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Which 2 entries for the Yuri Garden Writing Competition (2019) did you like the most?

Poll closed Aug 14, 2019.
  1. "Lost at Sea" by Lemonfairy

    3 vote(s)
    11.1%
  2. "Rather than Work for a Black Company" by Wandering Cultivator

    2 vote(s)
    7.4%
  3. “I Wanna Get Married!” by AliceShiki

    3 vote(s)
    11.1%
  4. “I was summoned as a saint, but why is the kingdom only throwing men at me” by binarysoap

    4 vote(s)
    14.8%
  5. “Perfect Day” by crimson_carnation

    11 vote(s)
    40.7%
  6. “Late Night Summon” by GDLiZy

    3 vote(s)
    11.1%
  7. “Spring Dream” by crimson_carnation

    7 vote(s)
    25.9%
  8. “10th Year Anniversary” by AsianessPride

    4 vote(s)
    14.8%
  9. “Unexpected Development” by Titan0fPower

    0 vote(s)
    0.0%
  10. “The Alchemist’s Familiar” by Ninetailed_Furball

    6 vote(s)
    22.2%
  11. “The Prayer” by Wandering Cultivator

    3 vote(s)
    11.1%
  12. “For My Beloved, I will” by Suou

    2 vote(s)
    7.4%
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  1. Ubik

    Ubik Well-Known Member

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    So, in the end TL chose yours recommendation as next project :blob_pompom: :blob_patpat:
    It will be:
    向东流[重生] TL name: Eastward Flow
    Raw: http://m.69shu.org/book_93663/
    http://www.jjwxc.net/onebook.php?novelid=3434962

    Edit: I forgot at least MTL description:
    Zhongli moon knew her queen, this world is the only one who can support each other's with her. She respected her and knew her, but she did not dare to let the Queen know that she loved her.
    Wake up again from the fire, meet again, can you still be together?
    After standing the emperor, cp does not waver.


    Tags: Lily, Light, History, Sweet, Completed
     
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  2. AsianessPride

    AsianessPride World’s #1 Chinese Yuri Novel MTL

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    I know this is sudden but I want to spread the title: Himejoshi/Himedanshi
    Like the yuri version of Fujoshi/Fudanshi
    Like, instead of using yuri-ist, use Himejoshis
     
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  3. Moonpearl

    Moonpearl Professional Yuri Girl ❀ [Yuri Garden Creator]

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    Yeah, I also want to see more use of those terms~! They're super pretty.
     
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  4. HamsterOverlord-sama

    HamsterOverlord-sama outer god, eldich abomination of fluffy lovelyness

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    Himejoshi? *holds chin, repeating the word* yeah, it has a nice ring to it *nods head*
     
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    Keitaro123 Well-Known Member

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    Hey ho~! How is everyone doing~? missed everyone~! so hugs and kisses to everyone~!
    Losing more and more time just to work and do the chores for the household~ so busy~!
     
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  6. HamsterOverlord-sama

    HamsterOverlord-sama outer god, eldich abomination of fluffy lovelyness

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    Hugs~
    I feel you, time really is always short, ne?
     
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  7. Moonpearl

    Moonpearl Professional Yuri Girl ❀ [Yuri Garden Creator]

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    Hi~! :bloblove: I've been doing well. Writing lots of Christmas yuri recently.

    It's always busy around Christmas, right? Do you think you'll have it any easier after the New Year?
     
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  8. Keitaro123

    Keitaro123 Well-Known Member

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    Yes~ always short on time on what i wanted to do~ Especially the novel~ i wanted to work on it some more~~! only got the time for it whenever i am at home~
    I am hating the stacks of paper that i always see whenever i enter the office~! so much stress at just the sight of it~!

    Well~ Your right about that~ but i am expecting to join that Drinking stream next week to relieve some of this stress~ my visit to my mother's grave isn't enough apparently~ -sigh- :blobtired:
    Also~ are you posting it to ScribbleHub~? i would love to read it if possible~ yuri is the only thing stopping me from K. O ing my current manager~!

    Btw~ have you girls/guys read the fanfiction(When Reality Changes) i was writing about~? i am currently close to finishing the second chapter and i estimated it to be as long as 5K words or maybe even 6K words if i decided to add plenty more of detail into it~!
     
