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    I am a sadistic necromancer. I like to see you suffer...
     
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    And when black ink freezes, we have @Frozen ink ba dum tss
     
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    @Ghostap
    I actually liked the second one. Maybe because I am not a native English speaker.
     
  4. Heyu

    Heyu Not enough space

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    This haiku is titled You

    Your looks are so naught
    Imagination don't have
    Poetry is bad
     
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    How does hiaku work?
    5
    4
    3?

    Or 5 3 3?
     
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    Heyu Not enough space

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    5 7 5
     
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    But in Japanese then? Or english because your haiku doesn't fit those numbers
     
  8. Heyu

    Heyu Not enough space

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    is for syllabes, it doesn't fit? you sure? english have a shitty way to manage syllabes but isn't it ok? imagination have 5 syllabes and don't and have are monosyllabes, while your looks are so naught are 5 monosyllabes too..
     
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    Sorry I was counting words
     
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    This haiku is dedicated to @Heyu and @You

    It's called Hey, you!

    Hey, you, over there!
    Did you know? Life is not fair?
    Therefore make it fair.
     
  11. Heyu

    Heyu Not enough space

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    you need an user @Hey and an user @You to use fusion summon and get me..
     
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    mcmunhuu [Got rejected by LaDyViL] [T_T] [No Game No Life]

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    For cat owners
    Cats are cute
    Fun to play
    Just that
    They just .... Next is your imagination
     
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    just reposting poem i found :

    They'll hate you if you are pretty
    They'll hate you if you are not
    They'll hate you for what you lack
    They'll hate you for what you got