Adventures of Main Characters

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  1. Azusky

    Azusky Gazing At Moonlight | 50 Shades of Blue

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    Meng Hao, Yun Che & Nie Li meet in the bar~

    Meng Hao, seeing the chance to rob a pair of young men in the bar
    , starts his walk to their table..
    "Hello Young Cultivators, my name..., people call me Meng Hao. You may know me as Patriach Golden Light,
    Grandmaster Pill Cauldron, The Master Robber, oh, wait, damn..

    Meng Hao coughs, slight pause
    "Anyway, are you interested in a game?"

    Yun Che, having heard rumors of the infamous "Master Robber Meng Hao", decides to carefully analyze the situation first..
    "I am Yun Che. Nie Li, what do you think of this?"
    Not awaiting the answer, Yun Che turns around to Meng Hao -" Yep, we will play. What are the rules?"

    Meng Hao, coughing the second time this evening, starts to explain..
    "The rules are simple, since it's a drinking game. We all will drink this high quality alcohol"
    Waving his hand, 3 bottles filled with alcohol appear. The smell alone indicates, this was pure alcohol!

    Yun Che, laughing inwardly, quickly agrees, again ignoring Nie Li's opinion..
    You think some puny alcohol can affect me, Yun Che?! No poison works on me, bring it on!

    Meng Hao, being delighted but not showing it on his face, starts to pour the alcohol into 3 bottles..

    4 Hours later..
    Yun Che- "Hahahaha, Meng Hao, from now on you are my drinking partner! I'm amazed, 24 bottles of pure alcohol,
    but you are sitting here, as calm as ever"
    Meng Hao- "You drank more than me! Who would've known there was an alcoholic like you on this plane!"
    Yun Che- "Hohohohooo, me an alcoholic? You drink alcohol like juice! Wait a minute..., where is Nie Li?!
    Meng Hao- "Nie Li? Now that you mention it, there was someone else with you..."

    10 minutes later, Meng Hao and Yun Che find Nie Li, naked in an alley, his clothes and belongings piled up next to him.
    Meng Hao- "It's him, but why is he naked?"

    Yun Che, remembering that Nie Li had no anti-poison mechanism like him and Meng Hao, suddenly starts to feel a headache..
    Damn, i promised this old man to bring him back safely..
    if he hears that this happened because of me...

    Meng Hao, coughing the 3rd time this evening.. "Why dont we rob him and run?"

    In the following morning..
    "uuugh". Slowly opening his eyes, Nie Li feels the after effects of the alcohol..
    "Where am i? Who am i? Am i naked? Whats so hard? Where are all my things?!"
    Before he can search for answers, he hears the sound of a coin landing near his head.

    "Here, some money dear, so that you can buy yourself some clothes!"
    Looking up to the feminine voice, Nie Li sees a middle aged woman, currently looking down with pity in her eyes.
    "Miss, you misunderstand, i'm not a beggar, i have wife and home i dont need this money.."

    The pity in the eyes of the woman however only grew...
    This poor, poor man, not even able to accept his own fate.. He doesn't even own a single piece of clothes..
    the world is hard, the world surely, is hard...



    Part 2 here
    Part 3 here
     
    Last edited: Mar 25, 2016
  2. nazmulm

    nazmulm The Lord of Sloth

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    I just died reading that XD
     
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  3. uselessno4

    uselessno4 Not so useless human

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    What is this
    Lol
     
  4. ArgosYesu

    ArgosYesu Lord of Some Lands, Editor of Others

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    Well... that made no sense...

    First thing, who is "Nie Lie"? Based on the name and personality, this seems like a randomly created character.

    Also, Meng Hao seems a bit of a thieving dunce. Like he's never left the house and has only played DnD as a rogue and wanted to try scamming for the first time.

    Yun Che was basically random too. No females for him to act the way he is.
     
  5. Greedyspree

    Greedyspree 『Exile within the back room』

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    Nie Lie is the mc of tales of demons and gods.
     
  6. ArgosYesu

    ArgosYesu Lord of Some Lands, Editor of Others

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    Nope, he isn't. Wrong person. Like how Brendan isn't the same person as Brendon.
     
  7. Aszai

    Aszai Well-Known Member

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    Damn, noone cares about Nie Lie..
    Neither OP nor you :/
     
  8. LaDyViL

    LaDyViL New Member Staff Member

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    A..........crossover fanfiction?
     
  9. coveted

    coveted Sexiest Banana Alive

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    Agree... Wrong spelling is wrong. Also this guy is no Meng Hao. We have to wait for the approval from the official Meng Hao fans club and his wife @FlowingSong .
     
  10. Greedyspree

    Greedyspree 『Exile within the back room』

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    If you couldnt grasp what he meant because of a single vowel, then you shouldnt be reading translations. But sure be a smartass for no reason, if thats what makes you feel like you have value in life go for it.
     
  11. ArgosYesu

    ArgosYesu Lord of Some Lands, Editor of Others

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    None of these characters seem to represent anything. This should be moved to Original Compositions. Obviously it's an original story he's uploading. New characters, a drinking game as the start of some mystery plot. Obviously this random Nie Lie is someone who will strive to solve the mystery of his current circumstances.
     
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  12. ArgosYesu

    ArgosYesu Lord of Some Lands, Editor of Others

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    Got it mister GreedyPee.
     
  13. ArgosYesu

    ArgosYesu Lord of Some Lands, Editor of Others

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    Nah, deleted my last post. Too tired and it made no sense. *dashes off*
     
  14. Azusky

    Azusky Gazing At Moonlight | 50 Shades of Blue

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    @ArgosYesu ye sorry, i actually believed he was called this way.. ^^
    And this was just a random idea i had some hours ago, thought i could write it down xD
     
  15. coveted

    coveted Sexiest Banana Alive

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    Ahh in other words, he is making an original composition using the names of our famous MCs. There. That cleared things up.
     
  16. ArgosYesu

    ArgosYesu Lord of Some Lands, Editor of Others

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    I can't read Nie Lie or Nie Li without saying his name as [N-aye L-aye] now. Basically, the two words now rhyme... Lie from Liar btw.
     
  17. coveted

    coveted Sexiest Banana Alive

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    Yo @Azusky you really gave me a good idea that we could suggest to moderators.
    How about NUF stars a writing contest and contestants would write a story containing the characters of our beloved novels. What do you think mods? This might be a good idea.
     
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    LaDyViL New Member Staff Member

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    Shouldn't this be under Original Composition/Creations? And besides....you'd best expect this kind of replies when you use the name of Meng Hao xP
     
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  19. ArgosYesu

    ArgosYesu Lord of Some Lands, Editor of Others

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    If you are wondering, then yes. I'm being quite trollish. Even as a random crossover, I would have liked some semblance of the three characters to appear. Like Nie Li and Meng Hao outconning each other. And then Yun Che trying to woo a passing lady, then maybe NTRing one of the other two character's girls. Whether he fails or not would have been left to the imagination.

    The power of THREE incredibly plot protected MCs...

    @Azusky @coveted @GreedyPee
     
  20. Azusky

    Azusky Gazing At Moonlight | 50 Shades of Blue

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    Nah i don't want to continue this or something, just thought maybe someone would laugh like i did
    while writing this story ^^