Oneshot Salem

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  1. ChickenBakuba

    ChickenBakuba Well-Known Member

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    Hi, I’m writing this oneshot called Salem. No, you can’t find this anywhere else.



    Synopsis:

    Do you really need a synopsis for a oneshot



    Genre:

    Tragedy, Action



    Here it is:

    Story #1: Salem

    The Vigilante's fingers closed around the cold metal in his hoodie pockets. Pulling his deerstalker hat lower to hide his face, he stalked along the dingy alleyway.

    The Serial Killer had been at it again. Just when they thought he'd disappeared, he'd returned -- and with another victim.

    Mary Johnson had been discovered by her fiancee in the morning a few days ago, her cold and stiff body slumped on her favourite rocking chair. God knows how many times the poor woman's throat had been slit; the scene was not as scary as it had been hideous. The body had been nigh unrecognisable when the police had arrived on site.

    The police had been utterly baffled with the case. The position of the cuts suggested that the third victim had been killed from behind, but there was the question of how the Serial Killer entered her room. Her door had been latched tightly, there were no sightings of her inviting anybody into the house, and certainly nothing to suggest that she had been on familiar terms with the Serial Killer. Even her room's door had been locked, and unless it was the superstitious work of ethereal beings, not even a master burglar could enter her room without being discovered.

    Perhaps the most haunting discovery was when the autopsy results came out. Rigor mortis had already begun to set into the body, but the blood around the corpse had yet to coagulate. This meant that the victim had been killed at least 4 hours prior, but then what of the blood? Whose blood did it belong to, and where did it come from? The coroner was unable to provide a sufficient explanation despite conducting the autopsy several times.

    The shocking case had provoked an outcry in Salem. It was the third of its kind, and Salem's villagers were outraged at their police's incompetence. They were at the end of their ropes and wanted solid answers as well as security from the police. The media's coverage and fear-mongering did not serve to help either. A curfew was immediately established, but the issue of security had never been addressed. The villagers were no longer as trusting or as endearing as before. Conversations were often brief, children were locked in their houses and employees hurried straight home after work. The Vigilante was guilty of this too. In all his paranoia, he had even slept with his firearm beneath his pillow every night.

    But not this night. The Vigilante had waited for answers that never came from the authorities for far too long, and he had to take things into his hands. If it had been any other person who had been killed, he would have been horrified, but he would not have lost his cool. But no, it was Mary. Mary, his fiancee, no less!

    Never would the Vigilante have imagined to relive a similar scene as appalling as during his times in the trenches when he'd fought on the front-lines on that late morning. He'd rapped on the familiar door of his fiancee's without reply. After hours of futile knocking and hollering, his suspicion turned into fear and he busted down the door.

    That image would haunt his nightmares forever.

    The five stages of grief had been true to its order. First came Denial. What of their marriage due the coming week? What of their plans for life, their silly promises of love? What of his child she was two months pregnant with? How could everything just crumble so easily?

    Gone. It was all gone. The Vigilante blinked hard as the tears threatened to seep out of his eyes.

    Denial was succeeded by Anger. Red, seething, explosive anger. Unprecedented raging anger he never knew he could feel.

    The Vigilante needed justice. He ached for justice, he longed for justice, and he desperately desired for it to be served on a silver platter in front of him.

    He had seen the terror in his lover's wide eyes, her mouth opened in an unending scream. He had to pay that terror back twofold. And the foetus inside her belly. Everything had been destroyed with just one deranged, sick bastard and the cut of a scalpel. The sadistic fucker would pay for everything, tooth by tooth, with his filthy life.

    His anger had funnelled into action. The Vigilante still had his trusty Glock 17 he had from the war in the '60s when he deserted. It was rusty after negligence, and slightly worn from skirmishes. But it would do.

    The Vigilante had one remaining bullet. He'd cast away all bullets but that as a reminder of his cowardly desertion as well as the many he had gunned down. It was a testimony to his sins; the comrades he had left behind as well as the blood he had on his hands.

    Running his fingers along a familiar dent in his pistol he'd gotten from diving to save a comrade-in-arms, the Vigilante sucked in a cold breath of air. He hadn't held a firearm for years, but the actions were long ingrained in him after the war.

    He had sworn to Mary never to hold a gun to anybody again, but that seemed like that promise could not hold. I'm sorry, Mary.

    --

    The police had zero leads on the Serial Killer, and there was nothing to assume the Vigilante had either. However, the Serial Killer was notorious for leaving a note at every murder which were rumoured to contain the information of his next unfortunate victim. The Vigilante had found his note on his fiancee's body when he had searched for her pulse. He palmed it before the police arrived.

    He'd spent the entire afternoon attempting to decode it, but to no avail. Desperation could not make up for incompetence, after all. Frustrated, he turned to a detective he knew and pleaded with the detective for his help.