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  9. Moonpearl

    Moonpearl Professional Yuri Girl ❀ [Yuri Garden Creator]

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    Drinking stream? Like a pub crawl?

    Eventually~! I'm actually designing a little mini Christmas/New Year event for the Garden, and I thought I'd try writing these for it. They'll go up for everyone when the event ends.

    I haven't yet, but I promise I will soon! I've been too tired for reading a lot these days, unfortunately; I've been resorting to manga, since it's easier on my brain.
     
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  10. HamsterOverlord-sama

    HamsterOverlord-sama outer god, eldich abomination of fluffy lovelyness

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    With my record of referencing novels and manga and leaving no links (tee~hee~) I might sound like a hypocrite but, link please
     
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  11. HamsterOverlord-sama

    HamsterOverlord-sama outer god, eldich abomination of fluffy lovelyness

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    That reminded me of rrl's "a soul's new home" which was really good but the author just dropped it
     
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  12. Ubik

    Ubik Well-Known Member

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    And welcome back once again! :blob_pompom: And getting more time is simple. You could always cut down on sleep. :blob_grin:
    Yup. Me is reading but you already know it. :blobsweat:
    Oh, that sound interesting will look forward to it.
    It was already mentioned in this thread but I don't remember when :hmm: Here is link: When Reality changes.
    Has it in "to read" list. But never get to check it. Now looks like it's even doesn't matter.
    Since manga is mentioned. Did you check Mage & Demon Queen lately? Recent chapters are hilarious in some way.

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    Oh and since RRL was mentioned, kinda forgot about that one.
    There was new short story in "Lily Bouquet - A Girls Love Anthology" called "Smile For Me" it has 4 chapters (completed) and rather dark and has gory bits. MC met after 15 years her unrequited school love (FL). FL has bad marriage and abusive husband for long time and couldn't even take it any more. So she run away from home where she was caught by MC. After what MC see that FL had bruises after getting beaten she decides that nobody will hurt FL any more.
     
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  13. Moonpearl

    Moonpearl Professional Yuri Girl ❀ [Yuri Garden Creator]

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    It's just a small thing that won't take anyone too much time~! (Apart from me.) I thought it would be nice to have something in the holiday spirit, since it gets pretty quiet around here at this time.

    I've been keeping up with it religiously. blobmelt_thumbs Mal's getting really bold~!
     
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    @AsianessPride @Yandere Devil have you guys read this, no drama and pure fluff. It looks like the two girls grew up since young and fell in love with each other over time, then when they're older, they pair. Was just wondering if you guys read this and what were your thoughts.

    http://www.jjwxc.net/onebook.php?novelid=947237

    I do want to add that the author deleted/edited out a lot of smut scenes from this novel, you can tell from the last edited date plus the chapter notes on the one that is ~150 characters long.
     
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  15. Yandere Devil

    Yandere Devil Well-Known Member

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    I haven’t read this novel, I will read it. Summary look interesting and sweet. I love childhood love.
    Author delete or edit smut cause Chinese government will censors it or lock chapters if they see smut chapter. You can find that smut chapters in aggregator sites. So better to read from aggregator sites to not missed smut.
     
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  16. AsianessPride

    AsianessPride World’s #1 Chinese Yuri Novel MTL

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    Haven’t read it yet, where’s the summary? You mean the first line? Is that even considered a summary? Good recommendation, maybe @Tsuru55 would enjoy some fluff as well. I’m definitely interested though, 70 chapters will take me a day or so to finish mtl. I was always wondering what you mean by censoring smut, now i know it’s because I always read on the aggregator websites and not the official one
     
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  17. Scribblezo8

    Scribblezo8 Well-Known Member

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    Yes please let me know. Seems interesting but I just don't have time to read raws since I started translating :sweating_profusely:

    That's why was hoping someone already read it to gimme a feel of their opinion. @Ubik your opinion would be nice too since I noticed you read raws as well
     
