Spoiler [BL] Straight Guy's Goddess System

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  1. Kailyria20

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    SDY arrived to see the evil shadow orchid blooming and attempt to wake up MC from his meditation while trying to keep up the pure heart mantra but unfortunately failed as he got to MC's body and held him close and kissed him. MC was caught up in the image of the shadow orchid as the flower's image became clearer and more defined when he noticed that he was held his master's arms and being the target of a heated gaze. MC felt uneasy as his master doesn't seem right atm, SDY heard MC call out to him and his eyes cleared for a moment but when MC struggled to get out of his arms the flower strengthen its fragrance and SDY eyes became heated again, he started to kiss MC and pushed MC to the ground with his hand holding MC's hands above his head. [:X3:] MC was bewildered then started to panic as SDY started to pull off MC's clothes.

    SDY's eyes darkened as he looked down on MC's body, SDY kissed the flower on MC's chest and his other hand got MC off, MC was panicking but couldn't help but go along with the pleasure...he felt compelled to succumb to it, SDY told him to not move as he will make MC feel even better... MC felt like he was being lured by a voice inside as he started to succumb...

    Who are you? Where is this?
    Why resist?
    Just enjoy it.
    Yes...follow your heart and enjoy yourself.

    but just a moment later MC felt cold water spirit from his heart and he regain clarity and used water spirit energy to cool everything and SDY finally woke up. SDY eyes cleared and told MC to tidy up and that he'll be back in a moment and quickly left, MC put on his clothes quickly and realized the pink shadow orchid was the culprit for all this.

    SDY went to the ice spring and went in to cool off and thought about why the evil flower suddenly bloomed, MC never left so how did it gain the wood spirit to grow....this is not merely a bud but a blooming flower. As SDY thought of the flower, suddenly MC's figure came to mind...SDY looked down and thought that if he wasn't awakened in time... he would have completely possessed him and those beautiful eyes would've been more tainted. SDY quickly started the pure heart mantra to calm down.

    Sorry this one is so short but all 3 kids decided to be super brats and took me a while to handle and now its very late so ..tomorrow.~ :whistle:
     
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    Shizuka Mikki Well-Known Member

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    Thanks @Kailyria20~ :blobmelt: Even if it's shorter than usual, it's still wonderful as usual~♡
     
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    This is such an interesting story! Thanks for taking the time to spoil even though life is so busy!
     
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    Thanks!! I love your spoilers!! They’re detailed and satisfying and the story is so goooood :love:
     
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    SDY returned intending to take MC down from the peak but MC dodge when he saw SDY reach out for him, due to the memories of what happened earlier, SDY paused and asked if MC was upset, then told MC he will explain. MC remembered that SDY was out of it due to the flower so he relaxed and allowed SDY to hold him, while SDY can't help but remember that the body he was holding was bare earlier and frowned...he quickly started the pure heart mantra again.

    SDY brew some nourishing tea[?] for MC and MC commented that it felt really good, while SDY was distracted by MC's dewy lips and absently said he will make sure MC gets it everyday. SDY finally looked away and asked MC about his cultivation progress, MC talked about how his robe spirit was able to convert elemental spirits and SDY was surprised and quickly checked it over and came to the conclusion that MC had a great spirit because this means that MC is not restricted by his environment like other cultivators since he can freely convert the elemental spirit as well as benefit others. This answers SDY's thoughts about how the flower was suddenly blooming...MC doesn't need to leave in order to get wood spirits at all....

    The tea thingie, thanks @Fuyuneko
    SDY explained to MC that he had to be cautions because of the wood clan's evil shadow orchid's ability which causes confusion, sexual arousal, and enhances pleasure[?]. MC was shocked that there was such a thing in his body, SDY explained that the outbreak is not controlled until MC gets the flower to fully mature...MC said he didn't want to raise it but SDY points out that it will cause him pain if he doesn't. MC came to the conclusion that ZY must've been the one that planted the wood spirit flower [pft]...it seems the fragrance seems to affect males to attract them to MC which made him panic a bit.

    There's another way to mask the scent of the flower so it doesn't spread and so while he absorbs wood spirits he will need to be intimate with someone, SDY whispered to MC while looking at him with clear eyes.. SDY then asks if MC already has someone he likes, MC said no and SDY's eyes flashed a moment before he made a worried frown . MC after thinking a while ask SDY if he can find a female cultivator to pair with him and said he didn't have much to demand of her just that he will swear to be loyal to her alone and SDY immediately said no. SDY seems a bit angry, MC was a bit confused why his master would be upset but then SDY said that if he just got together with a random person for this reason it may harm that person instead [:rolleyes:]

    SDY offers to help seal the shadow orchid temporarily as long as MC doesn't absorb any wood spirits the flower can be sealed to sleep for a while...but in order to seal it he needs to touch MC so he asks if MC will trust him plus the flower might resist and spread its fragrance again. MC recalls the scene in twin city where everyone came after them then realize it was because of the flower so he grit his teeth and agreed to trust SDY. MC said that he's only alive today due to SDY so he has absolute trust in SDY, if SDY can help him through this then he will repay him with his all might[?].

    thankyou :D @Fuyuneko

    SDY lead MC back to his courtyard and said he will build a room for MC here so he can benefit from the aura, MC protested but SDY didnt say anything and lead him into the ice spring. SDY started and had MC lure the flower out with some wood spirit and the flower started to bloom and SDY struggled to keep himself under control while MC didn't realize he fell under the desire the flower woke in him, he felt like pouncing SDY and end up kissing SDY on the neck. SDY saw MC with dazed moist eyes, flushed cheeks and dewy mouth kissing his neck and almost lost control but SDY held MC still and thought back to what MC told him and decided he wanted to suppress the flower because he wants MC to trust him and accept him completely of his own accord and SDY wants MC to stay with him, love him, even as a relationship of master and disciple and with time he will break this shackle as well so he will take his time and coax him...he wants MC to crave him and willing give himself to him. Under this obsession SDY finally regain control of his desire and sealed the flower.

