post ur original song

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  1. Deep

    Deep NO TITLE

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    Title says all
    post a song composed by urself
    u can also post poems if u want
     
  2. Satan

    Satan Yes

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    None here is talented enough.... Except me ofc
     
  3. aliefrn123

    aliefrn123 Active Member

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    When our gaze meets each other
    When our face blushes at same time
    When our hearts were uncontrollable
    When our fate connected us

    Let me tell You
    I love you, I love you
    I love you no matter what
    Don't sad, if you think you're diffrent
    To me you're still same
    Forever


    Let me tell you
    Even If you were different
    To me, you are forever will be my only precious one
    The one can't be replaceable

    No matter what you do
    I will still love you
    As long this earth stand
    I will still love you



    Is this good
     
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  4. Ahrt

    Ahrt PhD in Pokemon Studies

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    I post my masterpiece here and then see it on the billboard top 100 at the #1 spot.
    The artists name was 'Deep' and the album name was 'I want no title'.
     
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    Hydropoop Well-Known Member

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    We're no strangers to love
    You know the rules and so do I
    A full commitment's what I'm thinking of
    You wouldn't get this from any other guy
    I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling
    Gotta make you understand

    Never gonna give you up
    Never gonna let you down
    Never gonna run around and desert you
    Never gonna make you cry
    Never gonna say goodbye
    Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you
     
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    Night Immoral member

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  7. Deep

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    wish there was record function . to find what style they are singing
     
  8. Yuki

    Yuki [Chaos-Order & Space-Time Magician,Owner of Void]

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    I went Rave
    Felt a fuzzy wave
    Loud ass techno got me high electro

    Saw a pretty rave girl
    Shining like a blue pearl

    She was happily dancing
    Decide to take chance in

    Yuki forgot the rest, really.
     
  9. Yuki

    Yuki [Chaos-Order & Space-Time Magician,Owner of Void]

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    Dudes got a really nice voice and still sounds the same.
     
  10. SilentFyre

    SilentFyre Irregular Ghost Member

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    This is my original song:

    When Winter Begins

    Verse 1:
    The wind beats against the window
    While I’m lying on my bed
    The sun fills my room with shadows
    I pull my blanket over my head.

    Verse 2:
    The room is cold
    Creeping into my skin
    To the side I rolled
    Waiting for the warmth to seep in

    Chorus:
    I can’t wait for the winter to end
    For the summer to arrive
    I can’t say that I simply pretend
    When I’m even cold inside

    I can see the days become shorter
    I can feel the temperature drop further
    I can’t wait for the winter to end
    And the summer to arrive

    Verse 4:
    The fireplace takes so long
    Until it finally heats up
    I try to make my coffee strong
    Since my drowsiness can’t stop

    Verse 5:
    I can’t hear the birds
    Ever since they left
    But it’s obvious
    This is the time of their rest.

    Chorus:
    I can’t wait for the winter to end
    For the summer to arrive
    I can’t say that I simply pretend
    When I’m even cold inside

    I can see the days become shorter
    I can feel the temperature drop further
    I can’t wait for the winter to end
    And the summer to arrive

    Bridge:
    Though the winter’s just begun
    I cannot stay warm
    I miss the summer sky
    And that’s the reason why

    Chorus:
    I can’t wait for the winter to end
    For the summer to arrive
    I can’t say that I simply pretend
    When I’m even cold inside

    I can see the days become shorter
    I can feel the temperature drop further
    I can’t wait for the winter to end
    And the summer to arrive
     
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    Freakazoid Freakazoid member

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    What beautiful eyes u have
    Under those two eyebrows,
    Under those two eyebrows,
    what beautiful eyes u have!

    They want to watch me,
    but if u dont leave them,
    but if u dont leave them
    not even blink
     
  12. Arcadia Blade

    Arcadia Blade ༼ つ ◕_◕ ༽つ You can do it!!

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    Its was so easy to wait for you
    The days of happiness
    We both smiled, hoping the days would last
    Until you disappear...

    I waited for you...
    The big tree where our fate began
    Tears fell, telling me there's no hope
    Wishing you to come back...

