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Would you read it?

  1. Yes!

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  2. No!

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  3. Scared it might not focus enough

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  4. Don't care...

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  1. Llamia

    Llamia Well-Known Member

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    Two deities/immortals reincarnated in the same mortal world and met or were brothers/sisters.

    I'm just bored and this popped up in my head. I would read it.
     
  2. Satan

    Satan Yes

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    And then what?
     
  3. Llamia

    Llamia Well-Known Member

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    Vague. Use a little imagination.
     
  4. Jaded

    Jaded Majoring in Erology

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    Don't care. If it's interesting I'll read it. If not I'll drop it.
     
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  5. Nyamsus

    Nyamsus Life is full of shit and we live in it

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    incest
     
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  6. Liyus

    Liyus Laksha's Desu~ Cat

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    pocketbear !!!!!!!

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    Personally I think it could be a fun concept, perhaps especially if written from a first perosn point of view, changing narrators, so we see the shock of remetting through their eyes and see their confusion, anger, joy, etc. It could be very good but I fear it would be easy to get lost as well. Be careful! Haha. But it is a good premise, a good premise!
     
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  8. akki

    akki [Ani's C☕ffee-mate #3] [Shady Merchant]

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  9. TrueLiesLost

    TrueLiesLost Seeker of The Lost Truth

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    Sounds interesting enough that I would at least check it out. Whether I keep with it would depends where it goes and how it fleshes out.
     
  10. yonayona

    yonayona Active Member

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    and Blackjack
     
  11. Enigma

    Enigma Follower of Jesus, he's the only way

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    I'd give it a try at least...
     
  12. Aicila

    Aicila Huh?

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    You need a little more to go with before deciding if it's readable or not. The whole xianxia (assuming deities/immortals or something, JP is probably less of a stretch) reincarnation stuff is already a stretch, usually. You don't want to really asspull much more than you have to, which is already a fair bit in a typical xianxia/WNs. To tie extra links between them is just even more unbelievable. It's not the worst idea, but anyone who is put off by incredibly convenient plot circumstances will probably be skeptical about it.
     
  13. J.R.

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    god Mo and god Su were two grandchildren of a greater deity, tired of their constant squabbling over who was best and which one their grandfather like more, Rick banished them to the mortal planes and told them that the first one to get back to heaven would be his favorite.

    Toss in a few stupid powers or some opposing circumstances and you've got your standard "next generation of gods trial by fire" story
     
  14. Diukes

    Diukes The Details will be omitted

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    I would like more sth like magican reincarnated into sf world :p
     
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    Trane Well-Known Member

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    two gods made a bet and one of them was bored so a brother and sister was reincarnated into the world of xianxia but they are from parallel universes
     
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    Llamia Well-Known Member

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    sf?
     
  17. Kagami Ren

    Kagami Ren General of Satans 5th army

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    @Satan Imagine it D:
    Then they do Incest stuff?
    -Onii-chan your big and hard thing feels good.
    Or
    -nee-chan you beautiful red 3rd mouth is so tight.
     
  18. Satan

    Satan Yes

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    Sounds retarded
     
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    Freakazoid Freakazoid member

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    It sounds like you'd like this fiction.
    http://royalroadl.com/fiction/629
    It's called Until Death and I recall it being phenomenal. It's completed and also has a standalone prequel. I recall most of the authors work being really good and your question reminded me of it.
     
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