    MC woke from the desire very embarrass as he remembered what he did and he looked up to SDY intending to apologize but SDY bent down to give him a quick kiss on his lips then turned it into a deep kiss. Finally the kiss stopped and SDY whispered that the flower is sealed but he coughed up a bit of blood, MC was worried but SDY said he just needed some time to recuperate and told MC to go cultivate the water spirit for now and then once he makes it to the transformation stage he will take him to another place to cultivate.

    MC left and kept thinking about what SDY did for him just now and can't help but think he wasn't as bad as the novel made him out to be... then he heard a system prompt:

    The goddess' body has been recovered, continue the main quest?
     
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    Pachia Go At My Own Pace~

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    I wonder if by this time LYY has become more darken and possessive?
     
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    Song Duan Yi called for servants. After tea and pastries were served, he slightly raised his hand to indicate for them to leave. After the other people left, Song Duan Yi personally grasped the teapot and filled a cup for He Wei, "Qing Shan Yun (celebratory mountain cloud) tea will have the effect of nourishing water spirits, try it."

    He Wei (MC) looked at Song Duan Yi and solemnly said, "Shizun (teacher), disciple believes you! Without you, I wouldn't have past my adulthood ritual. To be alive today, it's entirely because of Shizun's care. What reason do I have to not believe you? If I can pass this disaster, disciple will be sure to pay back your kindness a million times."

    @Kailyria20 Now that I'm looking at the raw text, i really appreciate your spoilers. You manage to include everything that's interesting and important without the unnecessary parts. I like reading your spoiler more than the actual story.
     
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    MC thought that since the main story wants to continue then that means LYY definitely survived....then he should probably get some supplies ready but then he accidentally confirmed and got pulled into the black hole into the female-ish body near LYY. MC looked down at his chest and thought to himself, hello rabbits can't we just say goodbye, the rabbits just stayed there perkily seemingly proud and totally ignored him, MC ....
    [:ROFLMAO: convo with your breasts really? rofl]]

    MC looked around and saw LYY floating in the air wrapped in streams of fire spirits and still in a coma healing. MC couldn't help but look at LYY's lips, for some reason they seem very attractive...suddenly sobered up and scolded himself, what's wrong with these thoughts why is he thinking of him like that...it must be because of that damn flower making him perverted. MC backed up a bit and decided to cultivate a bit while waiting on LYY to wake up, its too bad he can't find a way back, his master is probably in closed cultivation to recover but then he remembered that he heard a sound of his task completed...

    Black task II and III was completed increased total points by 60 +50% increase bonus, reward 10 gold.

    Black target? He opened it up and saw his master's name, the heck why is the affection points already 75%, why did it increase so much, thinking to his inwardly black hearted master he felt himself shiver. Is SDY truly fond of him or was the system deceived? Thinking of SDY's favorite hobby, he's really afraid that he's going to get dropped into a pit. MC can't figure out why SDY would feel differently to him but maybe its because he's SDY's personal disciple, he even went as far as sacrificing quite a bit of his power to help seal the flower. So why is SDY so kind to him, what did he do to deserve it? After thinking a while MC came to the conclusion that his master was influenced by the shadow orchid and so...is SDY actually a trembling M? [:LOL:] The beautiful image of that beauty[SDY] kneeling before him waiting to be pushed down...ahh i can't think further.

    MC checked the store and was stunned at what he saw....there were 2 human shaped dolls, one labeled LYY erotic doll and SDY erotic doll described as having various models, realistic, guaranteed enjoyment and experience. [pfft ;)] MC felt like murdering the system, WTH are you selling!!! Despite saying that the MC looked at the details of the LYY doll anyway... it seems very accurate indeed..wait what would he do with the doll, he's not a woman...if he was then he wouldn't mind at all...MC didn't' have the courage to look at the SDY doll as he's afraid to see him naked...so he look at the other 4 slots instead.

    There was teleport charms, a pill that increases speed of spirit energy absorption by 2x, combine this with the gold pill then his cultivation would go pretty fast and its affordable. After he bought all the items he wanted he glanced at the dolls and wondered why it appeared this time then admit that maybe he had little bit of desire towards SDY and LYY before he opened the store. MC thought about going back and using the speed pill on his body but then thought that LYY must need it more since his cultivation was scrapped by ZY and even though he is recovering due to the Kirin dan, so MC feed both the speed pill and gold pill to LYY...he washed his hands and decided to check and see if the pills melted and was swallowed so he stuck a finger in and suddenly remembered the kisses they had and back off quickly while scolding himself for molesting LYY while he was in a coma.

    After roughly 15 days, MC had gone back and forth to check on LYY while MC had finally got to awakening rank 9, he had some problems of materializing his robe spirit, every time he tried the ice flower would bloom and the robe would get interrupted and fade again. It seems like every time he tries, the ice flower would interrupt and seem like it wants to separate from the robe and while doing this MC didnt realize he cause a surge of frost energy and just about froze the mountain this time.

    [Why do i feel like the system is shamelessly tempting the MC with the dolls, pfft, even if MC was a bit tempted by SDY and LYY did it really have to be erotic dolls of them lol?]

    Edit: be back soon, food is calling my name~


    Edit: 7.10 pm 1/23/2018

    SDY received the report and went to go check on MC and found everything frozen, he used the pure heart mantra to suppress the throbbing in his chest and went to see MC and help him suppress the holy ice flower and assist MC to break through to transformation stage. Finally the robe was able to materialize [i think] and SDY and MC saw a beautiful robe..MC thought it was pretty from a woman's POV but he's a man what would he do with a pretty robe. MC gently touched it and suddenly it flowed over to him and superimposed over his body and white mist surrounded his body before MC's figure slowly appeared.

