The Scum Villain's Self-Saving System fan fiction

@Luen are you still here?I need names for Bai Zhan Students!

 

/Reads spoiler about Bing-ge's method of dealing with backlash.

/Remembers G's stats are maxed for Build, Heal and Repair

Huh.
/Taking notes

 

Mine! My precious. Don't worry you can have the G world version of Liu. I'll take the canon one.

My thoughts are non-canon and full of 3P.

In canon the story meant that the destined lover is Bing-mei. Liu thought it was him. In G's version of the story it can't be Bing-mei so another person has to be substituted otherwise there wouldn't be a joke anymore and I think we would all enjoy LQG's panicked expression and extreme anger and denial.

 

YES WOO GAV I GET G'S VERSION OF LITTLE LIU GIVE MEH *PULLS OUT CANDELS AND ROPE*

 

this is true. In G's world when the native LBH is there, he will be called Bing-chibi.

Spoiler

Because his papa is an anime otaku. :V

 

The lovely thing about Scum Villain is that it's totally got at least two worlds, and probably a lot more, possibly an infinite number. All of us fan can pick our own. I also call dibs on the Bai Zhan Peak Secret Technique Liu. The guy's an expert at sex magic.

 

No.
/Is not going to give G's worlds' Liu to you. God knows what would happen.
/Has pity on him
/throws you an unfortunate Liu Qingge from a different world without G since it isnt like there is a shortage of those, goddamnit.

 

of course you would you filthy sex addict (JK)

 

aww eh its the same anyways come now little liu join me *Drags a screaming confused liu qinge into a basement*

 

/pets own characters. Nobody look at the poor man being dragged off by Bun.

 

/currently writing, will get back to you guys; just need a name or two for bai zhan students.

 

*Screaming in the distance that slowly turns to moans* DRIPPING HOT WAX ONTO MY VICTIMS IS SO FUN HAHAH THATS RIGHT LITTLE LIU TURN INTO AN M A HUGE M&M

 

I'm still here, guys. I'm just MTL'ing. Very interesting chapter this time and fluffy.

 

Lol you guys are so thirsty xD shouldn't have expected anything else though lol

 

you may join if you want not the bondage just find your own version of little liu and do whatever you want to him

 

@readerz

While you are here.......... excerpt from your translation:

Mu Chen shook the bell and decided to hang it on his disciple’s neck. He caught Gu Yunjue by the hand.


“Master, don’t you think it’s not appropriate to hang it here?” Gu Yunjue was shocked and helplessly pinched Mu Chen’s hand.
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did it really say he grabbed gu yunjue by the hand? and not gu yunjue grabbed him by his hand? Cuz mu chen is reaching out to tie a bell around the neck..... that should require 2hands going to the neck(why is he grabbing an arm?) while on the next line gu yunjue is suddenly pinching his hand..... (which confuses me... who is grabbing who)

Few minor grammar errors and extra words too when i was reading everything but can't remember since i read it a few hours ago.

Probably easy to find if you run it through a spellchecker or toss it onto google docs

Cant find a comments section on mobile.....

 

Thanks. Uh, let me check the hand thing.

edit: uh, right yeah the one who grabbed the hand was the disciple. fixed it.

 

heres a list of other corrections

Spoiler: list of things to fix each chapter

you capitalized Shishu sometime and sometimes its not. don't remember which chapters...... probably all (and possibly all other forms for teacher/master/titles) started noticing around chapters 3 and 4

chapter one:

like a coling snake > like a coiling snake

The child called Gu Yunjueis only six years old >The child called Gu Yunjue is only six years old

cultivation has has advanced into the Purification stage> cultivation has advanced into the Purification stage

His appearance stuns the the disciples responsible for the trial> His appearance stuns the disciples responsible for the trial
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chapter two:

This boy just touched his face and and now touched the chest> This boy just touched his face and now touched the chest

frowned,leaned > frowned, leaned

Gu Yunjue is now a high ranking disciple > Gu Yunjue is now a high-ranking disciple
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chapter three: clean
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chapter four:

These two pills are are a marvelous medicine> These two pills are a marvelous medicine
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chapter five:

threfore he will be placed in the detention > therefore he will be placed in the detention

well thats most of it..... I might have accidentally cleared my sticky note earlier of edits for between 3-4 so its questionable if i got all of them. its also just quick skimming over the previous chaps so just spell check and obvious word repeats. I vaguely remember some awkward sentence structure but thats kinda subjective and not too important.

 

Thanks, I'll fix it in a few minutes.

 

Little (pffft... so he's a "Little," huh? )Liu can be my battle butler