Picked Up Otherworldly White Dragon Lord

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  1. Skoll028

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    Eh. Hope it gets TLd, but personally it lost my intetest when you mentioned summoning other MCs. I prefer authors who use their own designed characters, but that's just me.
     
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    Meh, don't be an idiot.
     
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    They are copy paste but that doesnt mean mc is retarded
     
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    The majority of CN MCS are retarded, they're hotheaded, and rash.
     
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    @AIm21 Please use this format.

    Name: Name of the series.
    Raw Link: http://www.linkhere.com
    Why It Should Get Picked Up: Your reasons....
    Description (if you can find one):



    (Hurry, hurry before 'they' see it. :p )
     
  6. AIm21

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  7. criticalmind

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    Sounds like an infinity series. Wouldn't mind reading if it's as good as Terror infinity

    Put up a poll please. I wanna see how many people want this translated.
     
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    no polls.
     
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    how do you delete this poll?
     
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    *magic*...a mod has to do it.
     
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    Its machine translatable nice
     
  13. vulcan

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    hi guys so i read the raw and this story is awesome the genre is (action,fantasy,romance,mature,comedy and other) but this story is really great .
     
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    So, I started liking this novel. What do you think? Because I know my grammar is not the best...

    Localized in the city's trunk line, inside of a top personal residential area, a young boy is lying quietly in a bed, staring a LCD screen. However, the room in which the youngster was, was very strange. Countless animation toys were spreaded over the cupboard to the point where any otaku would die of envy. You can see from the fine workmanship that each work is a valuable treasure. On the bookshelf there is also collection covers from Hong Kong, Taiwan and even directly purchases from Japan, like genuine manga, cds, posters, etc. Every kind of neighboring merchandise. At the same time, extremely in disharmony with the room, exist the best medical equipment comparable with the city's large hospitals together with a life support equipment!

    The youngster face was very thin with an abnormal yellow colour. He has inserted inside of his nostrils a breathing tube along with a *hiss* sound which comes from the machine. Even though he is young, because of chemotherapy, he ended bald and not even his eyebrows were saved. Being seen by other people would give a strange and fearful feeling.

    "Ha... Cough... Haha" The LCD is displaying the anime called《Fullmetal Alchemist: Brotherhood》The protagonist "Ed" Elric Edward is hugging intensely his brother's armor to the extent of almost breaking his vertebra. A happy laughter followed by a slight cough comes from the mouth of the youngster.

    With the gently opening of the door, a nurse enters holding a warm water bag. After the youngster nodded, the nurse changed the infusion bag of his right arm for a cold water bag. After fixing the warm water bag, the nurse left the room silently.

    After the nurse left, the youngster moved his somewhat rigid body and pressed a few buttons of his keyboard, making the monitor switch to a trading window. Looking at those densely packed numbers and dazzling trend chart, the youngster decides to start selling and buying. Suddenly the youngster's look appears to be of a professional in the stock market.

    After the operation is completed, the tired youngster took a deep breath lying down. Ordinary people can't begin to imagine the wealth that went into this youngster's pocket in only ten minutes. Perhaps some would pity this youngster, casting away those stocks which would rise in value after some time, but the youngster know that he doesn't' have much time left. So for the sake of security, the youngster does not care if he gain a little less or not.

    Dididi! A message came from QQ and then all of sudden, his spirit returned. The youngster supported his body on the bed, and opened the messages column. A user called "Glasses Panda", a online friend just has finished sending a file.

    The youngster quickly and quite happily accepted the file. After unpacking the file, there were more than ten delicate magic fantasy CG. A big dragon flying on the sky, a beautiful fairy playing near a lake, a magnificent carved angel in a castle, as well an infernal demon filled with blood and fire. Each CG is full of life and vitality with a realistic feeling of beauty which leaves you lost in astonishment. Even before seeing what "Glasses Panda" sent, the youngster can't prevent his hands shaking from excitement.

    &1t; You are the best CG master!> The youngster sent his answer expressing his most sincere praise. Glasses Panda sent a very naughty and embarrassed expression to express his gratitude towards his praise!

