So my story is a prequel to the games. Considering the timeline, there should be three characters who are either teens or pre-teens. I had the two MCs meet the third character in my latest chapter and made him a teen... before realizing that in earlier chapters I’d already established the other two as adults. (Which is bad, but inconsistency is worse.) I also made the teen kinda nicer than he should be.
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