Well, I didn't have any particular inspiration for it, just made things as they came to head! xD Most stuff I read nowadays are Japanese novels though, so it might have some influence though...
You should go for some novels with more... eh difficult words? It would help you to have more word choice, maybe?
Laaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaazy, I don't read much nowadays, might as well make sure the stuff I'm reading is fun~
"You left me alone, love..." Alone my ass! I carried you all the way here! Give me a break! Hahaha ! Really give off a "real" feeling or a "comedy novel" feeling. Somehow it felt a little weird that kinda make me hesitate but ... hmmmmm... now that i write that i again want to vote no... It's really good and all that but somehow i can't help but dislike your story a little. Sorry you won't get my vote. Really sorry.
Wow! What a nice story you made and I hope you never get tiring of writing stories like this and always stay healthy.
Glad you liked it! I started a new series in ScribbleHub just now if you wanna give it a shot btw! ^^)/
Sure thing. I just made the account there and still didn't read anything because I wanted to read some books first. Now I can start there with yours.