    The youngster looked carefully at the CG and every time he sees another, he heart goes into shock. His desire for living is strengthened. Before being acquaintance with "Glasses Panda", because of the disease and the pain of the chemotherapy, the youngster thought many times about ending his life, but now the youngster wants only to live a bit longer and to look at those beautiful works of art.

    &1t; I wish I could have a little more time to see your work!> The youngster typed silently telling to his friend about his pain.

    Glasses Panda came with a huge and naughty smiling face!

    The boy decided to come clean about everything, both of his hand quickly typed the keyboard; &1t: I have an incurable disease and I don't have much time to live. Until now, every CG you've done together with the anime, had brought me smiles, that's why if it's possible┉┉┉can you leave your bank account number? I want to give you some money to express my gratitude>.

    The youngster felt like his message was improper so he quickly continued typing: I'm sorry for say something like this so suddenly, but I don't mean anything bad. If you are afraid you can go back to the bank and apply for a bank card. I have handled the money like this many times┉┉

    To the youngster, taking out hundreds of thousands of dollars doesn't affect him at all. It can be said that the money he profit doesn't have any meaning to him. The only use it has is that after his death, his parents are less sad, and to live a pacific life where they don't need be worrying about clothes or food.

    Glasses Panda didn't reply, instead, he uploaded a new CG. In the image, a mother was gently holding his child who had tied a red scarf. The boy was carrying a schoolbag, and looking at him, the boy seemed to be happy and proud when looking at the red scarf on his chest. The entire CG exuded a warm feelings.

    &1t; Your parents are the ones who gave you birth, leave it with them!>

    For at time, tears were falling without stop, he believes that he truly became friends with him.

    Glasses panda came again with naughty expression and said: &1t; In fact, I'm more interested in the pile of figurines than your money. If you are willing to give them to me, I will "reluctantly" accept them.> Another image appeared in the message bar of QQ, of an emperor in a costume drama sitting straight in his emperor's chair, with the following words, "You don't need to thank me!"

    The youngster smiling through tears, began to hit the keyboard. But just at the time when the youngster was about to deliver his message, he feel a stream of hot coming from his throat.

    Not good! After realizing that his illness came again, an intense cough accompanied by a spit of blood came from his mouth! The sound of quick steps came from the corridor, and in the next moment, the door was fiercely pushed by severals nurses walking hurriedly. They slowly supported the youngster's body into the bed. Another nurse used the room's telephone and contacted the doctor who was resting in another room.

    Soon, several doctors together with the boy's parent rushed in, the doctors and nurses were busy facing his body as well, there was a look of sadness in his parent's face. The only thing the youngster feels is that his five senses are becoming more and more fuzzy, all the sounds become distant, like they were coming from a unknown and distant place, the scenery began to blur. After losing all the strength on the body, both eyes begin to close, and finally everything is shrouded with darkness┉┉

    But nobody noticed at this moment when everybody was busy with the youngster, in the computer where he had opened QQ, Glasses Panda had responded: &1t; Don't be afraid! Death is just a new beginning! I will fulfill your desire>.

    The Earth is really beautiful seeing it from here! Crawling on a huge platform, the youngster looked down at the sky-blue planet. From the start, when he appeared in this space, he was surprised to the point that his brain went blank. He doesn't know how many time has passed but he slowly calmed down.

    He turned around, helpless sitting on the ground. Before his eyes there was something like a pure white marble platform. The youngster looked at his hands, which were a little transparent, they resembled a white mist. Near the platform, looking at the near pond, it seems that his whole body has changed into a strange state. This state is what the people call the so called soul form!

    If I remember correctly┉┉I should be dead.

    Right! The youngster nodded, after all, his body is in a really strange state. Even the pain that plagued him for many years has disappeared. Everything was very strange. After careful thinking, the youngster jokingly tease himself that his circumstances are similar to the countless YY novels? After his death, he has travelled to an unknown space┉┉

    Depressed, the youngster stood in front of the spacious platform and roared up: “According to the plot, a God has to appear and then comes the protagonist’s turn? Hello! There is nobody here!”

