Spoiler World Hopping: God, Shine Bright!

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    Chinese Title: 快穿:男神,有点燃!
    English (fan)Title: World Hopping: God, Shine Bright!
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    Author: 墨泠
    Author's other works: Side Character Transmigrations: The Final Boss is No Joke
    Publisher: Qidian:notlikeblob:, yunqi
    Status: Ongoing (253 chapters)
    Description: TBA

    Some of my nonsensical ramblings:
    I love SCT. I love love love ShiSheng. And then I stumbled upon this one, new work by the same author. Her daughter's (MC's) attitudes are ones I really like. Who says only Young Master MCs can be snobbish and assholish, faceslapping people left and right but still coming out as the Victor on top. Her ML however, borders on being damsels in distress or heroine like. Even though I prefer my MLs to be doting BAMF guys, but hers have their own charms.

    Anyway. I've read the first arc and I like it. This spoiler thread is not as much as sharing the spoilers, but more of me taking down notes for this novel. It's a fast wear thing, which means there will be different worlds and this author usually does thousands of chapters for her work. It's ongoing. I'm doomed to checking for updates everyday. And it's a Qidian novel...

    My reminder and notes:
    My summaries are MTLed and sporadic when I have the time to do so. The titles, names or even genders aren't final. These things are usually lost in MTL. If you've ever worked with MTL before, you'll understand what I mean. I like to go into details, whenever I got engrossed into the plot or there's elements that I like. But I would sometime skip or skim through when it got boring. In other words, if you wish for accurate and detailed translation, please wait for a more experienced translator to properly translate them into English. In the events that a translator with decent release speed picks this up, I'll be reducing the detailed summary and keeping it to a rough summary or for private use only.

    I'm not planning to hog the spoilers all to myself so if anyone wants to join in and spoil, feel free to do so. I'll be blessed to skip some finger tapping, te-he. If you have any questions, feel free to ask but whether or not I can answer them, depends on my understandings of the raw source and even then it might not be accurate.

    Please read and take note:
    To readers: please use the +Quote option or the Reply option on posts if you are replying to multiple posts. Keep the Double Postings to a minimum.
    To staffs: I'm asking for leniency to Double Post in cases where there are long summaries or arcs, or in cases where there are no new posts in between spoiler posts.

    Quick Links:
    Arc 1: School Life, rich kids, young miss MC x poor student ML Arc 2: Showbiz, acting industry
    Arc 3: Xuanhuan setting, Mozu MC x Half!Mozu ML
    Arc 4: Modern Supernatural, Ghost MC x Human, ghost!bait ML
    Arc 5: Post-apocalypse zombie world, no ability MC x mysterious ability ML
    Arc 6: Ancient China setting, princess by title MC x prince of previous Emperor ML
    Arc 7: Modern day gangster and triads, triad young miss MC x capable young master of rival triad ML
    Arc 8: Modern Day school life, bullied, slow MC x illegitimate child of a rich family ML Arc 9: Ancient Chinese fantasy setting, Matriarch country, impromptu Empress' body double MC x hostile, wasted meridian by Empress ML
    Arc 10: Gamer MC x Hikikomori ML
    Arc 11: Modern day setting with angels, Guardian Angel, wings cut off MC x Doctor, slandered, luck stolen ML
    Arc 12: Xuanhuan setting, Goddess, power linked to evil demon MC x Sealed demon beast, black fox ML
    Arc 13: Modern day setting, Top assassin, betrayed by childhood assassin friends MC x Disabled on a wheelchair, ex-cop ML
     
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    The English title was decided after consulting a senior translator (thanks @SnowTime) . There's a reason for it, and it involves the hidden tasks, which also involves the ML.

    The following is Chapter 1 and 2, detailed so new readers would get the feel of this novel and its premise.

