Tutorials & Resources 【CN】 用……造句 Practice - Late Elementary - HSK 4 and below

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  1. syc

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    我用错吗？>.<

    理想中的我，应该能聊天聊整天。我觉得能一直讲话的人很厉害，很有趣，所以自己也想要有那个能力。

    Topic: 浪漫
     
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    yuzuki [sweet night] [plum blossoms]

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    不知道！只是头有点晕。不习惯那种说法，而且发音都混在一起。
    （我不习惯用这些词，拜托大家帮我改写！）

    谈到恋爱，人们理想中的初次约会因该包裹一个浪漫的晚上，无比的美景，高级的酒楼。
    不过这只是普通的理想而已，并不是我自己的理想。
    对我来说，有一位可爱一点儿的同伴就足够了。

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    照顾
     
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    我没看到什么问题，可是你为什么用因该，不用应该呢？

    我希望大家长大的时候能好好照顾父母，他们把屎把尿抚养你，所以得要照顾到他们的心声，不要让他们住在养老院。

    Uhh, I think I ended up using some weird words. Took me forever to find them xD. Also, yay idioms!

    Topic: 安全
     
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    yuzuki [sweet night] [plum blossoms]

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    不小心打错了！谢谢！

    good job！（＾∇＾）
    我的 《INT》和《MP》 不够，无法对复杂的魔咒评论。

    开车时，必须系上安全带！这是为了自己的安全。
    中国人经常不用安全带。好危险！

    Topic：意见
     
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    Fabulist Ed 〖He Who Must Not Be Tamed〗〖Workaholic〗

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    Idioms are fun!

    古语有云, 道不同不相为谋.
    但在这个资讯发达的世界 我多时会跟意见不同的人说话. 所以我常常必须三思而后行, 而且用的字眼万万不可演得目中无人. 一定要明白什么是 "打人不打脸, 骂人不揭短".

    "演得", not to "act like / appear as" is that correct?

    Topic：How about ... 时间
     
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    Oh! You guys are awesome!:aww:

    You've written it very well, and this is my translation (there may be some of my own style of speaking)
    说到谈恋爱，人们理想中的初次约会应该包括一个浪漫的晚上，无与伦比的美景，高级的饭店。
    不过这只是大众的理想而已，并不是我自己的理想。

    "包裹" often means "package" and "包括" means "Include".
    "无与伦比" is an idiom and means "incomparable". "无比" and other words you wrote are also very good.(y)

    Oh! You quoted many idioms, this sentence you wrote is very awesome!(y)
    You can use "经常" instead of "多时", and use "显得" instead of "演得".:p

    "把屎把尿", hahah..it's very interesting!:blobsmilehappyeyes:
     
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    天空空无一物，只能（看见/看到）一片（苍色/苍茫）。
     
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    Thank you :blobsmilehappyeyes: I knew that one sounded weird somewhere.
     
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    Sharudeis Semi-narcoleptic

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    Just trying out :blobpeek:
    一寸光阴一寸金，寸金难买寸光阴。时间就如水一样的流着，所以我们应该珍惜它，抱窝好机会。
    Not sure if 抱窝 is correct.
     
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    把握 bǎ wò
     
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    Sharudeis Semi-narcoleptic

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    Thanks for the correction.
     
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    yuzuki [sweet night] [plum blossoms]

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    赶时间的时候，慢的动作不一定是坏事。
    有一次在去钢琴课的路上，因为怕迟到，我急忙地踩了油门，一个失手就把车的轮胎撞破了。
    总的来说，如那个《龟兔赛跑》故事一样，“慢” 有时比 “快” 好。

    topic：
    环境
     
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    In your context, 慢的动作 doesn't fit with 不一定是坏事。instead rephrase it to 动作慢不一定是坏事。
     
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    今天我寄了封邮件 （口语）
    今天我寄出了一封邮件 or 今天我邮寄了一封邮件（Past tense）
    今天我将会寄出一封邮件（Future Tense）

    Using 将 to emphasize future tense is workable and mostly preferable.
     
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    yuzuki [sweet night] [plum blossoms]

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    Thank you!!
     
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    中国现在的环境太差了，连旅游中心所陈赞的蒙古草原都开始沙漠化了。

    主题： 保险
     
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    今年我爸爸要去医院看医生，因为他的心有问题.所以我希望你的家人没有问题。

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    茶[/QUOTE]
    When refer someone have heart diseases ,we usually use the word 心脏 instead of 心。
     
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    ongoingwhy Meat Pie Lover

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    You might get beaten up if you said that in Mongolia... I don't think the Mongolians think of their country as part of China. :hmm:

    政府应该教导青年如何使用保险套，以避免保险套在性爱时破裂。:blobpeek:
     
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    Where's the next topic? And I as talking about inner Mongolia, where there's a region named "Mongolian Plains" so...
     
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    Ah, right. :whistle:

    Topic: 美食
     
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