Title:Fairy On The Run Genre:Romance, Ancient Time (or Historical ), Magic Synosip: Xia Youlan was a fairy who lived in Heaven.She fell in love with her childhood friend,Du Wulang ,another fairy.Blinded by love,she did not see his true personnality and selfishness.Ambitionous and greedy,Wulang fell in love with a godness (you can say for her wealth and power).For his ambition,he framed her for a crime she did not commit,forcing her to flee from Heaven with 5 Heavenly Guards on her trace. « Wulang,if you do not love me you should have said so,I will not bother you but you just had to get me framed??? I swear that if I come back alive from this chase, you should protect your head carefully cause you never know when i’ll come back for revenge! » « Heavenly Guard-gege,do you have so much free time on your hand that you wanted to play a game of tag with me?If so i’m begging you please go and chase another mouse, please don’t bother with me, i’m no fun at all and you will get bord easily. » 1 or 2 years later….. « Why is this happening to me,getting chased from Heaven to the mortal world,then to the demon’s world isn’t enough,now even the Emperor from the mortal’s empire and the Demon King want me??? Waaahhh, I better run!!! »
Seems like it could be interesting. Just a tip though, forgetting to space after punctuation and capitalize 'I' can really turn potential readers away from a otherwise great story.
harem is like ketchup gives more flavor, to everything, but you have to admit, like ketchup every taste te same, and get tired of after a while, and this history the MC is a woman, she will lost the MC role of be a reverse harem, i don't like when a woman woo a lot of man (candy candy -esque stories give me creeps)
I strongly recommend an editor as well, or at least an online spell check. The synopsis sounds intriguing, would totally give it a try.