    Chapter 1
    A childish/childlike sound keeps repeating "You're dead You're dead You're dead" somewhere. It sounded like it came from the depth of her mind.
    Very bothersome.
    Very annoying.
    The voice doesn't stop. Instead, it gets more cheerful and sounded like it's singing a nursery rhyme.
    She wonders who's so ruthless to chant mantra at night, don't think just because you're a child you can do whatever you want.
    The voice gets even more cheerful.
    ChuZheng got up, dizzy but when she looked around, she doesn't recognize where she was, why she's here, was she kidnapped, which dog dares to kidnap her??
    System: You're dead.
    ChuZheng: You're dead.
    System: You're really dead. If you don't believe it, go check the mirror.
    ChuZheng looked around what seems to be a KTV room, went to the bathroom where there's a mirror and got a shock. She has colourful hair like shamate, scary makeup and strange clothes, and the face is unfamiliar too. WTH!!!
    She quickly figured out her situation. Apparently she met the legendary system. Let's just not mention where systems came from, who made them or what are their purposes. Her mission is to complete tasks in different worlds.
    She's cold and indifferent to it.
    Completing tasks can get a chance to resurrect.
    Still indifferent to it.
    What does she need a chance to resurrect for?? She's not dead! She refuse this inexplicable setting!
    System: Please accept the reality! (said happily and with a hint of gloating).
    ChuZheng: Swindler!
    Ignoring her, the system continues. The system's task is to get her to--
    Be a spendthrift (prodigal is the more common term on the community).
    Not spending money will die.
    Want to live, spend money.
    WAIT!
    What spendthrift? Where does the money come from?
    Of course, the system doesn't answer her, instead just continues explaining in cheerful child voice that they need to complete the counterattack for the host's body. Prepare to receive the plot. With a dull pain on her head, strange memories flashed in her mind.
    The body she's in is called Ji ChuZheng/JCZ (纪初筝).
    Her mom's dead. Her dad is busy at the company to take care of her. Whenever she finds him, he'll just pass her some money.
    Her father remarried when she was 13. The step-mom also brought her own daughter who's around her age and took the Ji family name. The step-mom treated her well, as if she's a biological daughter. Others who saw them thought the stepmom is good while JCZ is ignorant.
    JCZ became more unruly. She smoke, she drinks, she fights, she kills. She angered the father so much he almost died from heart attack.
    Compared to her, Ji TongTong/JTT (纪瞳瞳) is more sensible, and the father is more happy with her. As long as something happens involving them two, father would blame JCZ.
    No one knows that many of what happened were actually planned. The father doesn't believe that she's deceived by JTT but instead she's being unreasonable and bullying JTT, the weak lily that's being bullied by the vicious sister and needs protection.
    JCZ gets more rebellious. She got deceived by JTT until she lost her innocence (she got raped). The man JCZ likes got taken away by JTT, who sees her as a bad woman while JTT is pure, beautiful, kind and gentle.
    She finally got admitted to a mental hospital where JTT visited her and told her everything. Their purpose was to drive her out of the family so she can inherit everything.
    JCZ killed herself.
    JTT married her husband, have children and lived happily ever after....
    ChuZheng's having a headache digesting the memory and resentment from the original. But she's not her. She saw a knife on the table...
    System: What are you doing?! (frightened child voice) Our mission is to counterattack the family, not to kill these guys, calm down.
    Ignoring the system, ChuZheng took the knife and cut her wrist, blood rushed out, blink...and she's still at the same place, same scene, same look etc
    System: It's useless. Unless you complete the task, you'll always repeat this scene. (cheerful children's voice, not even hiding the gloating)
    ChuZheng's speechless, is there even such a thing? Systems are so strong now? Where can she report complains? This black hearted system! Must complain!!
    ChuZheng sat on the ground, the knife lying there on the table. She picked up the knife again and stabbed it to her heart.
    "Aahh!!" The door was pushed open and someone screamed. ChuZheng just thought it's such a meaningless scream, so noisy..her last thought before it turned dark for a second and she blinked still at the same place... WTH is this black technology keep resurrecting??
    System: Give up. As long as you work hard to complete the tasks, you can return to your life.
    Maybe the method of death is wrong.
    System: ...
    ChuZheng tried all kinds of deaths but she kept returning to the same scene. She sat on the ground, touched her wrist as the nasty voice kept ringing in her head. In the end, she had to accept everything that happened. She's trapped here. She can't return without doing the task. As for the system...absolutely won't believe it. That swindler.

    Chapter 2
    System: Young Miss/ (小姐姐/xiaojiejie-this is how system address her, gonna use xjj from here on), are you ready?
    ChuZheng: Not ready, you'll send me back?
    System: Then we start the spendthrift system (waste house) ! (ignores ChuZheng)
    ChuZheng: ....how to waste the house? Just demolish the house?
    (I get what it's trying to say but I'm too lazy to phrase this so it make sense in English:
    System: 那我们开始败家吧!
    ChuZheng: “……怎么败家?把这房子拆了?”)
    System: xjj don't worry. When the tasks are released, just follow the instructions to completion.
    ChuZheng asked some more while taking the knife she used to suicide just now and stabbed it in the sofa. Later she pulled it out and the shine from the knife shone on her pupils as she threatened the system, "Don't let me find your weakness" leaving the system scared, hiding it's little tail (pretty sure this is just a metaphor, the system is just a voice at this point). The system went on saying to let her adapt, it's set to be a novice plane (easy mode). ChuZheng just ignored it as she played with the knife. The system goes on explaining how the spendthrift system works, that she needs to pay attention to the value of currency and items involved which are subject to the plane she's at, things like can't give, donate or throw the money away. Her reward would be the the money and the items she purchased, the more she waste the more she gets. So if she spend 100,000 then she'll get the item from that 100,000 and the money 100,000 later. She asked what's the point of this system but I don't really get what system says (人傻钱多,给小姐姐送钱). System asked if she have any other questions but she answered none, which left the system sad as it announced they're starting. ChuZheng stabbed the knife she's been playing on the sofa. If one were to observed closely, the place it was inserted is the same as the one it was first inserted before...and again she touched her wrist. I wonder if there's some significance there...
    The current timeline is when original is with her group of friends at the KTV, but got drunk and sent to this room. Someone will soon come to rape her. She just thought of this and the door was opened. A young man came in and saw her sitting there, rubbing his hands anxiously and rushed towards her. She fought back and pointed the knife at him, but instead of getting scared he just said "Lil's beauty, you're drunk, this knife is dangerou--AHH!!" she cut the knife at his hand and beat him making him fell hitting his head on the table and fell on the ground. ChuZheng thinks her body condition is quite good, might be some benefits given by the system. She proceed to kick the still conscious guy, how dare he said 'little beauty's. She's still wearing the scary make up, calling this face a little beauty is outright an insult. She kicked him until he fainted. Seems like she still can't properly control her strength. The system seeing its xjj so fierce held its little tail, can't let it be caught by xjj. Looking at the guy on the ground, ChuZheng knows this is also planned by JTT. Suddenly a voice came up with the Main Line task. She needs to spend 100,000 pieces in one hour and the money has been transferred to her card. System reminded her that their goal is to counterattack for the original but then system confirmed her questions that she need to teach those who bullied her a lesson. She asked what happened if she can't spend 100,000 in the given time. System said that the amount will double.
    ChuZheng looked at the guy lying unconscious on the ground. The original lost her innocent because of him in the original timeline, for this crime killing him should be enough.
    System: xjj, we're spendthrift system, spendthrift system okay? There's no need to do any killing!!
    ChuZheng: ....so troublesome.
    After about half an hour, she threw the guy's clothes into a trashcan at the public restroom, took a lot at the phone and put it back in her pocket. She washed her hands and walked downstairs to the front desk...and ordered 100,000 pieces of wine to be sent to room 608. The shocked receptionist looked at the scary looking girl with Shamate hairstyle and leather clothes, asking if she's sure but ChuZheng just hand out her card. Receptionist asked in what kind of wine she wants, but she just said whatever, as long as you can drink until you drop dead. The receptionist thinks 100,000 pieces worth of wine, probably would really did. I'm taking liberties with this phrase so it made more sense in English. The receptionist took the order and ChuZheng swipe the card. System sounded, congratulated her for completing the task and receiving 100,000 pieces as reward. Expressionless, she received the card as she followed the waiter to the room. The people inside thought they sent it to the wrong room but the waiter insisted that they didn't send it to the wrong room and all has been paid.
     