    SDY's eyes darken as he saw MC totally naked... MC looked down and was stunned why did he become naked and quickly took off [?] the robe and now he has on clothes again...he was bewildered as to why he was naked... The robe became beautiful and also its name changed to Binding Spirit Immortal Robes, at the time he thought maybe he would have the ability like sun wukong and have 72 transformations, but who would have thought that it would make him naked instead.

    SDY finally sobered and asked him what was the name of the technique just now. MC said it was Fantasy Form Technique [幻形術 - i think fantasy materialization technique works too] SDY commented that the technique was an part of law of illusion and then MC asked why he was naked and SDY explained that his technique is low level atm, so it can be influenced by others.. so it should be something someone else wants to see the most. MC then thought out loud who would want to see him naked...then realized there's only his master and himself here so... does that mean his master was the one that wanted to see him naked?!

    SDY looked at MC admit softly that he did want to see MC naked, MC thought about running but SDY grabbed his hand and MC instantly pulled it out. SDY was surprised but then his eyes seems a be lonesome, SDY sighed and explained that he developed a heart demon because of what happened a few days ago when he helped MC seal the evil shadow orchid..so he always seems to think about MC in that direction despite his efforts to restrain himself..if it wasn't because of the technique MC used today he wouldn't have realized that the heart demon wasn't expelled....he said that if MC still think he's strange [怪] then he was willing to sever their master disciple blood bond[?] so MC won't be linked to him anymore.

    MC heard this and thought about all the help SDY gave him so far and SDY didn't pounce on him outside of the flower's influence, and plus the backlash that SDY would suffer for severing the blood bond would be heavy...SDY already have a lot of self control and did nothing to him...MC believes that in the future SDY will be able to get rid of the heart demon, SDY is still a human being, just because he does alot of terrible things according to the novel but that doesn't mean he would be invulnerable... so after thinking it all over, MC decided to keep their relationship.

    SDY after he heard MC's reply seems happier and MC is still troubled over the fact that his new technique would be under the influences of other people..wouldn't that make it totally useless. SDY told MC how to fix it tho he seems a bit hesitant, he said that MC just needs to practice it often until it levels up... MC thought about practicing on multiple people ofc SDY immediately shuts him down and said that MC only needs to practice with him. [:LOL:] MC wondered why but SDY said that since MC's technique reveals someone's deepest desire it means that he maybe in danger since others might kill him to conceal it and also SDY claims that with this method maybe MC can help him get rid of the heart demon so MC bought this excuse and started practicing with SDY as his target.

    Although MC was embarrassed thought he always kept his hands over his lil bro and didn't' realize SDY's attention was attracted there as a result, SDY was very tempted but maintained a calm attitude so SDY kept up the appearance of a master and asked him questions pertaining to the amount of spiritual energy used, duration, feeling MC has when casting, does it tire MC out, and eventually MC ran out of spiritual energy but SDY gave him some and told him to continue...SDY claims that its so MC can quickly level up his skill. MC was touched so he focused on his skill, meanwhile SDY kept roving his eyes over MC from top to bottom quietly and thought to himself that he likes what he see and started to imagine what it would be like to touch him, and cause his eyes to go misty and dazed.....begging for him to take him, then hold him down and move.... soon SDY fantasy was interrupted as the technique ended and MC said that he seems to have a bit of control of the technique now.

    SDY was still a bit caught up and walked up to MC and held him close and kissed him, the moment MC struggled, SDY stopped and gave him more spiritual energy and whispered for him to continue in order to improve... MC said he might want to wait a few more days [because of the spirit energy or maybe SDY barely able to control himself] but SDY said to not worry about him...after MC manages to control the technique more SDY said he close up and recover and MC has to focus on his cultivation. MC bought this excuse again and so he continued and the technique's duration started to last longer, soon MC was able to control the illusion and i think he imaged a chair and end up showing that [?] and so he was excited and wanted to try again but he's out of energy and SDY warned him not to use this technique in front of people stronger than him because their cultivation being higher than MC can still influence his technique...the reason why MC was able to to change into a chair just now was because SDY's energy was weak atm due to constantly feeding it to MC. So MC nodded and SDY got up...MC just realized everywhere was frozen but then he saw SDY wave his sleeve and everything returned back to normal...SDY looked back at MC for a moment his gaze on MC's lips then turned around and left.

    SDY immediately went to the ice spring in his courtyard to calm down..his mind kept replaying that beautiful image over and over....SDY's eyes full of desire imagined the appearance of that body with misty eyes with dewy rosy lips moving his hips and his voice leaking out calling him master...he told himself to wait...only with patience can he pick the sweetest fruit....and by then he will certain get it back several fold. [:p]
    oh btw while i was doing this part, this song came up and when MC was practicing his technique and i just about died laughing because this is so appropriate from SDY's point of view yea? ;)


    The original MV its a bit suggestive..ok maybe alot

    Maybe this other song is more appropriate i think it was called bewitching or something like that
     
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    Meanwhile MC cultivated for a while then realized he didn't' check on LYY in a while and decided to go and when opened his eyes and saw LYY just woke up and LY instantly held him close and in a hoarse voice,

    You're still here.

    MC hearing those words made MC feel a bit touched so he didn't struggled and let LYY hold him...after a while MC called LYY's name and then LYY bent down and started to kiss him and eventually deepened the kiss, MC knows that its wrong and he should refuse but eventually got swept away by it..MC unconsciously responded which made LYY react more enthusiastically..after a while LYY let him go.

