Resolved Why do I feel irritated? (WDS)

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  1. DunnoGoodUsername

    DunnoGoodUsername Well-Known Member

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    During the arc of the olympics why do I feel irritated? I enjoyed the arcs before the olympics one.

    Novel I'm reading: World Domination System
     
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    I know how u feel . I read it until chap 600 something and that's when I realized , the author is trying to hard and too much in only one novel. The character development is crap and goals seem even more shit, all in all the novel just seems Eh... after some chaps
     
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    The whole arc of the olympics was pretty subpar, the introduction of the big 4/church coulda been handled better instead of waiting for the sports to reach its final or just cut out the whole sport. And the romance feels kinda forceful. Hope the next arc is better
     
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