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    Nooo !!!!! Please when you have time can you spoil some more :aww::aww::aww::blobmelt:
     
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    In a bit, I'm currently at work. But I'm probably not posting anything as detailed as the two chapters above, that's just to let readers understand the premise. Though I'd do some dialogues...what can I say, I like it when MC abused their obnoxious system.

    :sweating_profusely: It's not BL btw....for those who reads this thread posted by yours truly, I don't only read danmei even though that's most of my reading materials haha...
     
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    8 hours gap.

    I bring you spoiler for Chapter 3. I tried making it simple, but if you've seen my spoilers in other threads before.... I don't know how to make simple spoilers. So here's another partly MTL translated spoiler.

    Chapter 3
    The waiters left and ChuZheng appeared at the door. The group of people cheered and welcomed her in, mentioning the wines whoever sent it to them. Among these people talking and joking around, one person's face contorted. ChuZheng pushed the others aside, the box went quite. The original followed this people here to play, but after drinking a few glasses of wine (who knows it's cheap wine, wine or beer or just soda, I'll just go with what MTL gives me) she suddenly went dizzy. No doubt, someone must've slipped a mickey in her drinks. She picked a bottle of wine and took it to the person who looked weird just now. In a cold tone, she invite him to drink it. There's 100,000 pieces worth of wine. Can't waste them.
    The guy stuttered as he looked guilty and avoided looking straight at her.
    ChuZheng: Drink.
    This ChuZheng seems different from the usual ChuZheng they interacted with. Even with the same look and clothing, the temperament gives a totally different atmosphere. The most important thing is how cold she looks at others. It's like her whole body exudes cold air enough to make people shudder. The others didn't know what happened, just ChuZheng and that guy. Her cold eyes made him think that he's been exposed (duhh, liar 101: don't avoid eye contact).
    Guy: Sis ChuZheng, what did I do?
    ChuZheng: You know. (pushed the bottle towards him) Drink.
    Guy: ....
    Everyone: ...(what's going on?)
    Someone: Bro, how did you offend ChuZheng-jie (I keep forgetting to type Sis, so I'll leave this like so)? Quickly admit your wrong, tells you to drink so you drink.
    Someone else: That's right, drink quickly and apologize. ChuZheng-jie won't mind much.
    Guy: I.... (He looked away, feeling so cold)
    She must have known.
    Would she let him go?
    Will not!
    Must run!
    With these thoughts in mind and feeling so fearful, the guy pushed away the peraon beside him and ran straight out of the room.
    ChuZheng: Stop him.
    The Original is a rich girl. Even if their opponent is their friend, they will still listen to her. But the guy was fast, and he already opened the room's door. Before they could bring him back, there's a voice coming from outside.
    Huang: Isn't this our Great Miss Ji (he actually says Ji-daxiaojie, but I'm pretty sure he's being patronizing here)? What's up?
    A tattoed bald guy and a group of young guys were standing right outside the room. The guilty guy ran into him at the door.
    Guy: Bro Huang. Bro Huang, save me, save me...
    Huang took the guy and let him off. He's not happy that the plan failed. ChuZheng looked back at him. This person is not on good terms with the original, because he likes ChuZheng but she ignored him. They're like rival gangs. He spent some money to teach her a lesson before but there's always some losses. Their enmity are endless and it gets worse each time. It's probable that JTT used him against JCZ. The whole thing today was planned by him.
    This dog thing that needs a lesson sent himself to her door.
    Can she kill it?
    Huang-ge saw the many wines and invited himself in, sitting on the sofalike some big boss with his hands on both sides.
    ChuZheng touched her wrist, her fingertips rubbing thw wrist a few times....okay, now I'm very curious why she has this habit.
    Bang!
    ChuZheng broke a bottle and hit him directly on his bald head. He probably fainted, but he kinda just frozen with no reaction. She took a second bottle and raised it. These actions were done swiftly, no one had the time to react to it. Huang-ge's eyes rolled and he fell.
    Everyone swallowed. Her people are speechless. Since when is their ChuZheng-jie this fearless. No useless words, straight out actions.
    So scary.
    She looked at Huang's people. Before they started to take action, she used a piece if the broken glass and pressed it on Huang's neck, "Move if you dare." Her indifferent voice resounded, coupled with her expressionless space made the people feels anxious (exm while this Obasama heals from that arrow straight to her girly heart)
    The people froze. Meeting bad guys aren't scary, but meeting unreasonable guys are terrifying. (or that's the gist of it, lazy to make sense 不怕遇见厉害的,就怕遇见不讲规矩的)
    Huang's fanboy: JCZ, let our Huang-ge go! You dare to do this to our Huang-ge, don't wanna live!!
    ChuZheng: Get in, squat.
    Huang's fanboiz: What?
    ChuZheng: Get in, squat. Give you three seconds.
    Huang's guys looked at her and the unconscious Huang who was held by her. Some of them thought she's bluffing, but as he moved, she put pressure on the glass and blood blossoms on Huang's neck. In that stalemate, the raised their hands and walked in. They came in and squat down inside.
    ChuZheng: SanMao/三毛, search their weapons.
    SanMao the person she's referring has hair with three different colors, plus his surname is is Mao. (三毛猫 = sanmaomao = calico cat)
    SanMao was uncertain about this. After all, these are Huang and his people. ChuZheng just looked at him calmly. He flinched, goosebumps running along his arms as he quickly went and searched them. There were a lot of weapons, knives and even bats. ChuZheng put the wine in front of them.
    ChuZheng: Drink.
    Everyone: ...(is she having them squat here and drink?)
    ChuZheng pointed to all the wines on the table, even the ones piled on the ground. All for them.
    Is she having them drink until they drop dead?
    Someone tried to tell her that it's too much, but before the person get to start talking, he got interrupted by her glaring at him. With her thick eyeshadow and her dark as ink eyes, a glare so cold as if she can peer into the human soul. The person who spoke clammed down and didn't speak again. Before and after, how could she become so scary.
    Some of the guys on the ground looked at each other and suddenly they attacked them. Everyone was surprised, the room became chaotic. Someone went to Huang-ge to save him from ChuZheng. However, as he got close to her, he got beaten. Then, SanMao and the others looked at how ChuZheng beat them all one by one.
    SanMao: ....(when did ChuZheng-jie went to martial arts classes?)
     
