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Discussion in 'Community Creations' started by Shirana, Sep 12, 2018.

  1. Novela

    Novela Immortal Sheep

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    You should totally make a blog with the tag poems not make a forum btw
     
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  2. J-Mitch

    J-Mitch ⚖ Tipping the Scales of the World

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    Typical cupcake
     
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  3. Jarrow

    Jarrow Well-Known Member

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    7 couples and a threesome.
     
  4. J-Mitch

    J-Mitch ⚖ Tipping the Scales of the World

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    If someone didn't say anything, wouldn't have noticed it was a poem.

    At first I thought it was a rant with bad grammar, and read it straight.
     
  5. Disgusting

    Disgusting Fetishist

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    Rape victim fetishhh.
     
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  6. Taurus3301

    Taurus3301 Well-Known Member

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    I see the use of a double apostrophe where there should've only been one
     
  7. xluferx

    xluferx [The writer who writes for fun][Meme lord]

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    I like it.
    Cookie for you :cookie:
     
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  8. Cupcake Ninja

    Cupcake Ninja [Kind Sage][Lord Benevolence][ The Great Paragon]

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    oh so NOW you get the sex change operation. "Im not ready, Cupcake, its a big change Cupcake."

    I know i said i loved you for your personality, K, but dammit you're such a...a selfish prick. Know what? Forget it. I work two jobs to get enough money for your operation because YOU wanted it, and i was cool with it. I thought, "it doesnt matter, i love the person not the body."

    Then you go book a flight to Vegas when im on a business trip like i wont wonder what the hell you're doing? Nah. You go ahead and call that little fukboi of yours--yeah, i knew all along, you think im stupid or something?--and tell him we're done. I know i made a mistake, and im not using the old "you did it first" excuse. Im not that petty. But fuck me if im going to stay in this kind of caustic relationship any longer. I might not have much, but at least i have SOME dignity. Which is more than i can say for you!

    *Runs away, a trail of glistening tears marking the escape.*

    (welp im done. Peace ya'll. Y)
     
  9. Shirana

    Shirana Active Member

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    You put a lot of feeling into that :cookie:
     
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  10. Cupcake Ninja

    Cupcake Ninja [Kind Sage][Lord Benevolence][ The Great Paragon]

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    heh. I try.
     
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