    There is nobody here... There is nobody here... There is nobody here...

    The youngster's voice echoed through the platform, but hearing no response, the youngster, depressed, sat again on the ground. I hate it! It seems like is not the same plot like the novels. The youngster has tried before jumping off from the platform, but he always was sent back to this place, as if it were impossible to leave.

    Just when the youngster was depressed, a streak of light suddenly flashed across the platform. A shining white huge sphere of light appeared in the center of the platform. The intense light caused to the youngster who was in the soul state to divert unconsciously his eyes, not daring to look at light sphere. Suddenly, he heard a dignified voice, but it was not possible to identify whether the voice is from a man or a woman, as if coming from a faraway place.

    &1t; Chosen one! After accepting the baptism of death and rebirth, you will become my emissary, my incarnation, representing my will┉┉>

    He didn't wait for the voice to finish speaking, as the youngster was already yelling: "sTop"!

    The voice stopped immediately and in a split of a second, the light sphere was scattered by a lot. Taking advantage that the light sphere was weakened, he turned his head and stare it. The youngster opened slowly his mouth and said: "I don't know what you are and I don't know what you expect me to do! But I would like to use three words to answer your proposal"!

    Saying that, the youngster stopped and said three words gnashing his teeth with anger: "I" "refuse" "completely"!

    The atmosphere on the platform fell into an awkward silence because of these three words... If it were not because the dazzling light continued dispersing itself, the youngster will certainly noticed that the light sphere on the platform was slightly trembling as if it was enduring something.

    "Hahaha... Hahaha...Haha"! Suddenly, a huge laughter came from the light sphere without the serious and imposing feeling of earlier. It was laughing heartily like a young boy.

    The youngster didn't expect something like this, so he didn't know what to do. The light sphere stopped laughing and slowly began to change his shape. The youngster was amazed looking at the light sphere, it has changed before his eyes to a almost a boy of his age.

    The boy, the incarnation of the light sphere was floating near the youngster: "Perhaps, is better if I speak to you with this appearance!"

    The youngster carefully narrowed his eyes looking at the new appearance of the light sphere. The boy, which was standing in the same place as the light sphere of before didn't cared at all and was merely showing an indifferent smile!

    "You are..." The youngster stretched his arm, pointing the boy: "A God... an alien... or something else?"

    Not waiting the boy's reply, suddenly, the youngster becomes worried, and with all his strength, he knocks in his own head, not knowing whether being excited or depressed: "Good! Tell me something... What the hell is going on, why I'm in this kind of situation similar to what happens in those web novels."

    Seeing the youngster's behavior, as if the boy was satisfied, nods. As if encourage him, the boy raises his thumb: "Splendid! You only needed 2 hours 23 minutes to adapt yourself to this situation after waking up, and not only that, your spirit is considerably stable and you are not suffering from any mental disorder! That's great!"

    Laughing gently, the boy claps his hands, but the youngster seemed to be a little angry. After taking a deep breath, he sat down on the floor: "Good, then can you tell me who are you?"

    "Who I am?" Pointing at himself with an exaggerated laughter, the boy said: "I have many names. The humanity calls me God, in the Quran I'm called Allah, in the Bible I'm called God, in the Taoism I'm called Hongjun, Buddha in the Buddhism, and sometimes I'm called Satan, demon or destruction..."

    The boy suddenly stopped describing himself so exaggeratedly, when he looked down at the youngster's eyes who seemed to lack understanding: "You all call me in those web novel the God of creation, God!"

    "God!?" After listening to those words, the youngster showed a strange expression, he supported himself with one hand on the ground while the other hand pointed towards the boy without any force, murmuring.

    "In fact... You can also call me "The Seeder", in the literal sense that I'm the first born in the universe. I do not even know for how many years I travelled through the countless universes spreading the seed of life." The boy standing with arrogance, looking at the youngster said: "If you are not comfortable with those names, you can also call me 'Glasses Panda'".

    ...Because of that line, the youngster’s brain seems to have stopped working, and so, he was only was capable of staring the boy, who claims to be 'Glasses Panda'."

