내가 화살을 쏘아 동물을 죽이는 것도, 내 화살에 숨이 덜 끊어져 다른 이의 손에 마저 끊기는 것도, 별로 보고 싶지 않지만. The rest of the sentence are alright but I'm stuck on this part 내 화살에 숨이 덜 끊어져 다른 이의 손에 마저 끊기는 것도 Thanks for those who will help!
I'd think it comes across like "I don't want to see... {or even a life cut off by someone else's hand instead of mine}".
I'm assuming this person, A, is hunting? Basically: A doesn't want to kill animals/use their bow and arrow to hurt animals -> A doesn't want to see another person ending the life of an animal that A wounded with their bow and arrow. Mors86 is correct with the first part of that sentence. I would just simply add: > I don't want to see a life cut off by someone else's hand that I failed to end myself.