Oneshot Meet the Sue's

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  1. Chu2

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    Hello, I'm writing a story called "Meet the Sue's"

    Synopsis: A sarcasm-induced story of the life of Mary and Gary Sue. They both have the same last name, but they aren't related.

    Genre: Satire

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    Meet Mary and Gary Sue. They were both born to happy and loving families, with a comfortable home and very friendly neighbors. Ever since they were kids, they'd shown signs of great intelligence. They were able to attend school and be at the top of their classes at the early age of three, which was where they both met. They both constantly had perfect scores on every homework assignment and quiz they took, and they were both also the top of their class in physical education.

    Every boy loved Mary and wanted to be like Gary, while every girl loved Gary and wanted to be like Mary. However, everyone knew Gary and Mary deserved each other, and when Gary and Mary became official, they were all happy for the two. Everyone would swoon at the sight of Mary and Gary kissing, even the teachers. Everyone wished to have a love as happy as Gary and Mary's.

    Gary and Mary were the most popular kids in school, and were friends with everyone. They were invited to all the birthday parties and all the hangouts. Everyone had fun when Mary and Gary were around. Even with all the playing around, they still both got the highest scores on all their tests. They continued this all their school days.
    When Mary and Gary graduated the top of their university, they both became CEO's of a new company, and instantly became the top grossing company within months. All their employees were very happy to work for Mary and Gary, and they were paid very well. Mary and Gary knew each and every employee by name, and all the employees loved their bosses.

    One day, Mary was pregnant. Everyone was overjoyed at the news. Gary and Mary were going to have a little child. When the baby, came out, it was an adorable little girl. The girl was named Susie, Susie Sue. Susie grew up a happy and obedient child, loving and happily listening to her parents her entire life.

    When Susie Sue was all grown up, she brought home a boy. The boy was named Darcy, and he was the heir to the second richest company, after Gary and Mary's. Darcy was a handsome and nice boy, who spoke and acted respectfully around Gary and Mary. Susie told her parents all about how kind and loving Darcy was. Gary and Mary were happy that Susie had found such a wonderful man, and blessed their marriage. The wedding ceremony was a grand occasion, with hundreds of thousands of people attending.
    A couple years after they were married, Susie Sue gave birth to an adorable little boy, Fitzwilliam. Mary and Gary were so happy to have a grandchild. They were such a happy family.

    Mary and Gary Sue lived their whole life content and happy, and millions of people grieved when they finally died, holding each other's arms. They were buried next to each other, and a statue was erected to remember them for generations.
     
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    Isnt it tooo op? Maybe some minor very minor plot developments are neeeded. There are novels with same type of setting like destined to love you and devils warmth which has school and life setting