LCD Yaritsukai to Kuroneko

Recently i remembered this novel and that i liked it's setting but for some reason stopped reading~
I started to read it from the start again and now i remembered why I stopped...

...the dialogues are incredibly confusing and often makes me think that the characters are talking about different topics or that there is missing lines
My head hurts from reading it for too long ..
Can someone tell me if the writing style becomes better later? With a smoother flow? I want to continue reading but getting confused whenever there is a chat is killing my drive to read... orz

 

Hey, why does it find hard for me to read this novel? Is it the translators or the way the novel is. I'm middle of reading chapter 11.

 

First part is rough, was the translator at the time. It gets better after 30? Been years so I could be wrong on when the translation gets better