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  1. Sproutling

    Sproutling We are the Sproutlings

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    title: Martial Hero Rebirth (武俠重生)
    raw: http://www.qidian.com/Book/3492315.aspx
    i thought this novel will be interesting so i translated chapter one with swift pace. so is this interesting for you(i lost my interest after i read about 100+chapter)? also how about my translation?
    Chapter 1 Killing out the Cage

    Name: Lin Yi
    Status: YuCheng City, Lin Manor, Lin Yuan Wai only child.
    Attack: 10
    Defense: 10
    Speed: 10
    Internal Strength: None
    Sword Skill: None
    Palm Skill: None
    Body Skill: None

    Watching the Attribute panel board, as <Great Martial Fraternity> twelve standard meridians, eight extraordinary meridians are all open, also successfully constructed internal circulation, also one of Five top player Lin Yi, with no trace of surprise and dismay. Because he transported.

    With his memory intact, he transported to <Great Martial Fraternity> world, this worth of fighting and dying world.

    Before with only identity as player he comes to this world, but this time he really comes to survive in this 'Great Martial Fraternity' world.

    In the game, he never frown, but this time he wrinkled his brow, big trouble!

    In Great Martial Fraternity world blended vast majority of Sects written in martial art novels, and skill secrets[1]. Numerous familiar Martial Sects also exist: Shaolin, WuDang, QuanZhen, Mount Hua.

    Various Martial Skill also inherted: Nine Yang Manual, Nine Yin Manual, The Passage of Times[2], Six Meridians Divine Sword, Riding the waves with small steps, Taiji, Subduing Dragon 18 Palms, Yi Jin Jing, Tendon-Altering Sutra, BeiMing Manual, Eight wild Six Fit only me alone honour[3] , DuGu Nine Sword, SunFlower Manual.

    However---
    The world is very cruel, this is a martial artist world with high comes and go , by no means a world for ordinary people.

    The court is a puppet being elected by major faction to protect ordinary people, only can discipline ordinary people to comply with order, as livestock[4], hardworking, support the major sect to maintain dominance.

    Although the courst has LiuShanMen[5]institution to manage Martial Fraternity martial artist, but the executives are people from Famous major sect in Martial Fraternity, as for management of martial artist bullying ordinary people case, they are unconcerned.

    Ordinary people survival in this world is extremely difficult, little carelessness one can be hacked to death by those martial artist fighting in street, there no place of reasoning.

    And these was not the most cruel.

    The more cruel is, with dissatisfaction to large faction rulership, with Ming Sect, Sun Moon sect as head of evil sect, leading countless evil sect warring with famous major sect for right of dominance.

    Countless small sect destroyed, also there are countless unknown sects therefore rise, the era of Martial Fraternity chaos officially open.

    In middle of martial fraternity warring with high comes and go, the most tragic are ordinary people, countless ordinary people have died, with no place to go.

    In martial fraternity the insecure era martial fraternity chaos, ordinary people life is as fragile as grass on roadside!

    There are greater trouble to Lin Yi right now ---- he was kidnapped!

    According to his memory, he right now is Yucheng city respected squire Lin Yuan Wai only child, with ten thousand hectares of farmland, truly a large local tyrant.

    Reasonably, this party of local tyrant can't be kidnapped!

    However, this time kidnapping is not done by ordinary kidnapper, but within radius of hundred miles, with notorious name of Black Wind Village Bandits.

    Lin Yi frowned tighter, Martial Artist start to bite Local Tyrant, this shows Famous Large Sects dominance have been challenged, unrest everywhere, Major Sects don't have extra manpower and time to manage these things.

    That is to say ------ Era of Martial Fraternity chaos approaching!

    He who personally experienced Martial fraternity chaos era, more understand, in that era, high comes and go martial artist leading worrying life day and night[6] , the ordinary people more tragic, there are no power to protect themselves.

    Maybe considered as weeds on roadside to be chopped.

    Life is without guarantee.

    Lin Yi tightening his brow, so that he can think more clearly, and ultimately he gave himself lists three things he must do.

    First: Must immediately escape from Black Wind camp, the best result is, to kill all person in Black Wind camp, he didn't want to leave trouble. Otherwise, just escaping, with no martial skill in his attribute panel board, escaped out of there being caught later, it will even endanger the family! Only by wipe them out, he and his family can be safe.

    Second: After the escape, must immediately learn martial arts, the best is to find famous large sect, become it disciple, have the opportunity to learn superior martial arts. Since it's real world, then the access to superior martial art not like in game anymore, the opportunity to get it in Large sect more big.

    Third: with fastest speed to increase strength. Not only own individual strength, also must have forces! Simply put, that's strong in individual battles, many subordinates.

    Only in this way, he qualified to survive at incoming martial fraternity chaos era.
    And all this done, is for him to be able survive in this great martial fraternity world.

    Of course, as former <Great Martial Fraternity> game, one of the five god players, Lin Yi has a greater ambition, but all of this after three things in front of done, also have the power to protect himself first.

