Discussion in 'Novel General' started by makenai89, Dec 13, 2015.
I thought you would be the seme in our relationship
since you know, you used to have blackmail material on me and you're older
so it was kinda odd seeing me being the dominant one
right, im far more of an S than you
@Rhealora change it!
Though I rather see a normal vanilla fanfic instead of a one where you're hitting me
hmmm well, at the very least, i shouldnt be this....... tsundere
I find it quite.....disturbing
I'm fine with you being tsundere
just....not that much....
Dominant shotas can be pretty hot in BL.
Maybe, but I find it hard to imagine
We should get someone to make a manga of it then <3
Heh, You an S? Just wait and see, I will shape you up <3
nah, im good, how about you shape up @Ophious ?
I will re-write it later
@Ophious @kyuukestu I hope this one is more satisfactory
Kyuu sighed as he limped to ophi. The fight was bad, but he can handle it. His legs almost lost strength and gave out but ophi was there to catch him.
He leaned to ophi as ophi patted his shoulder.
"You don't have to" he said.
"Ofc I have too, you're mine, mine to bully" kyuu said as he nuzzled ophi's neck.
Ophi patted kyuu's head. Silence reigned on them but it wasn't a stifled silence. But rather a calm, comforting silence. Ophi let kyuu rest for a bit before he opened his mouth again.
"Sigh... let's go to the infirmary" ophi said.
Ophi helped the injured kyuu to walk to the infirmary. Ophi knew he should be sad seeing kyuu's grimace every time he walked, but theres this strange sort of happiness welled inside him; Some sort of strange pride and proud feelings.
When they arrived at the infirmary, the doctor wasn't there. He helped ophi to sit on the infirmary bed and took the first aid kit.
He then helped kyuu get out from his gakuran. He saw black and blue bloomed on kyuu's body, but he thought it's rather beautiful.
"Sssh" kyuu hissed as ophi pressed on the blooming bruises.
"Thats what you get for overreacting" he mumbled.
Kyuu seized ophi's chin and looked at him with hot, penetrating gaze.
Ophi felt his throat went dry. He could feel that stare all over his body, claiming, branding him.
He shook his head and the moment broke. Kyuu laughed quietly as He saw the top of ophi's head turned red. Opho glared at him. He quickly and efficiency put some medicine. When he's about to wrap the bandage around kyuu's torso, suddenly kyuu pulled him to his embrace.
"Oomph" ophi said as his nose bumped too kyuu's chest.
Ophi's protest died on his tongue as he watched kyuu's eyes spoke something far more beyond the word could convey. Ophi smiled and caressed kyuu's cheeks.
"I understand" he said.
Ophi's eyes fluttered to close as kyuu's face neared his. Then a feather light touch came on his lips.
*coughs out blood*
.....at least im not tsundere
My imagination worked overdrive just to picture this scene! This is great btw!
Was gonna continue to 18+ but got lazy
Thank you ❤
Could use some grammar work
Moom my grammar is terribad Q.Q
Teach me ❤
Separate names with a comma.