Can you share your thoughts about my novel? I'm still an amateur writer, but I could do my best despite having exposed on the critics and it was really tiring! Anyway, I just want to ask about my novel and what are good things to add. What are also that I should avoid. Thanks! Spoiler: I've made my mc crippled and because of that, it seems many are angry about it. The reason behind it was that, I just want to make the mc explore the world very slowly as for this novel is a slow paced story, except when I time skips to make them at their teens... The story is on webnovel, Called The World of Demons and Gods (yep, pretty a trivial name huh.) I can't send a website link. Thank you!
You say readers are angry because you made the MC crippled and honestly I can wholeheartedly share that sentiment with them. After reading so many Japanese novels the last thing I want is a suckass for MC. I think most people would agree that a weak MC doesn't make for a great story and most of the time are actually the reason to NOT read a novel. But yeah, I don't really know your novel (I'll give it a try tho) just my 2 cents on crippled/weak MCs.
Need 10 messages for you to be able to send links. But since I'm not reading on Q anyway, so I can't help you with the opinion. Spoiler: Off-topic (Random off topic thought: I wonder if in China then Q try to translate English Original Novels into CN while claiming that they own them though)
It a good concept just put into the description that this is a slow story and i have no current desire to make the mc strong. Or put in that this is a adventure novel not a cultivation grind/ action
honestly i like the idea slow progress it show mc dedication of hardwork and what passion the drive mc to the strongest