Hello Is there anyone interested in Beta reading and giving feedback on the first two chapters of my work in progress? It's a isekai novel so if that's your thing let me know
What other genres is it, besides isekai? I’m not very smart and I don’t do very well with analyzing characters/worldbuilding, so what kind of feedback would you be looking for?
I'm going for dark fantasy, Its honestly just the start I'm not looking for an in depth break down. A simple good start suffices for me
Uh, I think so? You choose the message/convo button and then @ the user of whoever you want to converse with? I think lol.
I wouldn't mind helping out either. I specialize in worldbuilding. Then again... I dropped novels of the likes of Monarch of Evernight and rated them 2 stars because the author decided to fuck world consistency for some cheap plot points. So expect nothing but a semi constructive roast.
Please avoid putting in an SJW nagging Flat-Earth mother-in-law who lives in a van down by the river with Seymour, a Chris Walken-sounding and silent film-watching vegan cannibal zombie moose.
I don't mind reading. Since I'm relearning grammar right now, I'll be able to spot prose problems relatively easily and be able to explain things if needed.