Urgent help needed

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  1. Shiksha_12

    Shiksha_12 Well-Known Member

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    Hey Folks
    Am currently writing a quick transmigration novel.
    I have just started the second arc in which the background setting is of ancient times.
    I want this arc to funny and have a lot of misunderstandings between the MC and their subjects
    Just give the two chapters a quick read and tell me if why am writing is funny or is just plain corny.
    https://m.webnovel.com/book/13407968206765605/37775141559649001?relocate=true&from=catalog&

    And please don't harp on about how it's on we novel. If that doesn't suit you, its all well and good enough but right now I don't want to post the story on any other platform..
     
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    in_awe [Daisy's Pet][Tilgar's Master][Evil Chaotic Fluff]

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    It's not exactly funny but it was amusing to read.
     
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    Shiksha_12 Well-Known Member

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    Did it bring a sardonic smile to your face?
     
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    in_awe [Daisy's Pet][Tilgar's Master][Evil Chaotic Fluff]

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    I'm really boring so it was just a normal smile. Anyway, writing is hard work. I'll cheer you on. Fighting~
    Are you aiming for a contract doing it for fun?
     
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    Shiksha_12 Well-Known Member

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    I am aiming for being a published author down the road but if I do get a contract for this one, I won't mind. This is my first attempt at an original work. Before this, I only wrote fanfiction