Comments on Profile Post by CloudySkySadMoon

I your father does not remember you however.

Why? That's no good.

I your Father thinks it's good

Btw, sensei, u didn't see my ch. 1 version 2, did you?

*Pout*

I your Father have seen.

I your daughter wants to know ur thoughts.

Daugh-!? *Ahem* First of all, good job on increasing the word count. Second of all , you need to improve on wording a bit, but that is something you'll learn the more you write and read other works. Also, the way you describe the world is good, just needs a bit more polishing tho. Other than that you're good.

Thanks daddy! *big shiny smile*

*Blushes Slightly* Keep in mind that writers are dull blades that are sharpened through writing!

Okay~!

This one as well!! @Casul Reader @LazyDoc @Kerbasi @CarefreeRainCloud