Want your opinions..

Discussion in 'Author Discussions' started by RaisaAl, Jul 6, 2020.

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Are you want me to write this novel

  1. Yes

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  2. No

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  1. RaisaAl

    RaisaAl Member

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    Hi..
    A small introduction..
    I am Raisa
    I like Manga and webtoons
    The Genre I like is:
    Shoujo,Adventure,Fantasy,Isekai,Romance,Comedy,Drama,Slince of life,Reverse harem,Action.

    I intend to write my original Novel soon..
    Title:
    I’ll choose what ever I want to(maybe I change it later)
    Description:
    Rosalia is noble girl from high rank family she remembered her pst life early.
    she lived a normal live in her past life and she satisfied with it ,However when realized that she reincarnated in her own Novel As high rank noble family she says: what a bother! I don’t want to marry a prince or someone noble..I don’t want to be princess or empress too.

    And her story begins..

    The genre:
    Romance,Fantasy,Isekai,Drama,Shoujo.
    ...

    i want to know your opinions about the Description and general ideas

    If you want me to write it please comment here and give your opinions..
     
  2. brigs11

    brigs11 Well-Known Member

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    I think it would be better to just write what you want to write instead of asking if we want you to. In any case there's too little information to really make a decision on, a draft or maybe an intro chapter rather than a short description would let people make a more informed decision.
     
  3. Fear

    Fear Well-Known Member

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    I are want you to write it. (y)
     
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  4. Kutaifa

    Kutaifa Pokémon trainer

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    Just work on the grammar and try to write an interesting plot. If this is your first attempt at writing a novel, then don't become discouraged if it doesn't work out like you planned.
    You can only get better from here!
     
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    As a person who writes myself I suggest that if you have a idea and your passionate about it just go a head and write. Once you start you’ll get a feel for it and see if you enjoy it and if you wanna continue.

    just have fun with it I suppose
     
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  6. RaisaAl

    RaisaAl Member

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    Thank you i wil write it soon
     
  7. RaisaAl

    RaisaAl Member

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    You have a point..
    I did write novel a year ago but no read it anyway this makes me feel my efforts wasted and this impact me so much :(
     
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  8. RaisaAl

    RaisaAl Member

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    I I’ll write more details in chapter 1 soon
    Thank you
     
  9. RaisaAl

    RaisaAl Member

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    For your information the writing isn’t easy
    I feel tired when i try make up a plot :(..
    Thank you for your advice i will do my best :)
     
  10. Wujigege

    Wujigege *Christian*SIMP*Comedian

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    Get a mentor, your grammar even in your poll title is wrong
    You also need a proofreader
    You can find a lot of volunteers on here.
    Goodluck!
    Cheers!
     
  11. RaisaAl

    RaisaAl Member

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    Lol i am sorry for wrong grammar :blobjoy:
    i will try find someone To help me in writing thank you for your advice :)
     
  12. Ral

    Ral Not a Well-Known Member ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

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    "I'll choose(/make) my own path" might be better.
    "Early" here just sounds out of place. Especially, since next lines make it sound as if she just found that out.
    You can't use "however" because the second sentence doesn't disagree with the first one. She can't reincarnate as a family, she's one person. It's either as "a part/member of a family" or without the word altogether.
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    I tried fixing your post with as few changes as possible. Though, I'd rather rephrase a lot. I kinda feel sad for whomever volunteers to proofread for you...

    Perhaps this might answer your question as to why nobody read your previous novel. Sorry.

    In any case, Good Luck!

    P.S. Use Quote+ or hit Reply for multiple posts and reply to all of them at once. Double posts are frowned upon and you made quadruple...
     
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  13. RaisaAl

    RaisaAl Member

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    I am very sorry for a wrong writing
    I knew i am terrible writer but i write this post very quickly without looking at grammar ..:whistle:

    If I actually write a novel it will definitely better than this post :D

    i need to study English again :unsure:
     
  14. Nezothecat

    Nezothecat Active Member

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    I'm sure one of the reasons you wanted to write is that you read a lot and that inspired you to do so. Keep it up and I hope that interest of yours will come into fruition.