    MC thought that LYY is only attracted to him due to his mistaking MC for a woman...or part woman at least...the problem is MC is purely a man and this isn't even his real body...if LYY found out can they still be friends... MC wanted to talk to LYY about it but LYY end up asking him how long he was in a coma for and where they are now and how MC was coping. MC explained almost everything to LYY, and said that he fled with LYY into the hidden room in the dragon statue but suddenly got teleport away to where they are now...he totally omitted what happened with LY and ZY. MC admit he doesn't know where they are atm, but no one has found them yet...MC said roughly 20 days passed while LYY was in a coma and LYY leaned down to kiss him on the neck and said its been rough on MC.

    MC was reminded again about the awkward situation between what LYY thinks and what the actual situation about his gender so he brought it up again and emphasized on the fact that he really is a man. LYY said that his answer is still the same, that is MC is MC and LYY doesn't care about his gender. Once again MC stripped a bit to prove it and was again stripped completely by LYY this time. MC was nervous and LYY told him that he was beautiful regardless of how he looked and MC's heart felt a bit of heat, LYY kissed MC and and said that he wanted MC....MC's heart tightened and for a moment he forgot to breathe.

    LYY tried to make love to MC but MC kept tryin to stop him because he was scared, while LYY eventually stopped and his eyes dulled...he said that MC didn't want to be with him....even tho LYY wants MC to be with him forever but MC doesn't want to be by his side...MC wants to leave him. MC stared at LYY and thinks that there's something wrong...he realize if he doesn't do something about it then LYY will definitely fall beyond redemption so he held onto LYY's hands and willed himself to not be scared. MC told LYY that he will stay by LYY and will not leave..he will not let him down or betray him ..and he said that just a moment ago, he was afraid so he wanted some time to adapt to it.

    LYY didn't move although he seems less gloomy now and he just stared at MC. MC willed himself to kiss LYY and suddenly LYY moved and deepen the kiss while nipping MC a bit as if he wanted to keep MC inside of himself. LYY eventually stopped and told MC he believed him

    MC felt a bit chaotic atm because he just said something on the spot...and even took the initiative to kiss LYY, really is there no limit to his morals...really wanna suicide right now..but what choice did he have...if he didn't how would LYY turn out....MC thought to himself that he will just have to take it slowly. So for the next few days they cultivated together until LYY fully digested the kirin dan [i think]

    LYY wanted MC to stick by his side regardless of MC's protesting so they now realized they are beneath LY's palace in central city. MC was a bit panicked, but when LYY asked if he was here before, MC denied it...the fact that he was married to LY here 40 days ago was omitted. MC tried to think of a plan and suddenly came up with the idea of using his illusion to pretend to be a servant to get a hold of servant's clothes for LYY to sneak out. MC didn't notice the look in LYY's eyes when he told him he didn't know anything about this palace. LYY didn't want MC to take the risk and so MC decides to demonstrate his technique according LYY's request in order to reassure LYY, but he was a bit nervous of LYY's heart's desire..hopefully it won't be like SDY's...so what showed up was the image of MC's fully clothe true male body...MC was surprised and felt like his heart was hot but also a bit pained...all LYY wanted was the real him but MC was hiding so many secrets.

    LYY said he likes MC regardless and kissed him, MC wanted to stop him but the kiss was very gentle as if treasuring him and he like was drunk on it and eventually he ran out of energy and so his body reverted back. LYY still kissed him gently and then he whispered to MC to be silent because there's someone walking by.

    The servants talked about the appearance of ZY and the fact that LY fought with him but in the process LY's wife was killed by ZY while protecting LY and so the wedding end up ruined. Then they mentioned that since LY's wife was part of the ice clan then there's a possibility she might have resurrected so LY left to search for her. LYY stiffened when he heard all this, while MC was happy because LY wasn't here to impede them.

    LYY suddenly mentioned the teleport array that MC mentioned to him and thought perhaps there was another one somewhere in this palace and they searched around and finally found it...LYY tried to activate it but it didn't activate. MC thought maybe it needed LY's blood but then remembered something, so he decided try his own blood [because LY gave him his blood on the wedding night] and asked LYY for spiritual energy in order to help him activate it. The array activated to MC's surprise, suddenly they were attacked, MC quickly tried to defend himself but his power was too weak but LYY attacked and killed it but was possessed by it. MC remembered that LYY cannot kill them because it will cause LYY to die. MC shocked by all this and driven by his fear cause a cold aura to gush out of his body and spread all around himself and everything froze.

    OK, last post for today, I don't feel like editing the above post :p
     
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    ZY was not too far away and felt the disturbance and arrived to see MC surrounded by ice...MC got a prompt about him successfully escaping with LYY from the land of trials but he was preoccupied with the fact they were in a gray zone which was filled with demons. Demons if killed can possess one's body and devour the soul and become a new demon. The only weakness they have is that they cannot leave this gray zone...but as long as they are in this zone they are considered kings here. Because MC was panicking he accidentally triggered the Ice flower's transformation rank unique technique, frozen earth. But it seems to have overdrawn on MC and so he's kneeling on the ground near LYY when ZY arrived.

    ZY said that his summoner was alive after all and so he intend to take him, but MC stopped him and begged ZY to take LYY away too, ZY said that LYY will likely die but MC said that even if LYY dies he will not allow him to die here. MC knew that LYY will survive as long as he's taken away from this place since he's the protagonist. ZY looked at MC and commented that MC's love for LYY is very deep. ZY agreed to take him away, but then whispered in MC's ear and asked MC how will he repay ZY, MC said that at this moment he's not able to do anything but he will promise ZY any request , no matter what, when or how it is done as long as ZY request it he will do what ZY wants.