    He was locked up in woodshed, doors and windows sealed tight. With his just fifteen years old body, he can't broke window and get out.

    Lin Yi using brute force to broke the door to escape also get rejected, straighten out his own idea, quietly ponder ways to escape. According to his memory, he had been locked up by three days, meal time only once a day, to ensure he will not starved to death.

    "perhaps only from meal time to find a way!"

    Carefully recalled those bandits sending meal time, every detail of it. The bandits did not enter the room, instead just send it from windows gap, after seeing him eaten they leave. But, outside there are two bandits guarding.

    "I can try in this way, maybe i can succeed!"

    Lin Yi calmly make up his mind, estimates for the upcoming meal time, with no expression picked up sharp firewood, piercing his wrist, cut open his own skin, skin and meat opened, blood continue rush out.

    He's very accurate and did not cut the arteries, just cut the vein, in order to achieve massive blood loss, but not excessive bleeding purposes.

    Entire wrist wrapped in fresh blood, his face gradually paled.

    Meal time arrived, the person carried food containers timely comes.

    "that kid is still honest?"
    "Still okay, the whole day, no cry no trouble."
    "you guys better watching him, Lin family people have come to talk with the boss, ready to reedem him. Lin family had many money, after this trading done, our stockade brothers can live happily for some time."
    "don't worry, we always guarding here, the kid can't escape!"
    "in addition to not let him escape, also look at this kid's life, don't let him die!"
    The bandits who sending the meal told the guarding two guards, through the chain, put the food containers through the gap in windows, clapped: "Kid eat!"

    But only to find the teenager inside paralyzed, he sat on the ground, with no response.

    "Eat!" Meal delivery bandits shouted impatiently.

    Still no response.

    Meal delivery bandits heart tighted, looked intently surprised to find the teenager face paled with no trace of color, gazing down, the bandits saw his left wrist, fresh blood continue flowing, skin and meat opened, next to him is a bloodied sharp firewood.

    Meal delivery bandits immediately reacted, what happened.

    "Quick, quick, quick! Open the door, this kid attempted a suicide! There's a breath left, if you didn't want to let him become corpse and get punishment from boss, quickly save this kid!" Meal delivery bandit anxious loudly clamored.

    "What!"

    Two guards face changed, hastily pulled out the keys, opened the door. Meal delivery bandit quickly pushed two guards aside and rushed in toward the teenager.

    Covering the wound over teenager wrist, shouted: "Quick take a cloth, stop this kid bleeding!"

    The two watching guards hurriedly using broadsword on their hands tore their sleeves, quickly handed it to meal delivery bandit.

    While three bandits in rush dressing his wound, the teenager quietly opened his eyes.

    Suddenly leaps from the ground, pick up the sword.

    ShuaShuaShua!
    The sword flashed!
    PuPuPu!

    Three bandits throat appeared deep wounds, like a fountain, the blood spraying out. Three bandits widened their eyes, clutching their neck, with inconceivable look looking indifferent face of teenager did not think they actually will die in the hands of a fragile teenager.

    This series of action of teenager, rabbit up falcon down, rapid action, sophistication of sword skill, did not look like a normal teenager with no martial arts, instead it more like a killer!

    Regardless of how the three clutching his neck, it can't stop the flowing blood, and soon the three fell to the ground, bleeding to death.

    System prompt:
    Combat Evaluation: Grade A!
    Reward 300 Combat experience.

    Lin Yi arbitrary cast a glance at system prompt, he is not surprised obtaining A grade, after all he now is just an ordinary person and faced with martial artist but also extremely ferocious bandits from the attributes, the difference in strength too much.

    But he as one of god five players in middle of ten of thousands player, how rich his combat experience? Even if not having any martial art, but to kill these bandits who only have superficial martial skill is not much challenge.

    Gaining 300 experience from three bandits didn't give Lin Yi much excitement, must because they didn't have any martial art, the combat experience is of no use.

    Opened the food container he picked up from ground, he is eating his meal in front of the corpses.

    Only eaten enough, he have the strength to killing out the Black Wind camp.

    Released from woodshed, is only the first step to escape.

    Have eaten, pulling the cloth bandaged around his wrist, moving his fingers, it doesn't affect the strength in his left hand.

    Looking at the wound, and looking at three corpses had their throats slit, Lin Yi shook his head and smile.

    Life's like a play, depend on the acting.

    raise his body, raising the sword, teenager who trapped in cage walking out.
     
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  2. Suijin

    Suijin Blood God [Medic]

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    Despite forcing me to read without telling me what is it about, any synopsis and so on.. I still got to ask, what is it about?
     
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  3. Mantius

    Mantius Well-Known Member

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    Suijin Blood God [Medic]

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    Hmm~
    Might be interesting
     
  5. CrispyNoodle

    CrispyNoodle 『Noodle Overlo*d』『Open Pervert』『Onii-chan』

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    o.o...hmm... if he's already like that in the first chapter then I probably shouldn't expect much in the character development department... interesting read never the less