My “Her Life is Comicalized” meta manga take to the otome isekai genre

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    Hey guys, Reading and inspired from a metafictional manga by Pageratta called Her Life is Comicalized,

    I decided to write a plot similar to this one but to the isekai genre. However, it is a bit of a mess, and I am writing this thread to find someone who will not only improve it but also hope if they can make a story similar to this one and make a webcomic based on it as well.

    So anyway, here is metafictional manga or in this case “Her Life is Comicalized” to the otome isekai genre itself

    The series starts like every otome isekai series with a monologue where it tells about a young high school girl named Akane who is a fan of the otome visual novel until she is killed in the usual road accident (aka killed by the truck plot) ,She meets a goddess and takes her to a different world which is the world of the otome visual novel she played and is reincarnated as the villainess named Emily so she can avoid her fate of becoming a villainess and will live a good life using the strategies she learned from her past life like every otome isekai stories

    But one day during one of Emily’s adventures in the otome isekai world where she tries to avoid her fate ,She discovers a smartphone which is from her previous life and thought she would see the walkthroughs and the games premise in order to easily avoid the death flag from the otome game but then she notices a webcomic about herself where it shows the death of her previous life and her reincarnation as Emily in otome game world as if someone must have find out her secret and turn it into a webcomic.

    She looks around for someone who is drawing the comic but she can’t find any one and when she looks at another chapter from the webcomic again from the smartphones twitter ,It shows about her discovery of the smartphone and the webcomic which frustrates her more so she tries other methods to stop the comic from publishing in the twitter account like breaking the twitter rules which are automatically censored, DM to the artist, trying to accomplish the goals in the story like getting the love interest which is too fast and make things worse for her but none of them work and the comic in her smartphone is still ongoing and even worse everyone now has a smartphone and looks at the comic which embarrass her a lot even though some of the supporting characters and her love interest feel sympathy with her. After Emily begins to adjust with the situation and speak to the readers like a youtuber, she read their comments from the twitter account but notice something from various incidents in the real world which she never ever heard of from the world of her previous life.

    The next chapter onwards something strange happens when Emily is going to the magic school which she attends ,everyone is not there and there is not a single person except some of her allies who approach her telling her that everyone disappeared except Emily and the supporting characters however the supporting characters confess to her that they found a phone and look at the comic from twitter and concluding that they are fictional characters but not the fictional characters in the universe of the comic but the fictional characters of the whole comics instead and that Emly and even her previous incarnation Akane is a fictional character because the supporting characters tell her they don’t remember their memories before the comic was published and that they are only created for their role in the story and Emily and even her previous incarnation only knows her backstory because the author of the comic has written her and that she is the main focus of the story and now the writer announce that he is ending the comic .

    Emily at first doesn’t believe it because she is considered a living person with real memories both current and past memories of both lives and not a fictional character so she runs far away to a different area where there will be lots of people but then it turns out to be a white void causing Emily to fully realize that she is not reincarnated as fictional character and live a good life but instead she is really a fictional character all along and that even her previous life before her reincarnation is just fiction as well as she is nothing of a backstory then Emily suddenly begins to fade out of existence and said to herself that she doesn’t want to die before she fade out of existence.

    In the final chapter Emily wakes up and in once again in the goddess realm at the beginning of the story but to her surprise her previous incarnation Akane appeared beside her they both have the similar personality and the memories throughout the story and wonder what the heck is going on ,then appearing is the goddess herself from the first chapter but she tells the girls that she tells the girls that she is also a character of this webcomic and only serves a communicator to the true god the creator himself who said that the creator along with the readers care for them as well and this is the pathway to paradise where fictional characters go after their roles and series comes to an end .

    The goddess also tells her the series role involves the characters to have some awareness that this is a isekai series not the “otome visual novel game itself” and that they should take a peek outside the fourth wall on our world as well and now that the series and the main characters role is done they will enter paradise especially that their friends and family from the story even the people from both Akane and Emily’s life are waiting for them ,And just before the Goddess helps them enter the door towards their awaited paradise, Akane then notice the final update from the series comic from her smartphone which involves the final chapter of the series and Emily asks her if they should take a look at it but realizing the series ends and that paradise which involves their friends and relatives they decided not to look at it as they already experienced the final chapter ,They both wave goodbye to the readers who read the series before they enter the door towards the paradise for character whose series have ended.

    And that is my “Her Life is Comicalized” meta manga take to the otome isekai genre, what do you think, Will you guys improve it, turn into a story or make it similar to this one and will anyone be interested in turning it into a webtoon webcomic? Write down in the comments down below.
     
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