    ZY was touched by MC's promise so he smiled and said he will remember his words, then MC fainted. ZY looked over MC and noticed that MC has additional rabbits on his chest and smirked, thinking to himself that his summoner has quite a few secrets. MC woke up and remembered that LYY was still in danger, ZY said that they are now in the nether realm and told him that LYY is still alive but his soul seems damaged so LYY is stuck in a coma again.

    MC thought of wanting things to help LYY recover and then quickly look through the store to buy something in order to help LYY, there seems to be pills that helps with repairing the soul and physical damage. MC bought what he can afford and spent 4k gold and fed all of them to LYY right away, while ZY looked on with interest.

    ZY asked MC what happened to his body, MC was afraid ZY wouldn't believe him if he mentions the system giving him this body so he said it was due to his robe spirit....ZY then called out his robe spirit along with the ice flower. MC was confused because he couldn't stop ZY from calling out his fighting spirit, ZY ignored the ice flower and looked at the robe, it seems to be shivering in fear of ZY, ZY actually can touch it and while he did so MC was a bit stunned because he felt like ZY was actually touching his own body. ZY whispered that MC's robe spirit was actually the Binding spirit immortal robe, and it was beautiful. ZY kissed it and the spirit trembled while MC actually felt that kiss on his forehead and was shocked....ZY finally put the robe in MC's arms and let go and said that the fight spirit and MC is like one entity thus its normal for MC to feel what ZY does to it.

    The robe returned inside MC's body and MC could feel that it was afraid of ZY but at the same time longs for him...MC flushed as he angrily thought that he wanted to toss his fighting spirit and it seems the robe is longing for death.

    ZY told MC to use the his fighting spirit's 3rd ability on him as his request but MC was clueless as to what that ability could be. MC thought that ZY was a shaking M? to request for MC to use his spirit techniques on him....he told ZY that he doesn't have it yet, because he's still in the transformation stage, and needs to be at the integration stage in order to fulfill his request. ZY said he can wait so it's not a problem...MC remembered the effects of the technique he already has then wonders about the effects of the technique ZY requested and wonders if its a trap for him once again but before he can think further, ZY tossed him into some water and stated that MC was too weak.

    Zy started to strip him and MC was protesting, ZY asked if MC intends to bath with his clothes on while MC asked why ZY threw him into the water anyway, ZY said that he needs to cultivate right now since he needs to cultivate water spirits. ZY successfully strips him then notices the rabbits and then commented that MC seems to have a special hobby...MC felt his heart die a bit. [:blobrofl:] MC started to hyperventilate in rage while ZY looked at his jumping rabbits and said that he doesn't MC's hobby at all, since MC actually wants to be a woman then everyone obviously has their own preferences, as long as MC keeps his word and works on his cultivation, then anything else doesn't matter.

    MC: ...

    ZY goes on and says that since MC wants to be a woman all he has to do is just think of himself as one, he doesn't need to go as far as using his fighting spirit to transform his body too...[:blobsweat:] MC was so mad he felt stomach pains and got dizzy then faint into the water. ZY caught him and thought that MC was a bit too squeamish, why bother turning into a woman if MC was going to get weak like this.

    ZY looked MC over and thought he was too fragile and then thought of MC's rare fighting spirit and held himself back from tossing MC back into the water and so he carried him out and end up with a view of MC's entire physique through the wet clothes and thought for a moment then peeked down there and saw MC's intact lil bro and laughed. His summoner is full of surprises...a month ago he was summoned by him to fight with LY but almost killed MC in the process, so in order to find out if MC survived he traveled around looking for him before he felt his presence in the gray zone...just a lil over a month and his summoner already reached transformation stage, this talent is excellent. ZY then sighed his summoner is too fragile and then he also wants to be a woman, and then it seems he's not even sure if he wants to be a pure woman or not since his lil bro is still there. [pfft :blobxd::blobsweat::blobsweat_2::blobrofl:]

    ZY thought that MC's hobby didn't matter so long as he got stronger...

    [ok not only is ZY is considered the strongest or at least he considers himself that, but his words are killer too, he made MC faint due to anger lmfao]

    MC woke but immediately looked at the system panel and started cursing, since the main quest was done why wasn't he sent back to his main body...although he's worried about LYY he doesn't want to stay with this pervert ZY and die. Sooner than later he'll end up dying of heart disease[? i guess getting over stimulated that is getting pissed off too often] MC saw a new task:

    Main Quest II: Escape from the Nether Field, Reward: 6000 gold.

    MC was upset at the system, can the system at least ask if he wants it or not! All of a sudden the description changed.

    Main Quest II: Escape from the Nether Field, Reward: 6000 gold, accept it?

    MC felt only slightly better since, regardless he will have to accept this quest since there's only confirmation no other options to choose. With this he can understood why he wasn't returned to his main body...but he really doesn't want to hang with ZY...fortunately LYY is ok now with the pills assisting him with recovery, it's only a matter of time. His thoughts were interrupted as ZY asked him if he wanted assistance with getting dressed.

    MC realized he body wasn't fully covered, his chest and his thighs were exposed and MC in a panic, tried to fix his clothes, but ends up making them even worse, thus ZY asked if MC was trying to tempt him, although ZY doesn't normally care but he is a man. MC quickly asked ZY to give him something to cover up and ZY gave him his outer robe while thinking it's a pity he's covered up now....well he wants MC to focus on cultivation anyway.

    ZY decides to take MC away to cultivate and asked if MC can fly, since MC can't, he decided to carry him and said that MC's too weak. MC was momentarily entranced by ZY's beautiful wings but then realized they traveled pretty far already and then got thrown into water again. ZY said he'll teach MC how to cultivate properly since it seems like he doesn't know anything, MC was cursing ZY inwardly and thought that even though his master [SDY] is a black hearted gentleman but at least treats MC gently and plus he's more powerful than ZY anyway.

