific occasions which felt like the translator took liberties and a passage sounded particularly amateurish compared to the sounding content.
     
  2. SerialBeggar

    SerialBeggar Well-Known Member

    Joined:
    Dec 29, 2016
    Messages:
    1,928
    Likes Received:
    1,303
    Reading List:
    Link
    ch-72: :hmm:
    I read this line half a dozen times and still thought it was the same name.
     
  3. dereonlad

    dereonlad Well-Known Member

    Joined:
    Dec 2, 2017
    Messages:
    270
    Likes Received:
    112
    Reading List:
    Link
    This novel is somewhat decent if you handwave a couple things. First, there will be 4-8 errors in every chapter, whether they're wrong names, wrong time periods (like years instead of months) or just plain bad grammar.

    Throw the synopsis out the window. MC's lawyer origin pre transmigration doesn't amount to anything. Chapter 1 starts and the MC just starts running through the story. No thoughts about his past life, family or whatever, he calmly accepts his situation. And becomes a typical MC , transmigration or not, and begins cultivating.

    Be ready for a lot of sword slave this, sword slave that.


    The villain characters are, categorically, all 1-dimensional characters. There is no hint of other qualities, in fact, some of them, in high positions can do the dumbest things.

    His cultivation is too easy so far, although the translation only at ch. 72 right now but I'd like to see some interesting tribulations or bottleneck epiphanies.

    I'll probably stop reading this at chapter 100 or whenever I get busy.
     
  4. SerialBeggar

    SerialBeggar Well-Known Member

    Joined:
    Dec 29, 2016
    Messages:
    1,928
    Likes Received:
    1,303
    Reading List:
    Link
    Ch-96:
    Yeah, everything bursting into flames and melting, yet his clothes are still fine.
     
  5. SerialBeggar

    SerialBeggar Well-Known Member

    Joined:
    Dec 29, 2016
    Messages:
    1,928
    Likes Received:
    1,303
    Reading List:
    Link
    Ch-141: Special high teir attack token with only 3 uses and Lin Yun just blows one use to show off. Yeah, he was fighting higher realm foes, but that fight wasn't even necessary until he instigated it.
     
  6. SerialBeggar

    SerialBeggar Well-Known Member

    Joined:
    Dec 29, 2016
    Messages:
    1,928
    Likes Received:
    1,303
    Reading List:
    Link
    ch-146: Lin Yun wouldn't be so hard up on Xiantian pellets, spirit stones, and other resources if he would only loot his kills.
     
  7. Emma401

    Emma401 Well-Known Member

    Joined:
    Nov 28, 2017
    Messages:
    27
    Likes Received:
    5
    Reading List:
    Link
    Harem?