    The detective, full of pity and regret for the Vigilante, had agreed to the task. After a week of sleepless nights, the detective finally deciphered the coded note before the Serial Killer struck again.

    The Serial Killer's victim was John Hathorne, the town's doctor. A compassionate christian who was renowned for his medical skill, and a genuinely good person at heart.

    Turning a corner, the Vigilante finally arrived at John Hathorne's house. Slinking into a dark corner, he made himself unnoticed as he quietly waited for the Serial Killer to arrive.

    He did not know how much time passed, but his concentration was broken only when the strident knells of the belltower rang out, signifying it was four o'clock.

    Was he not going to arrive? Doubt began to worm into the Vigilante's heart. Perhaps the detective had made a mista-

    The soft sound of crunching gravel beneath a sneaker was explosive to the well-trained ears of the Vigilante. The dark and striking figure of a man could be seen approaching John Hathorne's house. It was long past curfew. Nobody would be out here now, save the police patrols. But all the patrols wore a cap.

    The figure was steadily nearing his position as it made its way to the front door.

    The Vigilante froze. His body and fingers were cold, but his head felt hot. Like an ocean rising above the levies, he felt his angry tears flow down his numb cheeks.

    Pulling out the gun from his hoodie's pocket in a swift motion with both hands, he stepped out of the shadows. His hands shook as he pointed it at the figure.

    "Give Mary back to me!" The Vigilante let out a throaty roar as he pulled the trigger.

    The figure turned, alarmed by the sudden shout. Despite the Vigilante's trembling, his shot hit true. The bullet hit centre mass, passing straight into the figure's stomach. The figure let out a shriek as the shot propelled it onto its bottoms. The piercing gunshot shattered the silent morning.

    Lumbering towards the figure, the Vigilante screamed, "You fucker! You-!"

    The figure recovered with astonishing speed, climbing to its feet. The Vigilante caught sight of a glint of metal in its hand but he was too slow to avoid it. The scalpel sliced into his belly, and retracted with a sickening sound. The Vigilante felt a sharp pain in his abdomen, but he ignored it, dashing his pistol into the figure's face.

    A satisfying crack was heard as a few teeth flew off. The figure retreated, clutching its jaw as it choked out a curse, blood dripping off its cheeks. The glint flickered again, and this time, the scalpel was driven deep into the Vigilante's chest.

    Screaming, the Vigilante tackled the figure to the ground and hugged him in a vice-like grip. Both figures grappled in the darkness blindly until the Vigilante got on top of the figure.

    Straddling the figure, he pulled out the scalpel from his chest and plunged it into the figure's chest repeatedly.

    One for every cut his wife had suffered. Another for his son which would never see the light of day. Another for the victims, and another for the villagers.

    When the Vigilante was finally done, the figure beneath him lay unmoving, a pool of red spreading steadily from it. Then the Vigilante noticed the sirens.

    Gasping deeply, he got off the figure and staggered off into the darkness.

    The second stab of the Serial Killer had been fatal. He could tell from his wheezing that his lung had been perforated. He had survived countless gunshots and fighting, but he would not survive this one.

    Stumbling, he groped his way out of the village. When he finally arrived at the entrance of the village, his eyes had adjusted to the dark. He limped his way forward determinedly. He could not die here.

    When he finally reached the cliff, his chest was burning and his abdomen was stinging. He collapsed in front of a gravestone.

    Sobbing, his tears dripped onto his bloodied clothing. His eyes clouded over with emotion.

    "I'm sorry, Mary, I'm sorry. I broke our promise and all-" His voice broke as he lapsed into a bout of weak coughing. "B-But I'll join you now. Along with my comrades I never said farewell to."

    As the Vigilante took his last breath, the first light of the amber sun broke over the ocean. The orange glow illuminated the silhouette of a man and tombstone.

    'Sacred to the memory of Mary Margaret Johnson
    wonderful wife, loving sister, beloved by all


    12th January 1974 - 20th May 1999

    Aged 25


    You were my wife; my one and only

    Even if death doth us part,

    Let us be together in heaven.'
     
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  2. Yunchii

    Yunchii Best Waifu - Tamamo-no-Mae

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    Salem of the Heresy?
     
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    ChickenBakuba Well-Known Member

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    What the hell guys it’s from the steam game Town of Salem. Im not too sure but based on what I’ve read from ender’s game salem means peace
     
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    It felt like reading a personalized newspaper's report.

    Plot twist:

    "The Vigilante had found his note on his fiancee's body when he had searched for her pulse."

    The Vigilante wasn't the serial killer, but he was the one who had killed the fiancee and left the note blaming the priest, who had already stopped killing. That's why it said at the begining that it was the reappearance of the killer.

    Traumatized war vet killed his girl in a fit of rage and used a convenient scapegoat to avoid the guilt.

    End of plot twist.
     
  6. ChickenBakuba

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    Lmao i planned for for a plot twist where the vigilante shot some innocent person or shot his own wife but couldn’t think better