    "You... You really are, 'Glasses Panda'?" Until now the mysterious CG master maker was this boy in front of me, and not only that, he is God!?

    'Glasses Panda' nodded claiming that was true: "Are you surprised?"

    The youngster didn't said a word, still he found hard to believe it. 'Glasses Panda' looked at the youngster and then placed his hand gently on the youngster's head. The youngster felt a slight chill rushing through his heart, and his state of excitement calmed down.

    "This... This is... What happened?" The youngster touched his forehead looking at 'Glasses Panda' like something unimaginable happened.

    'Glasses Panda' gently shrugged with a smile: "That's nothing, only a little trick to calm your mind, otherwise, if you are always in that excited state... How we are going to have a nice chat?"

    The youngster used the hand that was on the ground to get up, and helpless say to 'Glasses Panda': "What is there to talk about? I didn't expected my first 'true' friend to be a God."

    "With more reason you should be proud!" Said 'Glasses Panda' with both hands on his waist with an arrogant look.

    But that sentence made the young man feel angry: "Is only that you don't have the manners that a God should have, like the dignity and temperament."

    'Glasses Panda' stupefied looked at him and then said with a laugh: "I only thought that this appearance was more convenient to talk to you, but if you want a majestic conversation..."

    After saying that, 'Glasses Panda' snapped his fingers and the whole scenario around suddenly became distorted, just like being in the center of the storm. The youngster closed his eyes in panic, but when he opened, the boy who was just now in the platform disappeared from his sight. To his surprise he was in a solemn and spacious room. A fine red carpet was spread through the floor, decorated with ancient rosewood furniture, a bookshelf was filled with splendid books and on the wall was hanging a five-star red flag. The whole room seemed like the study of an old revolutionary.

    Where is this? The youngster slowly walks toward a round table, on there was several green tea cups blowing steam. He stretched his hand towards the teacup, but he was unable to sense the temperature of those teacups.

    "You are in your soul state, you will not feel hunger, pain or temperature." Along with the voice, a majestic figure came walking in.

    Along with the figure, the youngster ferociously turned his head, when he saw that person, he almost felt like his heart jumped out of his chest. Of course, In the premise he have a heart...

    "Don't be nervous, little comrade. Sit down and let's talk." Each to his own business, the man sat down.

    Like a conditioned reflex, the youngster sat down, it was hard to believe that in front of him there was an extraordinary man. The youngster stuttered: "Pre... President...?!"

    This extraordinary man didn't respond, he only raised his tea and took a sip.

    A door was pushed open and severals people entered in line. The founder of the New China, the greatest diplomat, the commander of Resist America and Aid Korea volunteer troops, the Chief architect of reform and opening up, every one of them are engraved in every youngster’s memories.

    "Oh! You're already here?"

    Dressed in a fitting chinese tunic, the prime minister smiled, then he took a seat and sat down.

    When all those old revolutionaries gathered around the center, the youngster felt a little shiver all over his body. Suddenly, the youngster saw that his two legs were also transparent like a mist, and so he immediately remembered that he was dead. A moment ago he was talking with God, 'Glasses Panda', so from where these old revolutionaries came from?

    The youngster almost bounced fiercely from the wooden bench. He was doubting the person in front of him was the president, so he asked: "...Panda, ah! You... You are 'Glasses Panda', right?"

    "Bingo! You guessed correctly, but there is not reward!" Originally, using the serious face of the president, every youngster would be grinning.

    "Haha, this little comrade's ability to adapt is very good! Reacting so fast!" The chief architect of reform and opening up smiled. Then, from his pocket, he pulled a cigarette and took a mouthful.

    Not only looks and voice are the same, even the expressions and how they behave are the same. Unable to take his eyes off from all those extraordinaries people, he turned towards 'Glasses Panda' and asked: "Don't tell me they are..."

    'Glasses Panda' put down his teacup and shooked his head: "No. 'They' or rather 'We', all the people inside this room except you, are all me."

    What? Don't say that! The youngster reacted looking at those people with a look of surprise.

    Dressed in the military uniform of the volunteer army, the commander in chief nodded, but at this moment everyone present spoke in unison: "I don't have a fixed appearance, I can imitate any attitude and even split myself into several wills to control differents individuals."

