Art Sketches of my manga that i love the most

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  1. Sawanara murasaki

    Sawanara murasaki Well-Known Member

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    HY my fav
     
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    DarthOu 《Lord Vader》

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    This is good enough compare to ONE in the first chapter [​IMG]
     
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    It’s really good. Just that I feel that the area of the neck and chin could use some work. Also the limbs like the arms (mainly how the arms kind of narrow or shink as it nears the hand) and tiny hands and legs need some work to make it look more natural and properly proportional.
     
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    [​IMG] not mine!
     
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    what is the pic from VoV from?
     
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    ahuramagina Former Hero Kitty, doing a lot of selfie

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    #1 and #6 looks good.

    The loli couple needs to be a bit more loli. Loli's tends to be a bit more smaller than that. They still look like normal highschoolers.

    And similar to the comment above, the hands needs to be a bit bigger. No need to make fine details but you need the right size for it.

    Maybe look into some facebook pages that draws anime? They usually put out how to draw bodies and body parts.
     
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  8. Nyarlathotep

    Nyarlathotep The laziest and the King of Procrastination

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    I'm pretty sure that is an insult and not a compliment
     
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    ahuramagina Former Hero Kitty, doing a lot of selfie

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    Try looking at Hananon Artworks. Just search it in facebook.
     
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    DarthOu 《Lord Vader》

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    not really, ONE is a successful comic artist, even though his drawing pretty much just scribbling at first. Not to mention, Mob Psycho 100 is also really famous..

    Edit: Oh yeah, my comment earlier is an extension to his thread yesterday(?) about needing a mangaka.
     
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    Nyarlathotep The laziest and the King of Procrastination

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    I know, I loved mob psycho 100 (so sad it has finished), but comparing this guy drawings with his.... (especially at the start of opm, in mob psycho he improves a lot)
     
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    Mostly they're old drawings :)
     
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    Sawanara murasaki Well-Known Member

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    What do you mean? You mean where those characters from?
     
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    Sawanara murasaki Well-Known Member

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    Can you help me (about that thread)?
     
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    Avagantimos Chosen Undead

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    Yeah. Although re-reading the title I’m going to assume they are OCs
     
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    They're characters from my unofficial manga Vampire over Vehicle...Gluck is vampire and Shirai is one of the Imperial Army...they met after shirai and her squad were bombed
     
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    Avagantimos Chosen Undead

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    Is there a way to read your work? It’s the picture I was most interested in
     
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    DarthOu 《Lord Vader》

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    nope, i'm not from Japan, not working in a publishing company, and I can't draw, sorry. All I can do is say good luck, man.
     
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    I'll repost the comic maybe next time. I'm busy till June, mid-year exam
     
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