Misc The Novel Writing Game: Vol 2- The Alien Invaders

Vol 1 is this thread. Contrary to everyone's expectation, the story there did get a proper(LOL) ending. But there were plenty lose ends and lots of potential. So, here is a continuation of that story.

Spoiler: Vol 1 Summary

Now, seeing the chaotic state of the previous thread, here are some rules:
1) Each poster can add 1-5 sentences. 5 sentences make a paragraph. In case of dialogues, the size can be increased to 7 sentences.
2) All sentences contributing to the novel must be bolded, so as to differentiate comments to the other people's posts and the actual input to the novel.
3) Real life religions, figureheads and comments about them are NOT allowed.
4) Characters from other fictions(translated or otherwise) must also not be used in the narrative. References to these characters as a humor plot point is allowed but using them as minor/ side characters is not allowed.

Vol 2 has 3 factions in it:
1) The Shota Rebels
2) The Bishie Invaders
3) The Rest of Them

There is another faction left-over from Vol 1: The Loli Remnants. However, for conveniences sake, The Loli Remanants have been absorbed by The Shota Rebels. This is because, in the story, the Loli Gods have been defeated and thus, the Loli's are no longer in power. Take that as you will.

How to play/write:
--> You can simply add a line or a paragraph as you see fit.
OR
--> You can make a character for a faction in this format:

Then, you use that character to make your faction rise on top.
OR
--> Both of the above

Now, and this is the most important one:

Spoiler: Current Members

Spoiler: 1- The Shota Rebels

None so far

Spoiler: The Bishie Invaders

None so far

Spoiler: The Rest Of Them

Spoiler: Satans Glorious Army

Das

Spoiler: [Plebians] One Man Army

ZoneQ11

Spoiler: Hidden Holy Church of Lolita

Elchie "LC" LivingCorpse

Spoiler: the FA

AHKoT
Arcturus Talenel'Elin

Here's the beginning line:

After the war got over, Astolfo returned back home. He was back to being a Shota and after the chaos of the past few days, all he wanted was peace and quiet. But the fates were against him. For as soon as he returned home, he was greeted by a group of people covered in pink glitter.

 

And so it begins...

Name: Das
Faction: Satans Glorious Army
Appearance: Unknown
Faction goals: Death to all who will not swear allegiance to supreme leader @Satan.

While the mortals relax, Satans army prepares for another offensive against the mortals

 

Name: Zone Q11
Faction: The Rest of Them ([Plebeian] One Man Army)
Appearance: No definitive appearance
Goal: To observe the chaos and to make some when one has the time

As the immortals rest, the lone plebeian waits as he searches the time to create chaos.

 

erm, there are only 3 factions in the story,

Other than the first two, all the rest fall in the third faction.
Thus, technically, there is no faction such as 'Satans Glorious Army'.
It can use it as a sub-faction for 'The Rest of Them'.
So please, specify both the Faction and the sub-faction as well

 

Give it time and we shall rise, there is no stopping Satans army

 

Lol, okay.

You can start with the story writing (its in this thread itself). This way, you can get a head start. The important thing is the story after-all. Just bold the part of sentences that are part of the story.

 

Hmph... Mortals

Name : Elchie "LC" LivingCorpse
Faction : The Rest of Them (Holy Church of Lolita)
Goal : observing mortals until the LoliGod revives
Appearance : a Really Wicked Beautiful Trap Onee-san

Foolish mortals. Hmph, let them enjoy their short lived victory.
Cause I, The Great Priest Inquisitor of the Holy Church of Lolita shall amuse myself with their vain struggle. Until The Great One revives, enjoy your life foolish mortals... For there's only one true Justice, Justice is Loli!
Mwahahahahahahaha!
*echo*
*echo*
*echo*
*echo*

 

Sooooo.... Your a Futanari?

 

Call me Onee-san young man
Or Anego also works.

I only reserved Onii-chan for the Loli's at the Church.

 

Name: AHKoT
Faction: The rest of them ( the FA faction)
Goal: To crush every single bishie , shota ( in short the good looking faction ) and show the world that a man true path is a loner path.
First send out the assassin @Pie to assassinate Astolfo
Second let's summon our guild'smaster @HolyGuise

 

You didn't deny the futa thing...

 

Name: Arcturus Talenel'Elin
Faction: The rest of them ( Cat Corps [Also Futa Alliance])
Goal: To make Money

(Also promote the greatness of Futanaris)

 

*ehem*
Technically, I'm a Corpse... so... I can modify my body at will... so... yeah I'm not gonna deny it

 

Sigh... I don't see any progress in the storyline. The first volume was much more funnier

 

Well, people are just writing their Factions instead of the actual story, so this is the result

On that note, why don't you continue the story? There's no need to stick to the characters anyways as they are only for fun...

 

From the group a 40 years old man with a peacock feathers on his head while wearing a pair of knee stocks (while still being covered in pink glitter of course) said : "Damn you shota brat, you actually dare to attack our goodness."
Astolfo with a dumbfounded face muttered:" A hentai lolicon has appeared"

 

Astolfo calmed his mind and searched through his pockets. He then took out an item and gave it to the hentai lolicon.
"here's a strawberry lolipop. "
While the hentai lolicon happily licked the pink strawberry lolipop, Astolfo about turned, tucked his tail and ran away towards a new adventure.

 

Name: Pooh The Conquerer
Faction: Church of The Holy Milf
Goal: To enlighten man of the true wonders of life.
Description: Luscious golden fur that makes all parrots head turn. A nose sculptured by the laws themselves. A body that surpasses the gods. Paws so smooth like a jade. Eyes that contain wisdom and knowledge of all things. A look so piercing but yet gentle one look can make you never look away. It was as if every thing positive was given to him and all negative things could not be seen on his body. He has abs of Magnesium based alloy. Prayer beads bounced on his wrists showing he is holy.

 

But the pervert lolicon doesn't give up with a lolipop in his mouth he chase after Astolfo with lightning speed.
Astolfo: " Damn, to think a 40 old man can run this fast"
PL( pervert lolicon):" Brat, I'm only 19 this year who are you calling a 40 old man???"
Astolfo: " Don't think you can trick me oji-san"
PL:" sob ... sob... you brat remember this I'll go serious
UNLOCK OH MY HIDDEN POWER
BALANCE BREAKER
VENGEANCE!!!(x3 power per use)VENGEANCE VENGEANCE VENGEANCE VENGEANCE
I'll kill you brattttttt"
Then Optimus Prime jump out of nowhere and....

 

Scram you swindled