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    Another Mc Like Shi Sheng:blobparty:
    Thank for spoiler. Big fan of Shi Sheng
     
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    I bring you chapter 4...part of it. There's about a quarter left but my phone's about dead and the app I'm using to split my screen as I type the spoiler keep crashing. Yeah, I'm a full-time mobile phone user. Remember, this is MTL so it's very inaccurate. Anyway, partially translated as usual. Really need to learn to make simple summary spoilers.

    Chapter 4 (partial)
    Huang-ge woke up to his men each holding a bottle of wine, obviously flushed drunk, lying everywhere in the room. Still trying to understand what's happening around him, theres a bottle of wine in front of him.
    Huang: JCZ...
    ChuZheng: Restrain him.
    SanMao: ...(whatever, they've already offended him this much)
    ChuZheng's guys held him at each side.
    Huang: JCZ, what're you trying to do??
    ChuZheng: Inviting you to drink.
    She pinched his chin and poured the bottle's content directly into his mouth. Huang struggled but had no choice to continue swallowing. SanMao was scared, whether there would be an accident (death by choking or alcohol poisoning probably). Until the last drop, Huang-ge seems like he's not drunk yet, but his mouth spew curses loudly.
    Huang: JCZ you slut, IDK how many people you've rolled sheets with, being so pretentious to this big boss, you let this boss go, see if I won't kill you...
    Seems like he got a good tolerance.
    Do another bottle.
    ChuZheng repeated her actions, this time Huang seems to be drunk.
    ChuZheng: Who told you to mess with me?
    Huang: Hahaha, this tiny miss who offended a lot of people, serves you right. When I wanted you, you ignored me. Now I don't want you anymore.
    ChuZheng: Who told you to mess with me?
    Huang was unrepentant but ChuZheng's patience is not limitless. Getting a bat/stick/rod from the weapons confiscated before, she started to beat up Huang. Huang was beaten until he was wailing painfully, begging to stop and he'll spill everything.
    He didn't know who contacted him, it was an unknown number sending him a text message getting him to deal with her. The reward was left at a designated location. The other party gave a lot of money and he also hated JCZ, so he took the job. Holding her thigh, he promised JCZ that he won't ever do it again.
    JCZ: (hands him a bottle) Drink.
    Huang: Drink, I'll drink, I'll drink. (hogging the bottle like crazy)
    JTT did a meticulous work, leaving no clues behind. As expected of the woman who'd survived until the end. ChuZheng had SqnMao watch over Huang and his men finishing all the wine. Later, the waiter who found these group of naked men almost called the police to arrest them.
    ChuZheng left the KTV. As she walked down the road, looking around and thinking about things while she's walking.
    How did she get here?
    What are systems? What's their purpose?
    Is it just to let her spend money?
    That's so dumb.
    Don't care about these questions for now. Need to find a way to return!
    But when she die here, she'll return here. Seems like there's no way to return...
    ChuZheng stopped. She suddenly realized that she's walked so far that she's arrived at a seemingly remote road. Someone ran somewhere in front of her but was stopped by a group of people. They were kicking and hitting the person on the ground while mocking him. Somewhere nearby, ChuZheng was watching all these, none of her business. She's actually complaining a lot in her heart.
    So terrible, just walking around and will meet this kind of scene. Would they make trouble for her? Can she turn back? What if she's treated as an accomplice? Kill to keep it under?
    Aaaaahhh!!!
    What is this broken place?
    She wants to go back!
    System: xjj, there's hidden tasks.
    ChuZheng: What hidden task?
    Said its a novice plane, but there's even hidden tasks, this system definitely cannot be trusted.
    System: Hidden task: Requesting xjj to get YeChen's nice guy card(let him see you as a good person). YeChen is the one beaten up. Must not let him turn sinister. (paraphrasing the sentence. It's something along, ChuZheng must get YeChen's haorenka-nice guy card, where YeChen will think "this is a good person". at the same time, she must make sure he won't turn black/dark - if you've seen other novels before it's when the person goes vicious and sinister, viewing everything and everyone as an enemy. in conjunction to the title, not turning dark so need to keep shining bright)
    ChuZheng: ??? (what nice guy card? Let him think she's a good person? Aren't you a spendthrift system?
    System: This..This is...to balance work and rest! In a way, this is also wasting money! (such a suspicious system, I wonder what it's keeping from us)
    How is this related to balancing work and rest?
    --my phone's low on power, c u later--
     
