Chinese Crystal 《晶体》

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  1. xiaolong255

    xiaolong255 Well-Known Member

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    : Crystal 《晶体》
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    :My chinese name 牧场的晓龙=Pasture's Dawn Dragon
    晓龙=XiaoLong:p


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    : http://www.ebtang.com/book/864
    Directory:http://www.ebtang.com/book/864/directory

    Why It Should Get Picked Up:
    This book I used ten years to conceive, repeatedly modify every detail until it has a perfect story, the story of this book is very special, profound description of the value of life with the choice of self, the real feelings and Reflect the reality, the story of our human history of millions of years, all read, you will find how it is shocking another person, you will know what I want to say.




    Description:
    《Crystal》

    This work went through "Fragmentation", "Rebirth", and "Destruction". These three distinct time and space perspectives, from myths from ancient times to this world's future, portray life forms. This special species, in the endless river of a million year history, face destruction of celestial bodies, but never abandoning determination and hope.

    In the end, they explore the essence of all living things in the universe, tracing back to the origin of its birth.

    The main story line of Crystal is already finished. The "Life" chapter is formed up of independent small narratives.

    At the present time, there is only 3 sections and there temporarily won't be any updates.

    This story is combination of Eastern and Western cultures,Some inspiration comes from the Bible.Some inspiration comes from the Chinese mythology.Emotion comes from my heart

    This work is devoted to my life, is an international work:pLove and hate, fate and hope, life and death, birth and destruction, search for true self, a lot of philosophy, and human history Reflection.

    Not for money and reputation,So it is free, I hope to get promoted.so that more people see it.:LOL:



    Thank you for your support and interest.



    Idont know english,so use google translate,sorry:oops:


    My Art:http://xiaolong255.deviantart.com/gallery/
    晶体's Art:http://xiaolong255.deviantart.com/gallery/62823803/Design-draft

    This is the full text of the novel:
    https://pan.baidu.com/s/1pKBAUQv



    This is the full story Introduction (spoile ralert)
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    碎裂

    故事发生在一个由晶体为核心支撑起来的未知星球上,一个中年男性生命体,迷茫的走在自己生命中最后的道路上,倒下。

    在昏迷中,听到了神秘声音的呼唤,告诉他,他是这个世界最后一位古代神,是挽救这个世界最后的希望。再次醒来的他,穿梭在千年战争的历史长河中,遇到了不同的亡魂,获得了他们的记忆,还有他们的祝福,提升了他的力量。

    最后回到了他诞生的场景,千年战争结束的战场,来到了在昏迷中呼唤他的古代神面前,接受古代神的考验,赢得考验的同时,他的生命也走到了终点。

    生命结束的他,在黑暗中重生,从巨卵中孵化,从伽萨与塞娜用自身力量创造的异空间回到现实,完成了命运之神的觉醒,四位古代神迎接着他的到来。尾声中,在另一面,自称绝望之神的卡萨伊,通过晶体注视着星球上发生的一切,誓言命运之神的觉醒也无法挽救这个晶体碎裂的世界,因为他会抹杀这个世界最后的希望。第一部完。


    新生



    第二部的主角卡萨伊是一个诞生在这个星球上的普通生命体,讲述了他在命运之神到来前,在重生中回忆自己的一生,解释了他憎恨生命体的原因,击败命运神之后,两个人的灵魂分离出外星生命的灵魂“她”与“他”,两个外星生命的灵魂,通过晶体的折射,将这个星球发生过的两次毁灭告诉给卡萨伊,并告诉了他诞生之初发生的一切真相,罪恶之龙才是一切毁灭的开端。在“她”与“他”的感化之下,卡萨伊借助命运之神的躯壳,尝试着挽回第三次晶体碎裂造成的毁灭。最终所有生命体的灵魂和卡萨伊一同,在命运之神躯壳的保护下,来到了新的星球。

    同时制造毁灭的罪恶之龙也来到了这个新的星球。


    毁灭

    罪恶之龙的灵魂来到这个新星球之后,在晶体碎片的共鸣之下,看到了这个星球上发生的一切。

    主角是名叫诺古阿莫拉的帝国将军,在前去调查地震出现的大坑洞之后,被神秘力量腐化。回到帝国首都之后,将正在举行婚礼的继承者妻子杀害,同时还利用腐化的力量,夺去了继承者身边所有的生命,让继承者复仇。

    继承者追随腐化后的诺古阿莫拉,来到了大坑洞内,被仇恨吞噬的继承者,付出生命的代价完成复仇,被仇恨之刃穿透的诺古阿莫拉体内灵魂分裂。原始神的灵魂出现,在记忆的时空中将诺古阿莫拉的身世通过记忆,传递给他。几段记忆的传递,最终告诉了诺古阿莫拉宇宙中星球与生命的本质。

    得知生命体才是一切毁灭的根源,但因为“爱”的存在,诺古阿莫拉还是选择了现在的自己,最终挽救了星球的毁灭,她的妻子则将他们的孩子,一颗巨卵,送向了宇宙,在飘荡中来到了卡萨伊的星球,坠落中分裂成两个位面,善良的位面成为了罗摩它,卡萨伊就是罗摩它的孩子,罪恶的位面就是罪恶之龙。

    不断的在卡萨伊的星球制造毁灭的罪恶之龙最终回到了自己的诞生之星,看到了自己真实的来历,明白了制造毁灭的动机源于失去母亲的痛苦和看到星球的毁灭。

    诺古阿莫拉依靠生命体的力量,支撑起失去“晶体”的世界,挽救了这个星球,命运之神卡萨伊保护的灵魂也来到这个星球,为这个世界带来了生命诞生的可能。

    最终,星球的海洋中出现了单细胞生物,这就是我们的地球,最初生命形成的一刻。




    这部作品,描绘了生命的起源,隐喻了人类过去,现在与未来.

