WINTER WRITING WAR (WWW) - Poem & Short Story Competition (Discussion/Interest Thread)

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  1. Siostar

    Siostar Well-Known Member

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    Oh thanks, didn't expect a review so soon!
    I planned it to be a lot longer and that means it should have been a different message, but I guess a sweet poem work too. :blobsmilehappyeyes:

    I took a look on yours too.¨
    In all honesty, I don't know if I understand at all with complicated words and all. :blobsweat_2: It felt like your poem should have a double meaning?
    Well, the massage I got, is something like: Don't waste your gift to an unworthy person? For then you are wasting your feeling too?
     
    Siostar, Dec 21, 2019
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  2. NZPIEFACE

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    Oh wow that's a lot more optimistic than what I was going for. Works a lot better from that perspective, but I think I'll let you think about what mine is.

    I think my writing usually turns out a lot more optimistic than what I'm actually going for since I read into things in dark ways.
     
    NZPIEFACE, Dec 21, 2019
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  3. Siostar

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    The poem is dark. Like the writing is pretty dark... just the interpretation is up to ourselves, though I did take note of 'broken gift','death' and despair when I read it...
     
    Siostar, Dec 21, 2019
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    xD

    Measuring each word,
    Perfection could not occur,
    Impotence as a meme,
    Sublime in a blur,

    My thoughts pass by,
    Flash out of my sight,
    Talent comes to nill,
    Hard to swallow pill,

    The words beneath my hands,
    Do not make your pipi dance,
    Alas I have failed to make the cut,
    I dunno where my shit to put.
     
    BB_Tensei, Dec 21, 2019
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  5. Pyoo

    Pyoo ☀ Summer Melody ☀

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    Btw hows the short story contestants?
     
    Pyoo, Dec 28, 2019
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  6. NZPIEFACE

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    wtf completely forgot
     
    NZPIEFACE, Dec 28, 2019
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  7. Pyoo

    Pyoo ☀ Summer Melody ☀

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    Hurry hurry! There's not enough time!
     
    Pyoo, Dec 28, 2019
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  8. NZPIEFACE

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    It's just in like 2 weeks tho rit
     
    NZPIEFACE, Dec 28, 2019
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  9. Anra7777

    Anra7777 All powerful magic grammar hamster queen pirate.

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    No inspiration other than fanfic...
     
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  10. Moonpearl

    Moonpearl Professional Yuri Girl ❀ [Yuri Garden Creator]

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    I think I have to sit this one out, unfortunately. The stories I'm writing for another obligation will probably eat up all the time I have.
     
    Moonpearl, Dec 28, 2019
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  11. Pyoo

    Pyoo ☀ Summer Melody ☀

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    Isnt 2 weeks short for stories?
    :blobsob:
    :blob_teary:
     
    Pyoo, Dec 28, 2019
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    Anra7777 All powerful magic grammar hamster queen pirate.

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    *has written ~30k in ~2 weeks in the past when especially inspired* *has had trouble writing 1k in the past three weeks* ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
     
    Anra7777, Dec 28, 2019
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  13. Siostar

    Siostar Well-Known Member

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    well, Christmas and the new year is like the busiest time of the year?
     
    Siostar, Dec 28, 2019
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  14. Pyoo

    Pyoo ☀ Summer Melody ☀

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    Yeah... oh well
     
    Pyoo, Dec 28, 2019
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    VeraH eternally lazy

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    :hmm:wondering if I should submit on New Year's...........
     
    VeraH, Dec 30, 2019
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    Anra7777 All powerful magic grammar hamster queen pirate.

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    Have the judges decided on the winners for the poetry part yet? Will we get feedback? Or just a score?
     
    Anra7777, Dec 30, 2019
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  17. Pyoo

    Pyoo ☀ Summer Melody ☀

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    Score and comments if any
    But i think i have to postpone the announcement, havent had the time to judge them and my body decided to be sick on new years..

    Happy new year :blobsneeze:
     
    Pyoo, Jan 1, 2020
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  18. Pyoo

    Pyoo ☀ Summer Melody ☀

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    New year has passed!
     
    Pyoo, Jan 1, 2020
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    VeraH eternally lazy

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    Yeah I posted~
    I think. *goes double check*
     
    VeraH, Jan 1, 2020
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    Anra7777 All powerful magic grammar hamster queen pirate.

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    Happy New Year! I hope you feel better soon!
     
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