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    4 days gap, the rest of chapter 4.
    ChuZheng: If I'm not doing it?
    System: xjj, if the hidden task is not done well, you can't leave the plane (I'm leaving room for future development in case she can't leave if it's completed but not well done). You'll repeat it until you finish it. Terrible, right?
    .....who designed this dog setting?? She stared blankly at the people ganging up on YeChen.
    System: xjj, you're not going? (saving him right now, maybe you'll get a nice guy card. xjj!!
    ChuZheng: Can't win. (she calmly said this)
    System: But just now, weren't you so... (ferocious!)
    ChuZheng did not respond to the system. She was thinking, the name sounds familiar. Is it the person the original bullied? While she's thinking about it, the beating was over. One of the guys held YeChen's collar and warned him blabla. They left laughing. YeChen was kneeling on the ground, propping himself on the ground trying to get up but failed everytime.
    ChuZheng looked on as he tried to get up and failed. By the fifth time, she walked over and reached to him. YeChen, surprised he's not alone looked up and faced with a shocking, ghastly face. His heart sinks seeing this makeup.
    CheZheng and YeChen stared at each other silently (if this is your usual Romance novel, this would be romantic lol) for nearly a minute. He didn't dare to move, who knows what she wants. CheZheng in a cold voice asked him, "Am I a nice?" YeChen thought this is too laughable. He's so unlucky today. He met that group of guys, then meet the school famous JCZ. She waited for him to answer her but he just put on an ironic look. System reminded her that she can't be forceful like this, she must make him accept it in his heart.
    ChuZheng: .... (so troublesome)
    System: Ho-how about it? Okay, xjj!When the hidden task is completed, there will be rewards!
    Reward?
    Money?
    System: .... (it's not such a superficial system!)
    ChuZheng reached out to YeChen
    even as he flinched away and glared at her.
     
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    2 days gap.

    Chapter 5 (partial)
    ChuZheng took back her hand, looking at the black-dyed fingernails. Looks good, why would he flinched from it? She looked at him, and looked at her nails.
    Get up first.
    She bent down and picked him up by his collar, YeChen was choking as he got dragged up. Seeing the standing unsteadily and falling, she suddenly let go and moved back, making YeChen fell directly onto the ground.
    (I'm sorry but lol CZ what are you doing? Your EQ is in the negative or something? He's not flinching because of your nails. You don't help someone stand by choking them. If they're falling, you don't let them go and let them fall lol OMG girl, what are you doing??)
    His palm hit the ground, painful. He cast an angry glare at ChuZheng.
    ChuZheng: ....(I didn't know you're such a weakling. Don't look at me like this. I didn't mean it.)
    Taking a deep breath, ChuZheng picked him up by his arm this time. YeChen struggled, but he was just beaten up, so head no strength. She didn't even feel his so called struggle. She took him to a chair (probably bench) near them. YeChen looked at her with wary and angry eyes, it made him looked like a bullied beast. Looking at him, she can't help but reach out and pat his hair. Feeling it so soft, ChuZheng's expression became more obvious.
    So soft!
    If she touched it again, would he be angry?
    She looked at the young boy, still staring back at her with anger. Ignoring him, with an expressionless face she touched his hair again.
    Touch once is touching, touching twice is also touching.
    Just touch you.
    YeChen had been beaten, bullied, humiliated before, but being touched like this by such a person, he was embarrassed, and finally got angry. "Have you touched enough?!" he screamed. ChuZheng retracted her hand, told him to wait there in a cold, emotionless voice. She bent down and stared at YeChen, threatening him "Run and I'll break your legs". Not that he can run, he don't have the strength with his beaten up body. ChuZheng came back with a pack of meds. YeChen was suspicious. This girl was infamous at school, a great bully. Who even goes against her would be miserable. Even though he was not bullied by her directly, her group did bully him. He clenched his hand, it must be that her group is around somewhere, waiting to jump him.
    ChuZheng pulled his hand but YeChen tugged it back, don't want her to touch him. "Don't move",she said. The rough actions caused the wound to tear and bleed. YeChen bit his teeth, she must have done this deliberately. The alcohol (probably one of those rubbing alcohol thing you can bought at pharmacy, don't wash you wounds with booze kids) poured into his palm stings. It hurts worse than the beating but he didn't make a sound, just silently looking at the girl cleaning and putting band aid on his wound.
    YeChen: What are you trying to do?
    ChuZheng: (pulled his other hand, replying in a cold voice) Let you think I'm a nice person.
    YeChen: What games are you playing? Aren't you just waiting for me to believe you and then you'll laugh at me?
    Such tricks, he already experienced it before.
    :hmm: I'm gonna be simplifying sentences when I can't make sense of them, or they involve canon fodders. The rest is coming in a few hours.
     