    第三部作品是对未来的预言,有关于人工智能,外星生命的描述,解释了神"的诞生,还有创造与毁灭,轮回等概念.

    最终也从这一切的真相中,寻找到生命体自身存在的价值

    回答了

    "我"是谁?,“我们”是谁?

    "我"来自哪里?“我们”来自哪里?

    "我"将去往何处?“我们”将去往何处?

    作者给出了自己的答案

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    古代神莫格拉
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    古代神伊祖
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    幼年的祖哈提阿
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    雷和卡萨伊

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    诺古阿莫拉

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    原始神状态下的诺古阿莫拉
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    姐姐的沙堡

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    重生的卡萨伊

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    繁星

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    "它"

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    戴特拉

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    飞船坠毁后的戴特拉

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    星球毁灭

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    伽库因的头颅

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    复仇者

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    伽库因

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    昆萨苏与光子弹爆炸
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    虫体"它"
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    虫体"它"
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    伽库因重生
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    复仇者
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    被罪恶之龙操控的卡萨伊
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    烧毁的戴特拉
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    戴特拉的飞船
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    原始神诺古阿莫拉
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    "她"
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    "他"
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    命运之神
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    塞娜的妹妹,克拉亚

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    Anyone who is willing to translate can contact me:D
     
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  2. Jigoku Shounen

    Jigoku Shounen An Envoy From Hell

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    This book I used ten years to conceive, repeatedly modify every detail until it has a perfect story, the story of this book is very special, profound description of the value of life with the choice of self, the real feelings and Reflect the reality, the story of our human history of millions of years, all read, you will find how it is shocking another person, you will know what I want to say.

    Wait a minute, you are the Author of this novel?
    Went to the raw site and saw the avatar, I guess you really are the Author. Probably, you are the 1st Chinese Author that Introduced your Own novel to NU. Be Proud!

    Summon @rwxwuxiaworld to help the OP finding a translator that's willing to translate his novel. The 1st Chinese Author that Truly introduced His Novel, and not waiting for someone to find it.
     
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  3. raltzero

    raltzero Last Year Until BS in IT | Lazy Overlord TL

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    ...You are the author of the book?
     
  4. Dravileo

    Dravileo Imofever never end

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    What is genre?
    It looks like interisting!
     
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    xiaolong255 Well-Known Member

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    yeah,i am:LOL:thank you
     
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    lol, first time that I ever saw the author himself asking his novel to be picked up haha
     
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    Lokumi 『The second greatest trash of society』

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    It looks good, I hope it get pickep up.
    And did you really took ten year to write it ?
     
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    xiaolong255 Well-Known Member

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    Before and after writing three versions, spent 15 years;)
     
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    raltzero Last Year Until BS in IT | Lazy Overlord TL

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    @xiaolong255
    Please put the images in a spoiler box. It is ["spoiler"] ["/spoiler"] without the "".

    Also, here is a better translation of your description.

    Description:
    《Crystal》

    This work went through "Fragmentation", "Rebirth", and "Destruction". These three distinct time and space perspectives, from myths from ancient times to this world's future, portray life forms. This special species, in the endless river of a million year history, face destruction of celestial bodies, but never abandoning determination and hope.

    In the end, they explore the essence of all living things in the universe, tracing back to the origin of its birth.

    The main story line of Crystal is already finished. The "Life" chapter is formed up of independent small narratives.

    At the present time, there is only 3 sections and there temporarily won't be any updates.

    Thank you for your support and interest.
     
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  11. Parth37955

    Parth37955 [Unavailable, go away] Staff Member

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  12. xiaolong255

    xiaolong255 Well-Known Member

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    thank you so much:p
     
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  13. raltzero

    raltzero Last Year Until BS in IT | Lazy Overlord TL

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    Bless if you mean you, Lmao if you mean me
    No problem : )
     
  14. Morvian

    Morvian 『Weakened King』『Abandoned Man』『Man Of Culture』

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    wow its first seeing author chinese novel making this thread~
    support +1

    and its not from qidian, so i think its safe~
    get that novel translated for all translator notice~

    edit: btw author, how many chapter this novel have? its status finished?
     
  15. xiaolong255

    xiaolong255 Well-Known Member

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    thank you so much:):cry:
     
  16. TeaNinja

    TeaNinja [Chuunikage of the Hidden Teapot Village]

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    The author is of a Chinese novel is also a nuffian? Who introduced you?
     
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    lexlangel Shem's lost butler

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    Oh nice will wait for this translation.
    Anyway it f eels strange jaja i kinda feel like to retort and say just make the story in english from Start!.
    I know its unreasonable so dont mind it. Hope your novel get picked Up soon =)
     
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    Sharudeis Semi-narcoleptic

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    Ten years?
    That's a lot of dedication to your novel. I hope that a translator picks this up.
    Here's to good luck for your novel! ^-^
     
  19. Cupcake Ninja

    Cupcake Ninja [Kind Sage][Lord Benevolence][ The Great Paragon]

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    its a fine day indeed when a cn author himself asks the community to translate his work. Im almost in tears here. And whats more, it sounds pretty good. All pholosophical and stuff. Noice, very noice
     
  20. xiaolong255

    xiaolong255 Well-Known Member

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    ???This is my novel.牧场的晓龙 is my chinese name,晓龙=XiaoLong,ok!.
     
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