    ZY then helps MC stabilize his fighting spirit, that is both the holy ice spirit flower and the binding spirit immortal robe popped out. It seems that the holy ice flower was causing instability between MC's fighting spirit and MC himself even though it increase MC's affinity for water and also made SDY accept him as a disciple in order to use him against ZY...SDY figured that since MC would stay near him most of the time, with him keeping an eye on MC's status, he would be able to help with the instability, but ofc he doesn't know that MC keeps leaving with his soul.

    ZY was trying to stabilize the robe spirit while also reigning in the holy ice spirit from overwhelming the robe spirit..having 2 fighting spirits is quite dangerous, ZY has an advantage in doing this because he has a natural ability to suppress all spiritual beings so the holy ice flower can only obey ZY, MC meanwhile was having his spiritual energy purified and thus cultivation continue to rise because MC's nature is gentle and tolerable so he didn't resist ZY's spiritual power at all.

    ZY decided to mentor MC since he seems to be very interested and doesn't seem to be much of a pain atm..normally ZY hates doing unnecessary troublesome things, but in the case of MC, he doesn't mind too much. After roughly 3 days MC went from transformation rank 1 to transformation rank 3...the robe has stabilized and MC was curious about the ice flower and how it complimented his robe spirit but then he just passed it off as something that came with the original body.

    ZY was satisfied with the 2 spirits and just as he was going to withdraw his spiritual energy, he noticed the evil flower move under the seal. The evil shadow orchid was discontent with the other 2 spirits progressing ahead of it so it struggled against the seal thus gaining ZY's attention.

    Ok I'm going to pause right here because it's almost time for my eldest to come back home, today 3yo and 8mo were fairly good, they didn't' keep me away from the PC for more than 10 mins so i got alot done on this one part. I was also slightly distracted by the other novel but heh that one was quick anyway.

    I realize i'm tryin to make this shorten but then give details on kisses, romance, and you know all those kyaa scenes and some important points but then i realize that there's many of those kisses and romance thus making this fairly long lol!
     
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  11. imsodone

    imsodone 『Creep』

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    Evil Flower be like: *sees the other two evolving*:blobsleepless: wtf.:blobangery::blobdevil: me too ah:blobtriumph::blobtriumph::blobtriumph: *sees ZY* make me strong too ah, :blobthumbsdown: now.
     
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    ayyshadow Eternal Lurker || Lover of Anything Fluffy

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    Wow you give such detailed spoilers, thank you for them!
     
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    Kailyria20 Perpetually distracted

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    LMFAO, that sounds almost exactly it lol and with the way it was trying so hard to seduce ZY, pfft.

    ZY became curious and end up loosening the seal on the evil shadow orchid and the seductive fragrance bloomed. MC realized it too late and wasn't able to stop ZY in time, ZY realized what it was the instant the fragrance spread out and tried to withdraw his spirit but the flower clung to ZY's spirit body and tried to seduce ZY ...although ZY can completely resist physical desire but his spirit body finds it difficult to resist...but ZY determines that he will not be manipulated by anyone and he put his palm on MC's chest in an effort to suppress the evil shadow orchid. Behind MC is the beautiful robe and the ice flower and now the pink flower materialized and joined them tangling with the robe. ZY narrow his eyes and reached out in order to separate the pink flower from the robe and MC backed up away trembling while blushing, telling ZY to not touch the robe, MC's body was feeling too stimulated and uncomfortable.

    ZY held MC close and told him to stay still because he's trying to seperate the robe and the pink flower...MC couldn't hear what ZY said as he was caught up in the feelings caused by the pink flower and the robe melding. ZY was affected as well, he looked at the robe with a heated gaze, it seems like their spirits were touching each other causing a lot of sensitivity. Normally the robe is a gentle and docile spirit but because it was being affected by the pink flower it became flirtatious and seductive...it tries to entangle ZY, conveying its longing to him, wanting to meld their spirits together, the spirit is doing whatever MC is doing, that is, MC wants to stop but can't seem to hold back. MC doesn't know the difference between the robe and the pink flower anymore, he only knows that touching ZY's spirit cools down this heat he's feeling and he wants to wind around him tightly.

    The pure heart mantra can calm the mind but it can't affect spirits, ZY looked at MC holding on to him and winding around him and ZY is trying to hold the robe back but then he stop restraining it and let the meld, intense pleasure struck out at them, i think ZY for a moment blanked out due to the pleasure but when he heard MC's soft voice, he woke up and stopped himself, the robe spirit its not fully mature yet and he remembered he wanted to have MC use the 3rd level technique on him so he drew back his own spirit and let go of MC and MC fell into the water.

    MC snapped back to his sense and felt so shameful he just wanted to drown himself, did it have to act so thirsty when that pink flower makes its appearance! First his master now ZY, in the case of master, he's at least gentle, but ZY ...he's lucky he didn't get killed outright just now. What's up with this damned flower..he's never seen such a naive spirit, he wants to toss it out with the system.

    [MC calls it naive because it wants to seduce ZY and MC is sure ZY will kill it and him lol]

    MC was feeling desperate because he can't control the flower and the seal is gone...although he's in the water now but he's still feeling temptation towards ZY...wants his touch, to be comforted, the robe keeps trembling and so MC's body trembles too. Reason and desire keeps clashing, MC wants to will himself to calm down but his spirit and soul is linked to his stupid robe spirit and so the more he wants to stop it the more it rises. MC finally grit his teeth and decides to sink into the water and rather drown and die with the damned flower.