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    11 hours gap.

    Chapter 5 (the rest of it)
    A bully wants to be recognize as a nice person, ridiculous.
    YeChen: No, I'm not falling for this.
    ChuZheng: Oh. (continues with the band aid)
    ChuZheng stared at her, seems like her expression from before to now had always been indifferent. She rolled up his trousers, but he backs away. ChuZheng held his knee but that aggravate the wound he had there. He thought whether she is deliberately torturing him? The misunderstood ChuZheng removed her hand, silently thought that she was not intentional, really unintentional. She rolled up his trousers revealing the injured knees, and the legs covered in old wounds. YeChen was angry, reached out to block the traces on his legs but ChuZheng stopped him, coldly telling him to not move. He retracted his hand. ChuZheng looked at his pants. It seems to be the school uniform of the original's school. She didn't immediately recognize it because the original never wore it. She applied the meds in his leg, her fingertips were warm unlike her cold looks. YeChen was frozen stuff, feeling the slight tingling from where her fingers touch his skin.
    I don't get this part much, but it probably goes about her asking, "you also go to somethingsomething?" and YeChen surprised, coz she doesn't recognize it/him, either works, idek what you're telling me here, google... Anyway, he feels it's unlikely that she doesn't recognize him, but thinking back to how she was, not remembering him is normal.
    As he was quietly thinking all these, she already finished with his legs and moved to his face. It was a rhetoric question, she just asked it casually. The school uniform he wore is already answer enough. His face was black and blue, there's even blood on the corner of his mouth. Suffice to say, it was miserable. After she was done, she turned to his torso.
    ChuZheng: There should be wounds on the body, take it off.
    YeChen: No need. (he hugged himself) I got this.
    ChuZheng nodded and handed the meds to him.
    YeChen: ....you turn around!
    ChuZheng stared at him coldly. Just a brat, who wants to look at him? When he saw she turned, he applied the meds to the wounds on his front, he can't reach his back, finally gave up. When he told her he's done, she collected the meds, and gave them to him, leaving him speechless. She dusted her hands, put them in her trouser pockets and about to leave.
    System: xjj! You're leaving?
    Or else?
    System: Send him home!! How poor and helpless do you think he is? How could you just leave him alone here?! This is what a nice guy should do!!
    ChuZheng frowned. Why is it so troublesome? Can't be a not nice guy?
    System: ....xjj must work hard to be a nice guy! Jiayou~~
    So she can go back!
    She must endure!
    Isn't it just sending him back?
    What's the big deal?
    ChuZheng cold stare fell on the boy, her cold voice asked, "Where do you live?" The dim street light shone on him, illuminating his unusually thin figure.
     
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    LaDyViL New Member Staff Member

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    Gap: More than 1 week.

    Already did until chapter 8, when my app freeze, taptaptap and crashed. Opened the recovery and everything was gone. Had to start all over again with multiple times crashing. Anyone uses split screen app for Android phones?

    Anyway, chapter 6 for now. I'll rush things a bit since I'm frustrated having to retype this all over again.
    CZ sent YC home, holding his hand until they reached his neighborhood. He awkwardly thanked her. She looked at him and pat his head for a hit. So soft, she thinks. He was late to react to it but when he did, she already turned away and left. He limped upstairs to his house/room. There was a lady in the living room sitting crossed leg on the sofa. She rudely scolded him. When she saw the bag in his hand, she grabbed it and turned over the things inside. Seeing the medicines, she continue yelling at him about getting sick, getting all these medicines, getting the money for them and whether he stole her money for them. YC thinks to himself, must endure, endure until he graduate. Her screams got louder and louder until a person from another room interrupted her. Alone in the quiet living room, he silently picked up the scattered medicines. Looking at the assortments, there's even cold meds, his face turned unsightly. Just what did she buy?

    CZ didn't return to her family home that night. No ones looking for her anyway. The next day she dye her colourful hair, remove her scary make up and finally left to get some normal clothes. That's when system announced her task.
    [Main Task: Please spend 200,000 in 2 hours.]
    The time was longer than the previous task, but she didn't take into account one thing - traffic jam. When she finally arrived at the place where she can spend 200,000 there was only half an hour left. Instead of going to a clothing store, she went to a jewelry store. The task only said to spend 200,000. It didn't specify that she need to spend them on clothes.

