Comments on Profile Post by lexlangel

Thats just a part of it crimson

Thats a declaration of war?!

I side with father!

Mainly because he gave me an allowance!

I will start training~

*giggle* I look forward to it~

I may be bad at technology but not so sure about the creative part of my brain~

@lexlangel your poems are good, but mine are better

@CrimsonJade don't remember seeing you poems...

I am bad at it but for you check it http://forum.novelupdates.com/threads/partners-in-rhyme-pyoo-poem-pool.11053/

http://forum.novelupdates.com/members/poetic-hall-of-reflection.43212/

And

@LysUltima thats because I don't feel like posting them.... to lazy.........I should...........

Sad you arrived late for the competition

*weeping softly in the corner*

http://forum.novelupdates.com/threads/nufs-2nd-anniversary-celebration-poetry-competition.46654/

Thats the competition if you want to check

But I'm in the competition?

You forgot your daughter's work?

I know you read it...

I liked the most the one from siostar cuz of the presentation~

XD i meant crimson i read yours

@lexlangel mention who you're talking to next time...

As for siostar's poem...

The image was nice, but the words sounded off...

lol was the prize only a badge?

Dunno i posted cuz was taged that one is my very 1st poem xD

Haha I don't check the forum section until everything's over so me not in any of them

So for if i want to read your poems i gotta ask you here at the moment xD

XD I'm braindead now but maybe later

No worries i am brain dead 90 % of the time

LOL

I posted it in the poetic hall but since you are lazy

To my dear master, The Cookie

Meeting you was my grace,
Serving you is my pride
Whatever trouble i shall face
I will stay at my master side.

You are my master, i am a butler
Taking care of you is my duty
To save cookie i need more butter
None shall profane master beauty.

If you can follow up that would be nice x)

follow up by my own poem or continue yours?

Whatever comes to your mind first ~~

Is that Engrish?
Father knows no grammar,
He likes fish,
So I gave him the hammer.

Why a hammer?
He knows no grammar...
Learn English,
To finish that fish.

XD

I swear, why are people writing poetry when they don't know how to conjugate verbs...

Sigh, at least use grammarly, @lexlangel
My OCD is killing me.

A life too bright is like the sun
a life too gloomy is like the rain
but for a field to yields its flower
its needs both laugh and pain

To my dear master, the Cookie

Meeting you was my grace,
Serving you is my pride
Whatever trouble I shall face
I will stay at my master's side.

You are my master, I am a butler
Taking care of you is my duty
To save Cookie I need more butter
None shall profane master's beauty.

Okay, you had fairly good verb conjugation...

But, father, learn how to use " 's ," please! Capitalize "I"! "The" is never capitalized, unless at the start of a sentence!

whats the difference? ohhhhh

@lexlangel
No! Butler does not rhyme with butter!

You are my master, I am your slave
Taking care of you is my duty
All your roads I shall pave
None shall profane master's beauty.

That's better...

lol

Lys is translator crimson xD

His i mean her eyes bleed ~~

What do you mean, father?

I truly am brain dead rn cant even comprehend the words of my favorite novels, lets compete another time *muffled yawn*