    ZY pulled MC out of the water and the fragrance rushed at him and he felt his body react and ZY got hard, he didnt think he would actually be tempted after thousands of years but ZY was determined not to lose to it. The scene here is ZY flying in the air with his golden six wings holding onto MC's wrist with 1 hand and the other gathering spiritual energy with the golden aura and water aura melding together. MC wanted to pull his hand away from ZY but ZY told him to stay still and ZY was going to push down on MC's chest in order to seal it again, but he looked down at dazed MC and MC eyes were misty and it seem like he was trying to use his mouth to untie his buckle[?] with his rosy lips, flushed cheeks and the intoxicating fragrance seems like a deadly poison and attacked ZY's heart. [? uh um...i think...MC dazed again and trying to strip ZY pftt]

    ZY is normally obsessed with becoming stronger and had barely any sexual desire, but he just realized his longing...

    Want to enter him, want to satisfy him, make him mindlessly scream...

    No, he will not lose to anything..be it man or spirit...

    ZY looked at MC then guided the water spirit aura over MC, the pink flower is struggling but then gave in to ZY's pressure...bit by bit the pink flower separates from the robe and then the water aura sealed the trembling pink flower. MC finally calm down and quickly backed away from ZY and apologized for molesting him...there were hickies all over ZY clavicle where MC managed to open up the neckline of his robe. MC was afraid he's going to get killed by ZY the next moment.

    ZY then asked MC how he got the evil wood clan spirit, MC was confused a moment then said didn't ZY planted it, ZY said he only planted the ice spirit flower and so MC finally thought about all people he was involved with and arrived at his master as the culprit. MC felt he was stupid, he knew his master was a blackhearted gentleman but he didn't think he fell into a trap already. But then MC threw that out because his master also got victimized by the flower too and his cultivation was even affected which forced him into seclusion. But then MC thought again and it seems to be his master's style of doing things, but then why would his master end up getting himself hurt too....or is it just to make MC trust him more...after thinking a while he finally just gave up..he can't understand the twisted thoughts of people like that.

    ZY held MC and said he would go find another place to cultivate since the water here is all gone, but then MC mentioned that the robe is not purely water spirit anyway and ZY thought about it for a bit and realized MC has 3 spirits ....he asked if MC's robe spirit is actually all attributes, MC said he can freely convert spirit elements...ZY seems excited and asked MC to confirm again that he can freely convert and MC nodded. ZY praised that MC was really the best [極品], but for some reason MC felt like that he was being scolded instead. [極品 - means the best but also slang for outrageous]

    MC wanted to take LYY along since he's still in a coma but i think ZY put LYY in a bubble and floated him along and said that maybe LYY might live long enough to see it...MC had a bad feeling. ZY took MC to Demonic Blood Jungle [血魔叢林], MC remembered this place was filled with monsters and mortality is very high and it has a variety of elemental spirits that caused it to filled with any type of creature imaginable....a person can become affected by the variety of different elemental auras and it seems into one's body.

    MC was alarmed that ZY brought him here to cultivate, but ZY said that since MC can absorb all attributes then this place is perfect...there's enough aura here to have MC advance a stage it seems. MC was a afraid but knows this is a rare opportunity for him...so he focused on absorbing and the robe and ice flower float up behind him and starts to absorb quickly....but MC realized that he's feeling bloated due to absorbing too much too quickly but ZY just told him to keep goin and focus on breaking through the ranks...it's like when a person is leveling up in a video game going from level 1 to level 50 in a short amount of time.

    Finally MC reached transformation stage rank 9, while MC was cultivating, ZY was killing off all the monsters that continuously charged over to their location. MC finally hit the bottleneck and ZY noticed him stop cultivating and told him to use his technique continuously and keep absorbing and the 9x repetitive draining and filling of aura will attack the bottle neck and break through it. MC can only think of his one skill and so ZY offered him a technique i think and had MC do it while ZY held him...MC listened to ZY and did as ZY said then suddenly found the system automatically started E.H. and his body moved on its own and kissed ZY. ZY felt the surge of aura and narrowed his eyes as he held MC's body closer..the warning sounded and eventually ZY let go, MC felt exhausted and was still breathing roughly when,

    ZY licked his own lower lip and whispered in MC's ear that "This spirit skill[?] is rather special but it tastes delicious."

    MC felt like burying himself somewhere when he heard this but ZY happily said that there's still 8 times left and told him to continue to absorb.

    K break to go eat, be back soon~
     
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    @Kailyria20 Thank you for your spoilers!!!!!! :aww: *sits patiently waiting for more*
     
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    Kailyria20 Perpetually distracted

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    MC seems a bit numb or stunned lol..so like he's thinking to himself..that so many strange things occured that he's not even surprised anymore.

    和個男人接吻算什麼?他還跟一個男人成親了呢。

    和男人成親又算什麼?他還差點跟一個男人上了床呢!

    和一個男人差點上床又算什麼?他還差點跟四個不同的男人上了床呢!
    Thanks @Fuyuneko
    ^ -[ i forgot he got married to LY pft]
    What do you mean by kiss a man? He got intimate with a man.
    What do you mean you were intimate with a man? He almost went to bed with a man!
    What is it like to almost go to bed with a man? He almost went to bed with 4 different men!


    AH heh heh....YOUR FACE!

    What's with this situation, just who did he offend...how can a man be treated this way and continue live healthily...am i still healthy? After he died, then live again not long after he suddenly has gained a pair of rabbits but still has his lil brother below....then people would kiss and caress him heatedly, he almost went all the way with SDY and ZY, drank LY's blood and has a ambiguous relationship with LYY. [I might be a bit off here] There seems to be a serious problem here, who is this frivolous person, i don't even see bit of a resemblance with this daddy here, and more complaints i find hard to translate but basically expressing his great feelings of frustration. Such terrible things happen to him but he still seems to be the same with no signs of blackening...he finds his existence to be unscientific. He just wants to live peacefully simple and comfortable for the rest of his life ..why is it so difficult! But who can he blame?!