    The staff there received her politely even with her punk outfit. Even though the outfit looks strange, but her cold temperament doesn't seem out of place. She looked at the display and chose a Jade to buy. It was priced at 200,000. The staff reminded her of the price, but she just agreed to it. That's when someone suddenly pointed at the Jade and told the staff to wrap it up. The staff knows the person, and reminded her that the lady (CZ) had already took this. Yang QianQian - 杨茜茜 (YQQ) looked at CZ in disdain, questioning whether she (CZ) can afford to buy the jade. That's when she noticed that it was JCZ, she didn't immediately notice her because of the lack of makeup. She's a classmate of JCZ and also a friend of JTT. That's when system reminded her that the time is approaching. She told the staff to proceed to checkout but YQQ wanted to fought her for the jade on first time first serve basis since she saw it before. CZ asked if YQQ already paid deposit before but YQQ said since her mom is a diamond VIP member, then she doesn't have to pay. The staff meekly agrees with her. She ridiculed CZ whether she can even pay 200,000. Being JTT's friend, she knows that JCZ's dad already cancelled her card. CZ reached out and grab YQQ's finger.
     
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    Alina Moktan Sweet Foodie Girl

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    Finish reading arc 1. Mc is like shi sheng. She is so cool and handsome male lead who protected female lead from bully. Definitely my favorite characters after Shi Sheng
     
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    Ryss ... a small emanon... [snake] [tubby-lover]

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    Please break them
    Please break them
    Please break them
    *crosses fingers*
    :blobhero:
    Thx for the great spoilers, they are great (^w^)/
     
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    Though I think the ML here is not as cool as FengCi, haha...
    *cough* Your prayers has been heard. -crack-

    Chapter 7
    CZ's move was very fast, in no time a breaking sound was heard and YQQ was screaming in pain. CZ asked her if she still wants to buy it. YQQ fell down with cold sweat, shouting at her for hitting herself, calling for security. The staff was confused. CZ just continue to hurt YQQ until she yield, no longer buying the Jade. CZ handed her card to the staff and checked out her item. The staff was looking at her with fear in her eyes. She knew YQQ was intentionally provoking CZ, but can't do thing about it. It's like watching a fight where one side wins. So heroic,so handsome, so overbearing.

    After the payment for through, system congrats her for completing her task. The rewards, 200,000 has been deposited for her. She turned to YQQ, pointing to the jade.

    CZ: Buy? 300,000.

    YQQ cradling her hand, wanted to vomit blood. What buy? She even said 300,000. JCZ this slut.

    YQQ: JCZ, you wait for me! (spoken like a true villain hahaha)

    After she said that, she quickly left the store afraid of what CZ would do. CZ was speechless, thinking to herself, wait for what? Wait for her (CZ) to beat her (YQQ) up again? People nowadays are really weird. After she left with her purchase, the staff went to her coworker.

    Staff A: That girl just now, don't you think she's very handsome?
    Staff B: It's unfortunate that the one she offended is Miss Yang....
    Staff A: That young lady can spend 200,000 in one go. She shouldn't be an ordinary person.
    Staff B: Then what's with her get up?
    Staff A: That's why the manager always told us, don't judge a book by its cover.
    Staff B: Great advice.

    YQQ who ran away called JTT telling her she met JCZ. JTT thought her plan last night was a success but YQQ who didn't know about it complained to her about what happened at the store. JTT didn't understand what she's talking about, didn't think her plan would fail, and so they meet up to talk about it.

    Elsewhere, the system was taking to CZ.

    System: xjj, promise me if there are things that can be solved with money in the future, don't do this?

    CZ just said it'd save her some trouble. System complained, solving it like this then she can't show off being prodigal. It thinks how terrible CZ is. The next door system (a way to say other system, not literally living next door) said their host is so active and have a positive attitude. Why is it that it has to meet such a fierce xjj? CZ just said troublesome. She bought clothes and returned to the Ji house. There was no one at home, step-mom went to travel while JTT went out so there's just servants. Her room was colored gray and black, even her wardrobe are all of the same punk style. She removed the makeup and replaced the clothes with new ones. She looked very exquisite, if she laughs she'd be a stunning beauty. Even when she's cold, she'd give off the temperament of an ice cold beauty. Dunno if the original had a screw loose. Such a beauty but she went and painted herself looking like a ghost. CZ asked system for its name. I couldn't understand much about this, but essentially system said its name is Greatest/King system and CZ replied with something that belittled his name leaving the system feeling depressed. CZ lay on the bed, thinking what happened to her and how she's stuck having to complete these tasks to return until she fell asleep.

    CZ woke up from persistent knocking on her door. Opening the door, a Girl witbcurly hair reaching her shoulder, white dress, white jade skin, was standing there. That's JTT. She was shocked looking at CZ without her usual make up. She knew JCZ was beautiful, so when JCZ painted her face ugly before, she was secretly happy. But now she's not tainted instead become more dazzling. CZ asked her what she wants. JTT felt the voice was familiar but the temperament and tone was even colder.

    JTT: Sister?
    CZ: What is it?
    JTT: Sister, why didn't you put make up?
    CZ: What is it?
    JTT: No, nothing. I heard the maid said you've returned, so I came to see you.
    CZ: See if I've been tarnished by your people?
    JTT: Sister, what are you saying?

    JTT felt like CZ could see straight to her inner thoughts. Her eyes were wide open, her pupils narrow, her heart beat thunderously, looking all innocent. CZ pulled out her phone and started a recording.

