WINTER WRITING WAR (WWW) - Poem & Short Story Competition (Discussion/Interest Thread)

Discussion in 'Community Creations' started by Pyoo, Dec 9, 2019.

  1. Anra7777

    Anra7777 All powerful magic grammar hamster queen pirate.

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    Well, actually the star sounds pretty cool. I’m presuming the icon rewards don’t stack? I get only one? In that case, I’ll take the star for winning the poetry contest. If they do stack, then the star, and then whatever icon you choose, normal or Valentine.

    Thank you! And thank you to the judges!
     
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  2. VeraH

    VeraH [ on a semi-hiatus ]

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    @Pyoo you can keep your money haha~
    Thank you (and the judges)~
     
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  3. Pyoo

    Pyoo ☀ Summer Melody ☀

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    I didnt expect one person to win a lot!
    Is okay i can give u 2
    Ill give the 2nd one whenever i rmmber

    :blobjoy::blobjoy: is okay i can buy u one
     
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  4. VeraH

    VeraH [ on a semi-hiatus ]

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    I'll see if I remember in a week :ROFLMAO::ROFLMAO:
     
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  5. Evil_Ginger

    Evil_Ginger 『Lawful Neutral』『Cheese Master』『安德鲁』

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    I want an icon but I dont care which is what I meant
     
  6. Pyoo

    Pyoo ☀ Summer Melody ☀

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    *puff chest proudly*
     
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    NZPIEFACE Leecher

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    Re-reading the poem, I think the answer to any questions is "It's really edgy".
    wow this is... ok wow that's one bloody edgy poem

    I think the largest issue of the poem is that it lays on the edginess a bit too thickly, and doesn't really explore any other ideas apart from "im sad" and "this gift got fucked". Maybe the poem would've been better if each stanza had a clear idea behind it, instead of being almagamations of both ideas.
     
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  8. Nurman

    Nurman ( ಠ∩ಠ) [Retired Ton]

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    @Pyoo
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  9. Pyoo

    Pyoo ☀ Summer Melody ☀

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    Why an empty spoiler box?
     
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    Nurman ( ಠ∩ಠ) [Retired Ton]

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    Yes
     
  11. Anra7777

    Anra7777 All powerful magic grammar hamster queen pirate.

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    You don’t see the cat? Or is it a joke I’m not getting...
     
  12. Pyoo

    Pyoo ☀ Summer Melody ☀

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    Oh i didnt see it!
     
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