    All this he thought while he continues to absorb spiritual aura to break the bottleneck, MC determines that he needs to become stronger in order to take control of his own life, without that damned flower he wouldn't be so insane as to molest others, will not provoke LY, or ZY or even allow LYY to develop an obsession with him. If he didn't have to get involved with these twisted people he can live his own life the way he wants instead of having his believes breaking one by one. Well there's no point of regretting now, the flower has been planted, he already did all these stupid things....he can at least fight to get his life back...he can only attempt to get rid of that damned flower. The flower is very evil because even SDY and ZY can only seal it ..so he must work hard on his cultivation...relying on himself is better than nothing...as soon as he kills the damned flower and uninstall the system his life will become better.

    ZY asked if he finished absorbing, MC just absently answered yes and ZY just holds him and started kissing MC, MC stunned for a few seconds before he reacted and started E.H., as they go on, the kiss seems linger on longer and it gets to the point where MC ends up overdrafting his spirit power. MC keeps cheering himself....this is just a small obstacle...this is not kissing its cultivating... there's only 7x left then it's over...

    ZY was sensitive to spiritual energy and knows when MC already filled up and bent down to kiss MC right away, MC was startled..no matter how hard he tries to think otherwise, he can't adapt so suddenly, just lip to lip is ok but then the feeling after the activating E.H. with the aura surging makes it hard for him to hold back...MC is trying to keep his mind steady but his mind is starting to daze.

    By the 5th and then 6th time, ZY looked at him and asked if MC needs him to help since he seems sensitive...MC flushed as he realized what ZY said and immediately said no. ZY looked downwards, MC is glad his robe is really loose atm...ZY went back to clearing out the mobs and told MC to continue to absorb.

    By the end of the 8th time, MC had his hand on his restless heart feeling relief that its finally going to be over soon...but then ZY raise his chin and and looked at him,

    ZY: Let's do it.
    MC stunned: You ...I..no!
    ZY eyes darkened to deep blue and his low sexy voice: I can't do it to the end, but i can still satisfy you.

    MC almost gave in due to the piled up stimulation and physical frustration, he also thought that once he took this step it would be something he would be like jumping into a bottomless pit but then he saw LYY's figure still in a coma and remembered what he did when he helped LYY the first time...at the time LYY didn't know and he wasn't in control then....but in the case of ZY, ZY is fully awake right now...he can't do it. [ah..so this part...i didn't realize happened in that first time..so the wet spot on the sheets....was OH... :blobthinkingsmirk::blobsweat_2:]

    MC panic and started to say no, no no!

    ZY asked if it was because of LYY, because he saw MC's line of sight, MC just blankly looked at ZY...a trace of darkness flashed in ZY's eyes a moment then he called MC again, MC was caught in his thoughts, he didn't understand what ZY meant, MC is completely confused atm. ZY reminded him again there's still 1 more time left. MC then stopped thinking and focused on filling up on spiritual energy again ...this time MC felt the robe and ice flower become restless and some pain...he felt like he needed to release the energy...then ZY told him to release the energy and kissed him...MC instinctively started E.H...once all the energy was gone, he stopped E.H. and he tried to leave but ZY didn't let him go...ZY held him closer and just whispered to him and told him to continue to absorb spirit energy...ZY started to give him spirit energy and seems to be touching the spirit of the robe and the ice flower, MC started to panic. ZY was helping MC pacify the spirits because they didn't want to let go of the spiritual energy.

    Anyway lots of xianxia stuff going on i don't get and so eventually MC broke through from transformation stage to Spirit Boundary stage and he was very excited and happily said success! ZY looked at him and held him close then slyly pecked his lips. MC was eyes widen in shock. ZY watched his reaction and then swept into his mouth and fiercely deep kissed him....without E.H. MC can barely steady his mind, so he wanted to break free but then ZY suddenly invaded his spirit space and fully wrapped up the robe spirit. That feeling swept over MC again. MC's spirit space was just established and was still fragile, with such rough treatment, MC couldn't stand it and he felt his heart leap as felt his whole body weaken he completely lost control. After the kiss was over, MC didn't want to face him.


    ZY wanted to say something but then there was a sound from the sky and ZY saw a slowly falling white feather. ZY's eyes narrowed then darken as he reached out and grabbed the feather then the feather disappeared, ZY smiled and looked at MC and said that MC is really weak, he only touched a little... MC felt his sticky clothes and his heart felt stuffy. ZY he had to leave and took MC and LYY to leave the demonic blood jungle to a safe place then told MC to work hard on cultivating while he's away dealing with something and he said he'll wait for MC.... MC looked at ZY, he knew what ZY meant...

    I will wait for you to grow up and bring me happiness.

    Then ZY left.

    [Poor MC got overstimulated and so embarrassed.:blobsmirk:]

    I might continue later, i'm a bit distracted by this other novel ^_^
     
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    Kleep Well-Known Member

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    Man. This is such a unique story. Poor little MC just gets tossed around by the whims of fate. Aaaaand I'm going back to my dungeon to T/L.
     
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    Pachia Go At My Own Pace~

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    :blobjoy: The MC straightness is being turn bent.
     
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    @Kailyria20 -sama, Which other novel~~? :sushi_yes:
     
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    Kailyria20 Perpetually distracted

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    The one you linked last time, i didn't finish it yet because i was doing SGGS today.
     
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    No rush/pressure~ I'd be curious about any new novels you read too, since I like many of your choices! You're already juggling many summaries at once + kids, lol. :sushi_dead:
     
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