Comments on Profile Post by SquadCammander354

You didn't even capitalize the first word on most of the sentences, nor placed a majority of the periods in where they should be.

I knew that it was horrible but i didn’t think it was this bad

.....you can still edit it.

No I deleted it I need to start from scratch and make a better story

OwO) / Ganbatte~!

Let’s put the mistakes aside was the actual story good

No

Gotta go to school now~!

Okay have fun