    Four extraordinary men, four different voices, but at the same time, not one of them misspoke when saying the same sentence. The youngster felt that this solemn room became strange and a little scary.

    "Well, it seems that this appearance has made you feel more nervous."

    While sitting, 'Glasses Panda' and the other three people's body began to slowly split into countless and tiny spots of light. At the same time, the room also started to distort itself, it started to spin.

    What is happening now? Although he wasn't afraid, is only that subconscious, the youngster used his hand to block what was before his eyes. The whirlwind stopped once again, and the room changed into a Victorian style living room-like. From a open window came the sunshine filling the entire room with brightness and vitality.

    In front of him stood a girl, dressed in black gothic dress, black wings, red eyes and silver-white hair. After placing a hand slightly in front of her chest, she gave an elegant bow followed by a smile: "Perhaps this is better? Father."

    Suigintou!? That's right... The youngster determined that he had not been mistaken. Her smile had a trace of evil feeling, even when she was bowing it showed a arrogant stance. Compared with the original size of the doll, it was more like the height of a normal little girl. This was the character from the popular anime called 'Rozen Maiden'. The first doll, Suigintou.

    In front of the delicate and lovely porcelain doll called Suigintou, for a moment, the youngster was staring blankly like a stupid. But only because of his previous experience, the youngster didn't seem so surprised and upset this time.

    The youngster walked slowly towards 'Suigintou' and bent down his body to look carefully at her body. Looking at her meticulous face and arrogant manner, inside of the youngster's mind, a thought appears, 'very cute'.

    The youngster fiercely shook his head, discarding the strange idea: "Panda?"

    "Bingo! You guessed correctly again!" The incarnation of 'Glasses Panda', Suigintou, lifted her skirt and elegantly spun around with a smile.

    Taking advantage of the Suigintou's appearance, 'Glasses Panda' can be regarded as wickedly cute: "You like what you see? Otou-sama! (Speaking in japanese: Father)"

    Otou-sama... Unexpectedly he used on purpose the Japanese pronunciation. Even though their voices are the same, but instead because the youngster knows that is 'Glasses Panda', he feels awkward. Therefore the youngster gave a bad review: "Besides making me feel that you don't have what a God should have like temperament and dignity, now I'm doubting whether or not you have a split personality!"

    As if the weak heart of 'Glasses Panda' was injured, he says: "What a way to use a bad review to hurt my feelings. The one you always liked it wasn't the Suigintou character?"

    The youngster took a glance at 'Glasses Panda' and said: "There are many differents characters that I like from anime."

    "That's right! But you have more favorable impression of this character called Suigintou..." 'Glasses Panda' put away his cynical expression and said slowly word by word: "After all... Since it can be said that both have the same problem! The arrogant and beautiful Rozen Maiden, Suigintou. Even though her body has a defect, she walks strongly towards her dream! In the same way, even though you are living under the fear of the leukemia, you still hope to live. You admire the strong willpower of Suigintou, as if she were a reflection of you."

    Perhaps I should be thanking 'Panda'; After the short monologue of 'Glasses Panda' came a short silence from the youngster: "You are really flattering me! From the many times I have suffered from my illness, many times I thought about ending my life..."

    After a faint sigh, 'Glasses Panda' clapped his hand and said: "Forget about that, we will return to the main topic!"

    "Wait a second!!" The youngster said hurriedly.

    'Glasses Panda' stopped his action looking puzzled at the youngster: "Is there anything else?"

    "In fact... If is possible..." The youngster crouched down, looking at 'Suigintou' with a face filled with hope and expectation: "Can I hold you?"

    "I will use three words to answer your proposition: "I" "refuse" "completely"!"
     
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    Better then the MT that i have been using! so are you going to be the main translator for this novel?
     
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    he likes and is suck inside of a mountain

    :)
     
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    big cross over ..nice
     
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    I think? The chapters are really long so I will try to make 1 a week or at least 2. They are like 6K long each chapter, like 3 normal chapters from almost every novel
     
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