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    AAAAAAAh ! I forgot about this one ! Care to spoil me ? I stopped reading after the chapter of animal FL becoming human and she is spoiling or spoiled by MC.
    I agree for Yuri fitness.
    I don't understand why they don't finish it. Sure, after reading the chapters picked up was ultra boring, no yuri, but at least finish this series !
    Oh didn't know that this series was yuri.
    I agree only if there are updates every week. 1 month updates are too long.
    I can't help but think i would have an easier time reading this series if there was a manga. For some reason , lately i totally gave up on yuri novel series, i don't know why.
    Ah. True. I forgot that chinese series, often details everything. So making a manga about them would be hard.
    NPCs !? WTF !
    And no happy home in original world !?
    WTFFFFFFFFFFFFF !
    Didn't recognize the title nor the summary so i googled it. It's the reverse trap series of Mochi au lait, guys.
    Sigh... shitty series in short.
    ... I don't tear up but i feel sad right now...
    Like Ubik spoiler said. There is no point as they are NPCs.
    I kinda want to make you stop reading it. Stop torturing yourself. I would prefer you read other series so you can find another fluffy masterpiece.
    I didn't know that it was possible that there was bad endings at the end of arcs of quick transmigration series.
    Strange. I think that seeing them grow old would surely bring me joy. Is it really that bad ? I can't imagine it. Maybe i need to read the korean QT comic you read.
    Agreed. As long they are happy together and are not in some shitty situation.
    I think a lot of people would have liked reading this info sooner from author. But i guess spoiling this info would also make the readers don't care about the FLs that appear during quick transmigration.
    Do you have a problem with this word ? 2nd you use misunderstood when it should be misunderstanding.
    Eh ? FL appear during quick transmigration ? Or it's a another NPC FL ? = cheating.
    I think he meant that it's similar of this doujin that both FLs confessed because of a punishment game.
    Disappointing. Beginning is sad. Not a lot of yuri. Ending is acceptable because they have sex and there is a joke at the very end.
    Don't move my Ashes.
    I also find this series, borderline acceptable. Author wrote the bare minimun of everything. Felt like a mini arc or something and not a full series.
    AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH ! A new series RIGHT WHEN I AM NOT REFRESHING DYNASTY FRONT PAGE !
    orz Disappointed even before i began to read it.
    For your info. LOTS AND LOTS of series on scribble hub are in hiatus. Or your computer got a problem = They are all still in the kinda same number of chapters as i left them a few months ago.
    Happy ending ? Can i skip to it ? Can you spoils other arcs after the mind reading girl ?
    *Erect ears* Eh ? Eh !?
    FUCK YOU CHINA CENSORSHIP !!!!!! orz *bang the floor*
    Give links if you find links to the smut chapters of this series.
    Spoilers plz !
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    Peak transmigration, i lol:
    After saying that Amnesia Wu is really an innocent little white rabbit. Compared to Xuanyuan Yueming, she is trying to abduct the little white rabbit like a cunning monster, but the poor little white rabbit does not know it.

    https://www.novelupdates.com/series/the-guide-to-the-peak-of-quick-transmigration/
    I checked 2 last chapters. Wtf with galactic empire ?????????????? Shouldn't it normally end on a normal modern world ? Or does the first chapters is about when they are in the dimension of where the Earth is REALLY similar to original but different progression for MC ?

    Sure the idea of immortal uncle bringing daughter up made her fall in love with him is a good plot but damn i only accept it at 30%. I would prefer a woman or no romance at all.
     
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  19. Moonpearl

    Moonpearl Professional Yuri Girl ❀ [Yuri Garden Creator]

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    Actually watching them go through life together was sweet, but then she went back to the system room and was quietly, tenderly looking on a screenshot of his old face... Separation is too hard for me. :blob_teary: He was so sweet, and now she just has to accept going on without him forever and moving on~!

    It turns out to be a Chinese one, but it's called "Cheating Men Must Die" and that's the second arc. You can read it here: https://mangadex.org/title/40778/cheating-men-must-die

    That one's still good~! I just have some problems with the love interest's general attitude.
     
  20. Tsuru55

    Tsuru55 Well-Known Member

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    You mean "looking a screenshot of her old face" right ?
    EHHHHHH !? Why the use of "he" ???? Shouldn't the MC be a female ? Shouldn't the plot be about beating cheating men ? It's YURI !?
    Facepalm. I opened this tab 1h ago and i already forgot about it. Because checked new series on scribble after not checking for a few months and rebooting my laptop because it lags after one full day of keeping chrome full of tabs open.
     
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