Request World of Karik, Translated Russian Novel

Put it in "Spoiler" or something, this is a Long Prologue...

 

Long chapter as well, interesting novel tho, little confusing, but interesting nonetheless

 

Interesting but confusing prologue. I found certain sentences awkward to read but otherwise awesome translation.

 

Could you single out these proposals please?

 

here the exit appeared feels odd

different weapon just doesn't sound right

too many clauses

Till. Could not understand the meaning

force-forceful

you probably changed the viewpoint and the sentence is clunky.

 

Thank you so much. I will be sure to correct and take into account in the future)

 

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Why would you advertise a story by saying it will make readers disgusted?
@asriu @Shem
Did I miss something?

 

*clueless* ( ´･_･`)

 

so you really translated it~

 

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