    "Yes, it's JTT. She paid me, let me rape you. There's money and...so... Don't hit me. It's really JTT. I'm just doing what I've been paid to do.

    Chapter 8
    JTT took a step back, her face getting paler but she still kept up her pretense. Too bad she's still young, her pretense are flawed.

    JTT: Sister, what is this? How come I don't understand it?

    CZ stopped the recording. So young, so vicious. She looked very nice but why walk this path of no return? Haiz, what a pity. System was speechless, its xjj's inner heart is such a drama queen. Forget it, it'll just pretend to be offline, lest xjj got aggressive again.

    CZ: You know it is what it is.
    JTT: Sister, don't joke with me. I really don't know what this is. I, I still have homework to do, I'm going first.

    In her room, JTT was panicking. She was very secretive about this, how could it got out. She won't believe there's evidence of her involvement. She called Huang but it did not connect. At this time, Huang was at the hospital receiving treatment. No time to answer her. She gets more nervous, she pulled off her phone card and flushed it down the toilet. Only then did she felt relieved.

    CZ actually didn't have evidence. The recording was something she force Huang to do. System suddenly told her to receive information about YC. Before she could prepare herself, the information was unloaded unto her mind. YC, orphan, got picked up by aunt and uncle, taking into account the inherited house from the parent. He endured humiliation and abuse, so he can leave after graduation to go to college. Something something I don't get happen, he blackened and murdered the aunt and uncle cruelly before fleeing. After many years, he returned to seek revenge to those who bullied him, let them get punished one by one until they die.

    CZ: This is also a mission?
    System: Yes, don't let YC blacken. Therefore xjj, please pay attention to YC! Let him see how beautiful this world is!
    CZ: ....

    Monday, JTT left for school with friends while CZ went driven in a car. Suddenly she told the driver to stop. She took her bag and got out of the car, stepping on the flowerbed and jumped across from it. Driver was speechless, thinking the young miss looked kinda handsome. In another scene, YC is stopped and surrounded by some delinquents pulling his bicycle. He got off the bicycle and pushed it forward ignoring the bullies. They dragged him to the park and beat him up. While these was happening, near the flowerbed CZ was watching. YC didn't recognize her at first but then seeing her bag and the key chain on it did he recognize who it was. She didn't evade his sight, just looked on indifferently. YC covered his head with his hands and endured without a word. The bully ridiculed him but seeing him silently enduring, they wanted to continue with the beating when he was stopped. The bully backhanded his attacker but CZ caught his wrist and held him down.

    Student A: Arrgh!!
    Student B: Boss!
    Student C: Boss, are you OK?
    Student D: Where did this butch come from, dare beat our boss! Let him go!
    Student A: Beautiful miss, if there's anything, let's talk about it calmly.

    CZ let him go, the guy pushed away from her.

    CZ: Apologize.
    Student A: Your uncle go apologize. What areyou looking at? Beat her up!

    CZ dropped her bag, and started beating them up. The kids were just novice in street fighting. She dealt with them in moments effortlessly. She picked up her bag.

    CZ: Apologize.
    Students: We're sorry, sorry.
    CZ: Him. Apologize to him.

    They looked at YC, incredulous where he knew such beautiful woman.

    Students: Sorry.

    They grit their teeth apologizing to him. Just wait, they'll get him for this.

    CZ: Scram.

    There was only just them at the park now. YC looked up only to have a hand patting, rubbing his head.
    Soft.
    Comfortable.
    Touch some more.

    YC: You've had enough?

    What did she think he is...patting him like a large dog. CZ looked back with a serious face, as if she hasn't touched enough yet.
    YC was speechless, he stood up but wobbling after the beating. CZ reached out to stable him when he questioned her of her motive. She just stood there looking at him getting beaten, didn't intend to save him. Not that he expected her to save him, he's used to it. Someday, those who bullied him will pay.

    CZ: Am I a nice person?

    She said this in her cold voice,pulling him back from his thoughts. YC looked complicated, he looked around, trying to find clues that this is just her trying to mess with him.

    :sweating_profusely: Finally done with it, the stupid app I'm using to type while having the MTL open kept crashing and I had to restart it. Luckily, there's a recovery option or I'd straight give up to humanize for your consumption. If this is how the app behave while on free mode, I'm so not spending on the premium.
     
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    Read the first two arcs. I really like how in this, the FL takes the role usually assumed by the ML in other novels and is the one protecting/raising the ML. She solves all his problems in an overbearing, domineering way.
     
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    Alina Moktan Sweet Foodie Girl

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    That's why I like this novel. It's rare have such gem novel like this. Mc is such cool and overbearing male lead who protected female lead and solve problems for him. He is like damsel in distress. Mc is like hero
     
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    LaDyViL New Member Staff Member

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    LOL at times I wanted to just choke him for being such a damsel, even CZ complained how he is such a weak chicken. In his defense though, the system once said that he's like that because he was not allowed the chance to blacken. If he did blacken, he probably would be one of those OP villain boss.
     
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    I enjoy the system trying to encourage FL the best way to solve problems is by throwing money at them until they go away.
     
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    I adore the system lol that poor child got its name bastardized by CZ, I enjoy all the sufferings caused by CZ. And then when it go complaining how the next door system got it easy, OMG how adorable.
     
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    No more spoilers?