    My mind kept breaking, ruining my life
    The world became dark, without you here
    Insanity, laughing maniacally,
    Ripping me apart, collapsed my mind...

    My last struggle for my life
    Wishing i go back in time
    Returning that moment, our happiness
    A smile till my last...
     
  13. LivingCorpse

    LivingCorpse Half-dead Neighborhood's Undead

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    Title : Fight! Sentai Zombie Hero! LivingCorpse!

    Janjan~!
    Jajajajan~!
    *INTRO MUSIC START*
    It's a bird~! It's a plane~! No~! It's... LivingCorpse!
    *BGM START*
    Coming to our rescue~♬
    Our Part-Time Hero~♪
    Everyone lovable zombie~♪
    (But not just Zombie! A Vampire Zombie!)
    Everyday~♬
    Sleeping on the sofa~♬
    Fighting Evil in the kitchen~♪
    Guts! Glory! Rescue~!
    (Kyaaah!)
    A hero~?
    A zombie~?
    A Vampire~?
    A NEET~?
    It's our lovable Undead~
    ELCHIEEEE~!!
    .....
    *BGM END*
     
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    Ahrt PhD in Pokemon Studies

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    I gift you my Poem

    Life is like a nose full of boogers
    And I picked you!
     
  15. Lord_of_paradise

    Lord_of_paradise Active Member

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    He gets on with life as a scientist,
    He's an optimistic kinda chap.
    He likes playing computer games on Sundays,
    He likes playing chess in the week.
    He likes to contemplate Boobs.
    But when he starts to daydream,
    His mind turns straight to Ass.

    Oh oh oh!

    Sometimes I look at him and I look into his eyes,
    I notice the way he thinks about Ass with a smile,
    Curved lips he just can't disguise.
    But he thinks it's Boobs making his life worthwhile.
    Why is it so hard for him to decide which he loves more?
    Boobs or...
    Ass?He likes to use words like 'jiggle,'
    He likes to use words like 'magic.'
    He likes to use words about Boobs.
    But when he stops his talking,
    His mind turns straight to Ass.

    Oh oh oh!

    Sometimes I look at him and I look into his eyes,
    I notice the way he thinks about Ass with a smile,
    Curved lips he just can't disguise.
    But he thinks it's Boobs making his life worthwhile.
    Why is it so hard for him to decide which he loves more?
    Boobs or...
    Ass?He likes to hang out with Helen,
    He likes to kick back with Laura,
    But when left alone,
    His mind turns straight to Ass.

    Oh oh oh!

    Sometimes I look at him and I look into his eyes,
    I notice the way he thinks about Ass with a smile,
    Curved lips he just can't disguise.
    But he thinks it's Boobs making his life worthwhile.
    Why is it so hard for him to decide which he loves more?
    Boobs or...
    Ass?He's not too fond of smelly rubbish,
    He really hates dirty hippos,
    But he just thinks back to Ass,
    And he's happy once again.

    Oh oh oh!
     
  16. CloudySkySadMoon

    CloudySkySadMoon Bald and Beautiful

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    Swords left the sheath
    Blood splattered
    Corpses were all that's left

    Swords left the sheath
    Screams filled the air
    Descent of despair

    Roses danced in the air
    White was turned crimson
    All for her smile
     
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    Cien 『Omnivore Reader』Inactive

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    Throat stabbing~♪ that's what I do~♪
    Hero Jian Chen, will be coming for you~♪

    Throat stabbing~♪ I won't miss~♪
    Slicing up throats, this I promise~♪

    Throat stabbing~♪ Sometimes the heart too~♪
    Deceptioning releasing too much~♪ What shall we do?~♪
     
  18. Elion

    Elion Well-Known Member

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    WARNING TRASHY SONG HERE !

    COPIED ! FROM A ANIME GENIUS

    The Islands in the south are warm.

    Paina -purupuru -their heads get really hot.

    And they all are idiots !

    Second Verse !

    The Islands in the north are cold
    hyakkoi-koiikoi - Their heads shiver all around .

    And they all are idiots !

    -Stolen from a anime singer- Monkey .D Luffy -The Pirate King